I sobbed
Oh yes, I did.
I felt fooled.
Just after
catching them
together in bed.
Finding out
what they did
destroyed my soul.
They both betrayed me.
They were secretly in love.
I thought she was my friend.
I thought he was my lover.
They ran away.
I was left in tears.
What a friend I had
a betrayal
a snake
I hate her.
I hate him too.
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Gloria Penelope
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Very touching and sad.
Both of them need to be tortured slowly to death and then rot in hell!
Wow ! this was powerful. Anything going on personally or just fun writing?
Full of powerful emotion!