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A Bird at Heart

A Haiku

By RPPublished 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - August 2023
A Bird at Heart
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Am I a true bird,

if I never fly again

or an imposter?

***

You could lose your beak

or evolve to teleport.

Still would be a bird.

nature poetryinspirational

About the Creator

RP

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  • Arshad Ali9 months ago

    Wonderful to read **"We want people- to have peace in their dreams. He protects them for me. That's why I say every night... O Allah, keep the one I love, well.'

  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    And therein lie lessons galore! Insightful!

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    Congratulations your poem truly explains the bird at heart.

  • Fantastic

  • Jack Thompson2 years ago

    Beautiful parrots

  • Jack Thompson2 years ago

    Beautiful parrots

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Very profound poetry πŸ₯°

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Very philosophical! Great work Real Poetic!! β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘πŸ‘ & congrats on your top story.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Brilliant haiku!!!

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    Lovely haiku!

  • Missclicked2 years ago

    wonderful! congratulations on top story!

  • Rob Angeli2 years ago

    Wonderful pair of haiku! And a profound line of questioning sparked here. Congrats on your beautiful Top Story!

  • Gen-Z Writes.2 years ago

    Congratulations on your top story β™₯️

  • Ashley Lima2 years ago

    This is breathtaking!

  • Joelle E N2 years ago

    Nice message ❀️ congrats on TS!

  • Congratulations!!!! β€οΈβœ¨πŸ™πŸŽ‰

  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story! πŸ’•

  • Great work and congratulations!

  • S. C. Almanzar2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story, very interesting work! A bird is a bird no matter a few modifications.

  • Congratulations on This Sweet Top StoryπŸŽ‰πŸ˜‰πŸ‘ŒπŸ’―

  • Test2 years ago

    So cool-I really loved the message in this.And beautifully written as always! Congrats on TS! 🀍

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Yes, you would. Teleporting bird made me laugh but there is a deeper message too, I think, which I rather like. Congrats on TS!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Beautiful! Well done on Top Story!

  • ThatWriterWoman2 years ago

    Gorgeous! Always yourself - no matter what!

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