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Like a hot summer day
You plant the hose in between your imprinted hands from your bike handle riding all day long, all tangled up (no helmet on, racing neighborhood boys)
Like a snake so you try your best to unkink it
You turn on it, rickety and rusty and noisy handle
And you drink the hot water like it's Kool-Aid
Until it's a little cool
And you soak it up like a sponge
Summer can't end here
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By Melissa Ingoldsby3 years ago in Poets
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Memories of childhood & mom's rule, "You're either in or out." (No going back & forth.) Drinks from the garden hose & snacks from the rhubarb patch.
Gotta love summer. Great verse and keep up the good work!
Like Cathy said, everything is hot. I turn on the cold water to shower and that comes out hot! Loved your poem Merly!
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Everything is hot, even the water. Summer, too hot right now. Nicely done.