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A Poem

By Atomic HistorianPublished about a year ago 1 min read
9/16/24
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The mind sees what the eyes refuse to see

The road to hell is paved with well behaved slaves

Constructing staves to save my mind

From the unreality of this time

All whining and chiming in

On what should be

Yet, the reality is

None of them are where or what they wanted to be

Forced to choose the reality

Of an acceptable life

Most often dying to the idea of striving for more

Dreams torn from our minds

Dithering until we’re nothing more

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Atomic Historian

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  • Snarky Lisaabout a year ago

    Damn, this cut deep.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic!!! Loved you line, "None of them are where or what they wanted to be."❤️❤️💕

  • BrettNotGregabout a year ago

    Fantastic poem!

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