Upon what I've seen
A Self-Caring Queen
In luxury she bathes
Leaving no waves
In the tub that she fills
Her look gives one chills
And a thirst
Of her first
Words to drink
As we relish to think
That beauty is more
Than what's skin deep, or lying on the shore
Of what we can see
Of what is let free
There's much hidden from view
Letting the imagination run wild, letting it brew
And ruminate on what could there
On what one will share
The bath is no trouble
But there are no bubbles
A smooth base of milk
Skin made softer than silk
Can bring in an audience
Writings of opulence
Writing here, on a list
Of riches she won't miss
Filled to the brim
Of her chalice
She speaks with no malice
Yet a jewel, like herself, must have her own palace
Takes care of herself, so she is not callous
The image is simple
A smile, a dimple
Elegance, there's no lack
Her eyes do make contact
Gaze locked with gaze
A picture last for days
Confidence, beauty, modesty
Displayed
"The Whole World's A Stage"
In comments we comment, one that we engage
So let's see, rephrase
Inspect the words' phrase
From gold to velvet and even the opal
Embraced in porcelain, bathed in a boatful
Of indulgent self-care from her head to her thighs
Below the surface, from her toes to her eyes
Imagery and Words is the path that you take
Enchanting the world, let your words now take Shape
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Author's Notes: Please go read "Bubble Bath Queen" by NikkiDeeFit | Nicole Danielle DeFelice. It was her poetic imagery and words that have inspired mine. Her link is embed above.
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Thank you so much for sharing & for your beautiful response poem! I absolutely love it! :)
Such a gorgeous poem! It's so wholesome to see how Nicole's poem inspired you to write this beauty! I loved your poem so much!