A Bustle in the Hedgerow
Poem: The Ache and the Answer

when art is driven by more than a simple need to pay bills
when art is transcendental and becomes more in others’ minds
when art is the motivator,
the catalyst,
the trigger point,
that art becomes more than just clever words — phrases collected
when poetry makes you feel
when poetry makes you ache
when poetry breaks your heart
that poetry becomes more than —
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just the thoughtful and thoughtless words
of an introspective, overly-fraught traveller
someone with too much time on their hands
facing the void and screaming —
for rhyme and reason —
to make sense of all that has been, that is
and all that will be.
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Sure, the wind howling out its quiet requiem makes for pretty, as the hammering of the woodpecker into the bark of the tree makes for a thundering realisation of the destructive power of even the smallest in the natural world.
Sure, the tides that splash themselves in waves back and forth against the edge of civilisation make for a dramatic and melodramatic concerto of the terrifying untapped power of the unrestrained majesty of the natural elements.
The drip-drop pitter-patter of the rain on the windowpane and ledge, the guttering and the roof of shingles, slate, or something more rustic —
makes for pretty melancholic music on a day that could be best described as inclement and overcast, which serves as some kind of metaphor of ebb and flow, come what may and what may never in your emotional well-being when you are busy listening to the drumming of a heart that has given so much so often and felt it falter from the backlash.
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Tie me to the moon and let me slip between the stars,
I want to look at planet Earth from afar,
where it might hurt less, where the pain might feel distant,
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The pain of what we do to one another,
through choice,
circumstance,
pettiness and
big bad feelings —
emotions,
for intellect and greed, deception and need, hatred and abhorrence.
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I ache for the better, for the better feeling, for something other than dread, anxiety, and pain when I look to our world.
Will the ache ever die out,
will it dull its salt-laced, peppered sting?
My best guess says no, but I always bank on my best guess being second best to the truth.
So, there is hope and not the deluded type, or perhaps it is?
It doesn’t feel deluded to believe in something other than all we know.
Surely, we need believers n the better, to make the better happen?
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Or this could just be a bustle in the hedgerow —
spring clean for the May Queen
there are two paths, you see — much like Frost and Plant opined
it makes me wonder, if the tune will come to us at last,
when we are one and one is all,
to be a rock and not to roll
or, is this just
pestle and mortar grounded reasoning,
stripped of matter, import —
denigrated and designated
for the blowing wind to the east.
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Does the writer decide — the editor dictate?
I wonder, oh I wonder —
or do we just set our words afloat — adrift on the breeze, or at sea
hoping someone — anyone —
takes notice and claps back in response
claps
whether in agreement or not
the challenge is always
to question, to search
to scream at the void —
and
let it answer.
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Another of my all-time favourites, this was written originally for Scuzzbucket on Medium and published on May 23rd, 2025, and you can find the original link below.
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Comments (7)
Such a dynamic piece, Paul! Each stylistic movement made for a powerful progression. The lines "when poetry makes you feel when poetry makes you ache when poetry breaks your heart that poetry becomes more than — just the thoughtful and thoughtless words of an introspective, overly-fraught traveller" in the first part were immediate favorites for me! Fantastic work!
Oh, I really love this, Paul. Especially these beautiful lines: Tie me to the moon and let me slip between the stars, I want to look at planet Earth from afar, where it might hurt less, where the pain might feel distant,
Why does it always seem the answer I get is but a busy signal?
Love love love the line about setting our words afloat. This was fab.
All writers go through questioning the purpose of their work. Lovely stream of conciousness, Paul.
This poem is a wonder, Paul. Filled with awe, angst, terror and woe even while restlessly searching for hope. I love how the poem shifted when you introduced the bustle in the hedgerow line from Stairway to Heaven and also made the connection to Frost’s poem The Road Not Taken (one which never occurred to me before!). Threading the grand with the small and everyday seems like the heart of your artistic wheelhouse, cause you are really good evoking the feels with it!
To me this poem reads like a sermon and the choices we all make at various times in our living our lives. Good job.