The Old Woman Who Disappeared Before My Eyes
I greeted her, she smiled, whispered a dua… and then vanished. No footsteps. No shadow. No explanation.

The Old Woman Who Disappeared Before My Eyes
It was a quiet Sunday morning.
The kind of morning where the world still seems half-asleep — hushed, sacred, untouched. I was walking back home from Fajr prayer. The streets were still cold with the remnants of night, the sky dipped in a soft, dim blue. Birds were only just beginning to stir, and the trees stood still like sentinels. The lane I walked was always empty at this hour.
But not that day.
That day… someone was there.
An old woman.
Dressed entirely in white — from her scarf to her long, modest dress. She stood just ahead near the corner lamp post, barely visible in the low light, holding a small cloth bundle close to her chest.
She wasn’t moving. Not pacing. Not sitting. Just standing quietly, as if waiting for something — or someone. Her stillness was not alarming, but unusual enough to catch my attention.
I slowed my pace as I approached her.
> “Assalamu Alaikum, Amma,” I said softly.
She turned to me.
Her face was aged, full of fine lines, but peaceful — almost serene. But what truly caught me off guard were her eyes: they were strikingly youthful, deep and bright. Eyes that looked like they had seen everything, suffered much, and yet forgotten nothing.
She smiled.
> “Walaikum Assalam, beta. May your days be filled with light, and your nights protected.”
Her voice was barely a whisper, like wind brushing over silk. It wasn’t weak — it was gentle. There was something deeply calming about her presence.
Then, she paused. Her head tilted slightly to the side, eyes focusing on something invisible — something beyond me, just past my shoulder.
And in the second I blinked…
She was gone.
—
I don’t mean she walked away.
I don’t mean she turned a corner.
I mean — she vanished.
She was no longer there.
Not behind the pole.
Not down the street.
Not anywhere.
No footsteps. No sound. No fading silhouette.
Just… gone.
—
I stood frozen. Then I ran forward, scanning the street in both directions, heart pounding.
Silence.
The breeze stirred a leaf near my foot. The sky slowly brightened above. But there was no sign of her. The street had returned to its familiar emptiness.
Except for one thing — her dua still echoed in my ears.
> “May your nights be protected.”
—
The entire day, I couldn’t shake it off.
Was I hallucinating?
Was it a trick of the light? A figment of a tired mind?
But no — I remembered every detail. Her scarf. The delicate wrinkles of her hands. The tiny scar on her left thumb. The exact tone of her voice.
That night, I almost died.
While sleeping, a gas leak silently filled my room. The heater had malfunctioned. I was unconscious, barely aware — until I suddenly woke up, choking, seconds before it could have been too late.
I stumbled out, collapsed in the hallway gasping for air.
At the hospital, the doctor said:
> “Another minute or two, and you wouldn’t have woken up at all.”
I remembered her.
The old woman.
Her words. Her smile. Her unseen warning.
—
The next morning, I went back to that street.
Same time. Same spot.
Empty.
I asked around — neighbors, vendors, early risers.
No one had seen any woman like that.
One old shopkeeper paused thoughtfully and said:
> “There used to be a woman like that. Kind, always praying for people. Died two years ago.”
> “Do you know her name?” I asked.
> “Amma Nafeesa, we called her. No family. Lived down the alley. Passed in her sleep.”
> “Did she wear white?” I asked.
> “Always.”
—
I went to her old house. It was boarded up, abandoned.
But on the wooden door, faded and dusty, someone had written in chalk:
> “Allah keeps His friends where He wills.”
—
Since that day… I’ve never looked at strangers the same way.
I greet every elder with care.
I treasure every small blessing.
And I never doubt the unseen.
Because sometimes — a stranger’s smile is not of this world.
Sometimes — a dua comes in the form of someone who was never really there.
About the Creator
Noman Afridi
I’m Noman Afridi — welcome, all friends! I write horror & thought-provoking stories: mysteries of the unseen, real reflections, and emotional truths. With sincerity in every word. InshaAllah.



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