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A Promise in the Rain

Where Love Lives On, Even After Goodbye

By Mirhadi TahsinPublished about a year ago 6 min read

It was the kind of love that seemed too perfect to be real—the kind that felt like a fairy tale, like something straight out of the movies. But no one ever told you how painful the ending of a perfect love story could be.

Lena and Jack met in a way that seemed written in the stars.

It was a spring afternoon, and Lena had just moved to the small town of Everwood. Her life was in pieces, having recently lost both her parents in a car accident. The grief still gripped her, the weight of it heavy, suffocating. She came to Everwood to start over, to escape the overwhelming memories that clung to her in the city. The town was quiet, peaceful—exactly what she needed.

One afternoon, while wandering through the town square, she stumbled into an old, little bookstore. It was dusty, with creaky wooden floors and shelves stacked with novels from every era. As she was perusing the shelves, she noticed him.

Jack.

He was sitting by the window, his head buried in a book, his dark hair messy, his face lost in thought. He had the kind of look that made you believe he had a thousand untold stories in his eyes. He wasn’t the type of man you noticed at first—until you did. And then, you couldn’t stop.

Lena was so absorbed in his quiet presence that she didn’t notice the book she was reaching for was slightly out of her grasp. Her hand brushed his. The contact was fleeting, but the spark it ignited was undeniable. She quickly pulled her hand away, startled by the warmth of it, by the way her heart had skipped a beat.

Jack looked up, his eyes locking with hers. They both froze for a moment, like time itself had paused just for them.

“I’m sorry,” Lena stammered, her face turning red.

“No need to apologize,” Jack smiled, a soft, knowing smile. “I’m just glad it wasn’t my coffee you spilled.”

Lena laughed, the first time she had done so since she arrived in Everwood. It felt good, like a weight lifting. Jack, sensing something deeper beneath her smile, stood and offered her the book she had been reaching for. It was a worn copy of The Great Gatsby—a novel Lena had always loved.

“I think you’ll like this one,” he said gently.

They talked for hours after that. Books, movies, music, everything. It was like they had known each other forever, like they had always been meant to find each other. Lena felt something stir inside her—a feeling that she hadn’t had in a long time. For the first time since the accident, she felt alive again.

And Jack—he had been living in the shadows of his own grief. His father, his best friend, his brother—each one of them had died in tragic circumstances, leaving him alone in the world. He had built walls around his heart, telling himself that no one would ever be able to break through. But then Lena came along, with her quiet sadness, her gentle smile, and a pain that seemed to mirror his own.

As the months passed, Lena and Jack grew inseparable. They were a pair, like two puzzle pieces that fit together perfectly, completing each other in ways neither had thought possible. They explored the town together, spent long afternoons talking about their hopes and dreams, their fears and regrets. Jack was the first person who made Lena feel that maybe, just maybe, it was okay to hope again.

And Lena—she was Jack’s light in the darkness. She made him believe in second chances, in the possibility of love, in the beauty of a future that hadn’t been written yet. With her, he could breathe again.

One rainy afternoon, they sat on the porch of Jack’s house, a small cottage near the edge of the forest, watching the rain fall in sheets. The sound of it was soothing, like nature itself was comforting them. Jack turned to Lena, his eyes searching hers, as if trying to memorize every detail of her face.

“Lena,” he began, his voice soft but steady, “I know we’ve both been through so much… but I can’t imagine my life without you. I don’t want to imagine it.”

Lena’s heart skipped a beat. She had been waiting for this moment, but hearing the words out loud made everything feel more real, more fragile. She reached out to take his hand.

“I feel the same way, Jack,” she whispered, her voice barely audible above the sound of the rain. “You’re… everything to me.”

He smiled, and for a moment, Lena thought she saw tears in his eyes, though he quickly blinked them away.

“I need to tell you something,” he said, his tone serious, almost hesitant. “There’s something I’ve been carrying with me… something that I’ve never told anyone.”

Lena frowned, concerned. “What is it?”

Jack took a deep breath, his fingers tightening around hers. “I have cancer. It’s advanced… the doctors gave me six months, maybe a year.”

Lena’s world tilted. She felt the blood drain from her face, her chest tightening, as if she couldn’t breathe. She looked at Jack, seeing the vulnerability in his eyes. Seeing the truth, raw and painful, written on his face.

“You—” She gasped, shaking her head. “Jack, no. You can’t be serious. You can’t—”

“I didn’t want you to find out this way,” Jack said softly, his voice breaking. “I wanted to give you more. I wanted to give us more time. But I need you to know the truth.”

Lena was silent for a long time, her heart shattering, a thousand pieces falling away. This couldn’t be happening. She couldn’t lose him. Not after everything they had been through. Not after they had finally found each other.

But as the rain poured harder, Lena realized something: she wasn’t going to let him go. Not without fighting, not without giving everything she had.

“I love you, Jack,” she said, her voice breaking through the storm. “I love you, and I don’t care how much time we have left. I will spend every single second of it with you.”

The next months were a blur. Jack’s health deteriorated slowly but steadily. There were days when he was still the man she had fallen in love with—strong, full of life, still joking, still holding her hand—but there were more days when he was fragile, pale, his energy drained, his body slowly failing him. Lena stayed by his side through it all, refusing to leave, even when he told her to go, to find a life without the shadow of his illness.

She refused.

One winter evening, the snow fell gently outside, covering the town in a soft, quiet blanket. Jack’s breathing had become labored, and his eyes were distant. He lay in their bed, holding Lena’s hand, his once strong fingers now weak.

“Lena,” he whispered, his voice barely audible. “Promise me… promise me that you’ll keep living. Promise me you’ll find joy again.”

Lena’s eyes filled with tears. She couldn’t speak, her throat constricted with the weight of everything they had shared, everything they would never have. She leaned down and kissed his forehead, holding him tighter than she ever thought possible.

“I promise, Jack,” she whispered, her voice breaking. “I promise I’ll keep living. But I’ll always love you. You’ll always be my heart.”

And with that, Jack’s eyes closed, the softest of smiles on his face. He was gone.

Lena never forgot Jack. She never stopped loving him. But over time, she learned to live again. She moved to a new town, started a new life, though part of her always carried Jack with her. And every year, on the anniversary of his death, she would return to Everwood, to the bookstore where it all began. She would sit in the corner by the window, a book in her hands, waiting for him to walk through the door.

And in her heart, she knew he was still there. Still with her. In every rainstorm, in every whispered promise, in every memory they had shared.

Their love wasn’t a story with a perfect ending. It was a story of loss, of pain, and of the enduring power of love that never really ends.

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About the Creator

Mirhadi Tahsin

Passionate writer from Bangladesh,crafting stories that explore love,loss,and human connections.Through heartfelt narratives I aim to inspire,evoke emotions,and leave lasting impressions.Join me on Vocal Media for tales that touch the soul.

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  • C.Z.about a year ago

    So sad 😭 would love a follow-up to see how Lena learns to deal with this.

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