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1.2 Watching, Waiting

The ache of seeing others soar while standing still.

By Anu's QuillPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

They rise like dawn—

peers ascendant, junior aloft—

and here i stand,

still as a shadow,

wishing i were light.

They hail my mind's flame—

but fire without fuel

is just smoke in the dark.

Sparks flash,

pressure kindles brief flame—

then darkness claims the spark.

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Anu's Quill

I’m just an existential wanderer who happened to stumble into poetry. I think about writing more than I actually write—not the best poet, but trying to get better, word by word, as I share my thoughts and voice.

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