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A bottomless Pit For My Heart

You killed my love. You killed my heart. You killed me.

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2024

A bottomless Pit For My Heart

I dropped my heart into a bottomless pit,

watched it tumble, weightless, dimly lit.

No echo followed, no final thud,

just silence swallowing pulse and blood.

Did it shatter, or does it still fall,

drifting deeper past memory’s call?

I reach, but nothing meets my hands,

no path, no end, no place to land.

Maybe it floats where lost things dwell,

adrift in hush, too deep to tell.

Or maybe it lingers, a phantom beat,

somewhere far beneath my feet.

But as I die, let it be known—

you left me with a broken heart,

that hurt so much it had to be thrown.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Anthony Dunn 12 months ago

    Bravo 👏

  • Denise E Lindquist12 months ago

    Great poetry!❤️

  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    Out of the midst of despair this is one way to survive a broken heart and wonder if love is for real. Good job.

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