Aethel's Glimmer
Elias Vance wagered everything—his reputation, his fortune, his very sanity—on a legend whispered only by the desperate sea.

The 'Odyssey' was anything but. A rust-pocked tub, bought with the last of Elias Vance's inheritance and every cent he could borrow against the house he hadn't seen in years. The salt spray stung his eyes, a constant reminder of the ocean's indifference, but he didn't blink. Not anymore. Thirty years, thirty years of scoffing from academics, snickers from fellow divers who thought they knew what 'deep' meant. They called Aethel a myth, a drunken sailor's tale. He called it his life’s work. His obsession. His damnation, maybe.
His hands, gnarled and scarred, tightened on the cold railing. Below, the sonar screen flickered, a green ghost in the dim cabin. Just noise. Always just noise. But something different about this ping, a faint, almost imperceptible whisper from a depth no sane person bothered with. Four thousand meters. That’s where the legends put it, a city of glass, swallowed whole, ages ago. He’d gone down three times this week, each dive costing more in oxygen, more in scraped faith, than the last. His old suit, patched countless times, groaned under the pressure, a warning he chose to ignore.
“Another one, Elias?” Jax, his sole crewman, a kid barely out of his teens, asked, his voice flat. Jax was only there for the pay, meager as it was. No belief, just a job. Elias grunted, pulling on the heavy boots. “You got somethin’ better to do?” Jax just shrugged, turning back to his grimy paperback. This was how it was. Just him and the sea, and the weight of impossible hope. His knees ached. His back screamed. Every joint protested the strain of the equipment, the simple act of standing. He was fifty-eight, felt eighty. The salt air did things to a man’s bones, inside and out.
The submersible, 'The Challenger II,' ironically named, was barely seaworthy. A sphere of reinforced steel, barely enough room to breathe. He ran his hand over the worn controls, each button and lever a familiar extension of his own battered will. This was it, he knew it in his gut. The last of the air tanks were filled. The last of his savings were gone. If this didn't pan out, he was finished. Not just financially, but inside. Empty. He’d stared at the blank wall of a dead-end dive too many times, the crushing weight of nothingness. He couldn't do it again.
He sealed himself in, the hatch hissing shut, a final, metallic sigh. The descent was always the worst part. An hour, sometimes more, of utter darkness, the pressure gauges climbing, the steel groaning like a tortured beast. Thoughts, unwanted, unbidden, clawed at his mind: the faces of those who laughed, the empty bank account, the silence of his small, lonely apartment. What if they were right? What if he was just an old fool chasing shadows? The cold seeped in, a chill that went bone-deep, beyond the steel hull. He gripped the controls, knuckles white, forcing the thoughts down, pushing them away.
The sonar pinged again, a little stronger now. A ripple. Not noise this time. A structure. A distinct, repeating pattern. His breath hitched, a dry rasp in his throat. He leaned forward, eyes glued to the screen, willing the signal to hold. The Challenger II continued its slow plunge, the lights on the outside cutting through the inky blackness, revealing nothing but suspended particulate. Deeper. Always deeper. The oxygen alarm gave a faint, polite *bip*, a pre-emptive warning. He ignored it. He was almost there. He had to be.
Then, a shimmer. Not a reflection of his own lights, but an internal glow. A faint, alien light from below. It grew, slowly, agonizingly, resolving into impossible forms. Columns. Arches. Domes. Not dull rock, not dark coral, but… glass. Faceted, fractured, ancient glass. A city. A genuine, honest-to-god city, shimmering like a forgotten jewel, thousands of meters beneath the waves. It wasn’t pristine, not some fairytale kingdom. It was shattered in places, coated in eons of silt, but undeniably, impossibly, there. He could see faint etchings, patterns on the walls, catching the faintest hint of his sub’s lights, refracting them into spectral rainbows that died almost as quickly as they appeared.
His hand, trembling, reached for the camera controls. Click. Click. Click. Documentation. Proof. His mind raced, a thousand thoughts colliding, but mostly, one profound, visceral feeling: He had been right. All of it, the sacrifice, the ridicule, the endless, grinding dives, the solitude—it was worth it. Every single agonizing moment. A tear, hot and defiant, traced a path down his weathered cheek, mixing with the sweat on his neck. The 'Odyssey' above, the young man Jax reading his book, the world that had forgotten him—it all faded. Only Aethel existed now, glowing faintly in the abyss. His oxygen gauge dipped again, another polite *bip*. He pressed his face against the cold viewport, staring, just staring, at the impossibly real city of glass.
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HAADI
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