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The Train to Rosewood

Romance story

By Yogesh AcharyaPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

Every morning, the 8:12 train from Briarcliff to Rosewood pulled into Platform Two with the same mechanical sigh. And every morning, Eleanor Hayes sat on the third bench from the left, with her leather-bound sketchbook and black coffee cooling beside her.

She had always loved routine — the kind that didn’t ask questions, the kind that offered quiet, predictable company. That was until he started taking the same train.

It was early April when she first noticed him. He was reading The Bell Jar, a novel Eleanor had hidden under her mattress at age sixteen, afraid her mother might mistake it for a cry for help. She remembered the ache of that book — how it had understood her before she had understood herself.

He had messy, sun-touched curls and wore a mustard-yellow scarf that made him look like a misplaced autumn leaf. Every day he boarded the same car, leaned his shoulder against the window, and read — never looking up, never noticing her.

Until the day he dropped the book.

It skidded across the floor and landed near Eleanor’s feet. She picked it up, brushing the frayed cover gently before holding it out. Their hands touched — briefly, just enough to spark something quiet and warm in her chest.

“Thanks,” he said, with a smile that didn’t quite fit the gray morning.

“No problem,” she replied, surprising herself with her voice.

The next day, he sat beside her.

His name was Theo. He was a freelance writer, obsessed with forgotten poets and stories that lived between subway graffiti. He had a crooked front tooth and a laugh that didn’t sound like it belonged in a train station — loud, bright, unapologetic.

Eleanor, who had spent most of her life observing the world through charcoal and paint, suddenly found herself being seen. Really seen.

They began to share coffee. Books. Thoughts about life and why people always seemed to miss the beauty right in front of them. She sketched him one day without asking — and when she showed him, he looked at the drawing like it was something holy.

“You made me look like someone worth knowing,” he whispered.

“You are,” she replied.

Spring melted into early summer, and the train became their quiet world. They never exchanged numbers, never made plans outside of that daily ride. It was as if both were afraid to touch the delicate thing they’d built — like naming it would break the spell.

One morning, Eleanor came to the station and Theo wasn’t there.

The train pulled in. The doors opened. She waited.

Nothing.

He didn’t come the next day, or the day after that.

For a week, the train arrived and left with the same cold punctuality, but Eleanor’s world felt unmoored.

She began to wonder if he had been a figment of loneliness — a story she told herself to make mornings softer.

Then, on the ninth day, there was a note on her usual bench.

“Sorry I disappeared. My father passed. Had to go to Devon. I didn’t know how to say goodbye. - Theo”

Her hands trembled as she reread it. And then, underneath in smaller script:

“P.S. I’m coming back. If you'll still sit with me.”

He returned the following Monday, thinner, quieter, but still him. They didn’t speak at first. They just sat in their usual seats, hands close, pinkies barely touching. Then, after a few minutes, she slipped her fingers into his.

He looked at her like she was the answer to a question he didn’t know he’d asked.

That summer, they finally left the train.

They met at a second-hand bookstore halfway between their neighbourhoods. He brought her a daisy and a dog-eared copy of Neruda’s love poems. She brought him a sketch of the train window, with two figures leaning toward each other like vines.

They had coffee. Walked along the river. Watched a storm roll in and kissed beneath a red umbrella as thunder growled overhead.

Love, Eleanor realized, didn’t have to arrive loudly. Sometimes it slid into your life like a train on worn tracks — steady, inevitable, soft at the edges.

Six months later, on a quiet October evening, Theo knelt in the middle of Platform Two.

He held a ring the color of moonlight.

“I met you here,” he said, voice shaking. “And I want to keep meeting you — every day, for the rest of my life.”

Tears blurred the edges of her world.

“Yes,” she whispered, because anything louder might have broken her.

Years passed. They moved into a flat with slanted floors and windows that caught golden hour just right. Eleanor painted. Theo wrote. They fought about laundry and made up over late-night pancakes.

And every anniversary, they took the 8:12 train to Rosewood, holding hands like teenagers, smiling at bench three like it had once saved them.

Because maybe it had.

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