A Cold Hymn Sung Silent
Seeking the sound of first frost
Leaving fleeting footprints
on flattened grass
we arrive at the precious precipice, and peer into
the narthex of the tabernacle of trees
Where philosophy folds in on itself
its questions swirl among falling leaves,
then drop, unanswered to the fertile forest floor
composting into fragments - glimpses of notions
that brush our fingertips, but remain out of reach,
their nascence in repose.
Our footfalls alight on these timeless catacombs
tinged with the reds and oranges of
early autumn's flamestruck floor.
Hands knotted, we traverse roots and rocks
the cold November air
sifting through our fingers
it mingles with the musings
of timber minstrels. They too,
listen for the sound of first frost as
they dance along wrinkled oak branches.
The symphony of cawing crows
in the purple pre-dawn light
echoes an idea of what is possible.
But the forest is still striped and green-gilt,
unwilling to cede its rusting secrets.
So we share a whispered promise to return
When the wind is more limber, and
the sound of first frost is ready to be heard.
So we wait.
And return when the fields are tilled.
In the swollen darkness before late autumn dawn,
once more, we stand at the precipice,
the wind wraps around us,
drawing us closer to each other.
Slivers of cold air evolve into shards,
slicing the warm, slow breath of early autumn
into whipped up whorls of anticipation.
The voices we hear,
the screaming fox,
the grunting buck,
These are the cradles that swaddle
the sound of first frost.
They are cries in the wilderness,
preparing the way, but are we ready for the ritual?
The stone-scented air
bears witness to our weakness
we lower our heads, humbled and supplicant as
the gray and white of autumnal dawn
plunge through growing gaps in the forest canopy,
wistful kisses blossom on the browned ground.
the early autumn flames of red, yellow, orange,
now doused with russet, pastoral grace.
A sparrow's wings shudder as it
settles into its nest, attentive as
the forest is ready to sing its primordial poem
in solemn stanzas among the old wooden pillars.
Now, where no leaves take hold, the softened sunlight
shines upon the altar of the sylvan church and shows us
the starburst embroidery of white,
woven into the cracked, browned edges of leaves.
It is the first frost.
With our eyes closed and
our notions still
just out of reach,
we hear the first frost offer up its sacred sound -
a cold hymn sung silent.
About the Creator
John R. Godwin
Sifting daily through the clutter of my mind trying to create something beautiful.


Comments (8)
Oh, wow....there is such power in your choice of words, it literally stuns my mind and senses. I love the overwhelming alliterative aspects. It's just simply genius....and bloody brilliant in every way.
John, your poem is absolutely beautiful! Congratulations on your winβ£πΉ
Magnificent! Congrats on placing! It is very well-deserved!
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Your poem creates an exquisite, immersive atmosphere, making the forest and first frost feel both sacred and alive. The attention to sensory detail truly transports the reader into the moment.
This is such a beautiful and atmospheric poem. The way you mixed the feeling of nature and deep thought is really wonderful. You made the first frost feel like a sacred moment.
Your descriptions were so vivid and beautiful. Loved your poem!
The imagery here is so rich and immersive. That final βcold hymn sung silentβ gave me chills.