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The Horse and Rider

Riding the Edge of Destiny

By Majeed AfridiPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

The wind rolled across the plains like a living thing—soft at first, then rising into a howl that spoke of storm and memory. Beneath the bruised sky, a lone rider moved steadily, cloaked in dust, shadow, and silence. His horse, a dark bay named Kael, walked with the ease of one who knew every grain of sand beneath his hooves.

The rider’s name was Renn.

He was not a soldier, not a noble, not a hero in the way stories might define one. He carried no banners, only a weathered saddle and the weight of promises made long ago.

Kael had been with him since youth—before the wars, before the scars, before the silence.

Renn had once been a boy with a voice that laughed. Now he was a man with eyes that listened more than lips that spoke. Kael had never needed words.

Their journey that day was not for glory. It was for a girl named Maren, the last child of a village swallowed by fire, hiding deep in the forest beyond the Ashen Hills. Raiders had taken her family. Only she had escaped, and it was said she waited in the ruins, starving, afraid.

The village elders had whispered of her fate, but none would go.

None but Renn.

Because he knew what it was to be left behind.

The journey was long. The land stretched endlessly, broken by jagged stone and patches of withered trees. Thunder murmured on the horizon. Kael’s hooves fell in perfect rhythm with Renn’s thoughts.

When the storms came, they moved through it like ghosts. Kael never faltered, never hesitated. Even as lightning danced close enough to light the whites of his eyes, he pressed on.

Renn remembered when they first met.

Kael had been a wild colt—untamable, violent, dangerous. The stable master had warned him.

But Renn had not approached Kael with rope or rod.

He had sat in silence, waiting.

It had taken days. But Kael came to him—wary, but willing. A creature of storm choosing stillness.

And now, years later, they rode as one.

By the third day, the trees grew thick. The forest clawed at them, branches like reaching hands. The air was damp with rot and sorrow.

And then—stillness.

Kael stopped. Ears turned forward.

Renn slid from the saddle, hand on the hilt of his knife, though he hoped not to use it.

Then—movement. A flicker behind fallen beams.

A face. Dirty, pale, eyes wide with fear and hunger.

Maren.

Renn stepped forward slowly, hands empty.

“It’s alright,” he said softly. “I came for you.”

She didn’t answer. Her eyes darted to the horse.

Kael, as if knowing, stepped beside Renn and lowered his head. His breath was steady, warm. The girl didn’t flinch.

Instead, she reached out—and touched his mane.

And something shifted.

She came out from the ruins, barefoot, wrapped in a torn shawl, trembling but alive.

Renn lifted her onto Kael’s back and walked beside them. The storm had passed, but the wind remained, carrying the scent of rain and the weight of everything left unsaid.

The journey back was slower.

Maren slept often, clinging to Kael’s neck. Renn kept close, watching the road, watching the sky, watching her.

Kael carried her as if she weighed nothing, as if this was always what he was meant to do—not charge into battle or win races, but carry the broken back into the world.

When they reached the edge of the village, the sun was rising. Gold spilled over the hills like blessing. The people gathered, silent, staring.

Renn lifted Maren from the saddle and into her aunt’s arms.

Tears came then—from the girl, from the family, from those who thought her lost.

But Renn said nothing.

Kael stood still beside him, ears flicking, watching too.

They did not stay for praise or thanks.

They turned, and rode on.

Riders like Renn are not remembered in ballads.

Horses like Kael are not carved into statues.

But in the quiet, in the spaces between storms, in the hearts of those saved and the souls of those lost—there is a rhythm.

Hoofbeats and heartbeats.

Motion and meaning.

A story passed from silence to silence.

Of a horse.

Of a rider.

And the road they never stopped following.

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About the Creator

Majeed Afridi

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