5.11
The Road Drops Here

5.11
I’m thrown forward
Onto the pavement
Onto my hands and face.
I taste blood.
My nose is bleeding
And broken.
My glasses are gone.
I can’t see, but I can hear.
Screaming, someone is screaming.
Something is screaming.
My scraped palms push me up
Into Cobra Pose,
Wiggling and itching on my forearms
And now on my face.
So much screaming.
I wipe my face.
Now the wiggling is on my hands.
It’s moving.
Hundreds of little things moving.
And screaming.
What have I landed on?
Where are my glasses?
I inch forward, reaching for them.
The screaming intensifies.
I put the glasses on.
The lenses are scratched.
The wiggling is on my shirt.
In my shirt.
They’re not ants.
They’re people.
Tiny people.
And I’ve crushed and killed
Most of them.
Suddenly a shadow
Blocks out the sun.
I look up to see
Black stars.
The tread of a combat boot
Walking forward
Shaking the earth.
I hear loud laughter
Coming from the sky
And then I’m gone.
We’re all gone.
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Comments (2)
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This felt like a fever dream. Loved your poem!