The Secret Of The Whispering Mountain
Whispering Mountain

In a small village called Eldermist, there was an old story that everyone knew. The story was about a big mountain far away, called the Whispering Mountain.
The people in the village said the mountain was very special. It had a secret power that could change anyone who tried to find it.
Some people went to the mountain and never returned, while others came back changed in ways no one could understand.
A young boy named Kael grew up in this village. He always heard the old story, but he didn’t believe it.
He was curious and brave. He wanted to know what was on top of that mountain, so one day, he decided to go.
Kael’s father, who was a strong hunter, had warned him many times not to go near the mountain.
“That mountain is not for people like you, Kael,” his father would say. “It has taken many people before you. It changes them or makes them disappear.”
But Kael didn’t listen. He knew he had to find out what the mountain was hiding. So, one day, early in the morning,
Kael packed a small bag with food, water, and a knife his father had given him. He said goodbye to his family and started walking towards the mountain.
The Path Up The Mountain
The path was long and difficult. The trees in the forest were thick, and the way was not clear.
But Kael was determined. He walked for many days, climbing hills and crossing rivers.
The higher he climbed, the colder it got, and the air became thinner. But Kael didn’t stop.
He thought about the old stories of the mountain and felt that he was getting closer to something important.
On the seventh day of his journey, Kael finally reached the foot of the mountain. It was bigger than he had ever imagined.
The ground was covered in snow, and the trees looked old and twisted. A cold mist filled the air, and everything was silent.
Kael’s heart started to race as he looked up at the mountain. He could feel something strange around him, like the mountain was alive and watching him.
The Whispers Of The Mountain
As Kael climbed up the mountain, he started to hear whispers. They were soft at first, like the wind moving through the trees.
But the closer he got to the top, the louder the whispers became. It was as if the mountain was speaking to him, telling him secrets.
Kael didn’t understand the whispers, but he felt like they were leading him to something.
On the last day of his climb, Kael reached a large cave at the top of the mountain. Inside the cave, the walls glowed with a strange light.
In the middle of the cave was a big stone altar. The whispers grew louder, and Kael felt his heart beat faster. He knew he had reached the heart of the mountain.
The Truth of the Mountain's Power
Suddenly, a voice spoke from the darkness. “Welcome, Kael,” it said. “You have come far, but do you understand what you seek?”
Kael was scared, but he answered, “I want to know the secret of this mountain. What power does it hold?”
The voice replied, “The power you seek is not a gift. It comes with a price. The mountain will change you, or it will take you.”
Kael felt afraid, but he couldn’t turn back now. He stepped forward, his hands shaking as he reached out to touch the altar.
The moment his hand touched the stone, everything went silent. The whispers stopped. The strange light faded.
Kael closed his eyes, and for a moment, he felt as if he was floating in a different world.
He saw flashes of people who had come before him—people who had tried to take the mountain’s power.
The Decision
When Kael opened his eyes again, the cave was gone. He was standing in a dark, empty place. A figure appeared in front of him.
It was tall and covered in a dark cloak. The figure spoke in a soft voice, “You have come for the mountain’s power.
But remember, power is not always a gift. Sometimes, it is a burden.”
Kael stood still, trying to understand the figure’s words. The figure continued, “The true power of the mountain is not to change the world, but to understand it.
You must choose—will you take the power, or will you leave it behind?”
Kael thought for a moment. He had come so far, but now he realized something. The mountain didn’t want him to take its power.
It wanted him to understand that some things were better left alone. With that thought, Kael decided to leave.
He didn’t need the mountain’s power to be strong. He had already learned that the greatest strength was knowing when to walk away.
The Return Home
As Kael made his way down the mountain, the whispers faded away. He felt lighter, as if a weight had been lifted from his shoulders.
The journey had taught him something important. Sometimes, the greatest adventure is not about finding power, but about finding peace with yourself.
Kael returned to his village, and though he never spoke of what happened on the mountain, he knew he had learned something that would stay with him forever.
The Whispering Mountain had shared its secret—not through power, but through wisdom.
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Hamid Hussain Shah
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Beautiful story with lesson learnt. Thanks for sharing.
Fabulous story