Elijah’s Silent Battle
The deepest wounds are the ones unseen

He never looked behind him.
Elijah was a man who walked like fire bright, bold, and with a certain silence that warned people not to get too close. He was the kind of person who could walk into a room and make the lights feel insecure. Yet, despite his presence, no one really knew him.
Not even himself.
For years, Elijah had lived under the weight of a shadow his own. But this was no ordinary shadow. It didn’t merely follow him in light. It whispered. It mocked. It remembered things he wished he hadn’t done. It dragged behind him the guilt of lost friendships, decisions he couldn't reverse, and words he never should've said.
No matter where he went, the shadow came too long, looming, louder than ever in the stillness of night.
One day, he heard about an old hermit who lived atop the Pale Ridge a man rumored to have once rid himself of his own shadow. Desperate, Elijah packed nothing but silence and questions, and set off.
The climb was cruel. Each step higher seemed to stretch his shadow farther behind him, like it resisted his escape. But when he finally reached the summit, he found not a wise old man meditating in peace but a small, unremarkable hut with a single mirror leaning against a cracked stone wall.
Inside stood an elderly man with no reflection.
“You came to burn it,” the man said before Elijah could speak.
“How did you know?”
“I’ve heard your shadow screaming all the way from here,” he replied, eyes tired but oddly compassionate.
“I want it gone,” Elijah said. “It’s... choking me.”
The man nodded slowly, then reached for a candle. “Burning a shadow is easy. The hard part is what replaces it.”
That night, they began the ritual. Elijah stood barefoot under the full moon, surrounded by salt and ash. The hermit lit the candle and held it behind Elijah’s back.
The flame didn’t touch skin. It touched memory.
Suddenly, Elijah saw everything at once his failures, the betrayals, the things he had buried under years of denial. He saw his father’s disappointed eyes. He saw a letter he never mailed. He saw the friend he left in a hospital waiting room without saying goodbye.
His knees buckled, but the flame didn’t stop. It moved through him, not to destroy, but to reveal.
When it was over, he lay in the ashes, trembling. The hermit handed him a mirror. “Look.”
Elijah stared.
No shadow.
But his eyes his eyes were different. They held the storm now. The things he had avoided, the pain he had hidden they had not disappeared.
They had moved inside him.
“Where did it go?” he whispered.
“You absorbed it,” the hermit said. “That is what it means to be free.”
Elijah stayed on the mountain for three more days, learning to live without an external shadow. Learning to carry the weight inward where he could control it, face it, even forgive it.
When he descended, he moved slower, but lighter. People noticed the change. Some said he looked brighter. Others said he looked haunted. But for the first time, Elijah didn’t care what they saw.
Because he knew what he carried and he was no longer afraid of it.
Author’s Note:
We all have shadows echoes of things we wish we could forget. But what if the path to peace isn’t in escaping them, but owning them? What if true freedom begins not when the past disappears, but when it stops defining you?
"In the silence of his solitude, Elijah found a fragile hope flickering like a distant beacon through the shadows of his pain."
Some men carry swords.
Others carry silence.
But the bravest carry their shadows—inside.
Thank you Very much for Reading!❤️



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