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False Paradise

"Some utopias are prisons in disguise." "When everything looks perfect, trust nothing."

By Mir Ahmad KhanPublished 9 months ago 4 min read
"In a world of dreams, reality is the real enemy."

The first time Ethan saw Haven Ridge, it felt like a dream.

The town stretched along a glistening coastline, framed by towering palms and endless blue skies. Colorful homes lined the cobblestone streets, laughter floated through the salty air, and every face wore a smile. It was perfect — almost too perfect.

Ethan had come to Haven Ridge to escape. After a crushing layoff, a failed relationship, and the suffocating grayness of the city, he needed somewhere fresh, somewhere untouched by disappointment. Haven Ridge, with its promise of endless summer and new beginnings, seemed like salvation.

At first, everything was blissful. Locals welcomed him with open arms, offering homemade pies and invitations to beach bonfires. He found a quaint little house to rent at the edge of town, where bougainvillea vines spilled over whitewashed fences. Days blurred into golden afternoons, and nights into starlit dances. For the first time in years, Ethan let himself breathe.

But soon, little things began to prick at the edges of his paradise.

It started with the markets. The same fruits — perfectly ripe, impossibly sweet — appeared every day, never wilting, never changing. The shopkeepers, too, wore the same clothes, their smiles never faltering, their greetings identical.

Then there were the clocks. Every clock in Haven Ridge, from the grand tower in the square to the tiny kitchen timers in the cafés, showed the same time: 4:17 p.m. It was as if the whole town was trapped in an endless, sunny afternoon.

"Isn't it wonderful?" his neighbor, Mrs. Alder, had chirped when he pointed it out. "Why would we ever want time to move forward?"

At first, Ethan laughed it off. Maybe it was just a quirk, a town tradition, a harmless eccentricity.

But the more he looked, the more cracks he saw.

The children on the playground never grew tired. They never fought or cried.

The old man who played the violin on Main Street never missed a note, never paused for breath.

Even the waves on the shore seemed to roll in and out with mechanical precision.

One night, curiosity gnawed at Ethan until he couldn’t ignore it. He wandered toward the edge of town, beyond the beach, past the dunes, where an old, rusted fence stood, half-buried in sand.

A sign dangled from the fence, its letters faded and peeling:

"CAUTION: AUTHORIZED PERSONNEL ONLY."

Beyond it, the landscape changed. The vibrant greens dulled into sickly grays. The air grew heavy, metallic. Strange structures — part machine, part nature — loomed in the mist, pulsing faintly with a pale, unnatural light.

Ethan stumbled back, heart hammering. He turned to run — and collided with Mrs. Alder.

Her smile had not faltered. Not one inch.

But up close, in the dim moonlight, he saw the truth: the faint glimmer of gears turning beneath her skin. The smooth, unnatural movement of her blinking eyes.

"You shouldn't be here, Ethan," she said softly, her voice musical, rehearsed.

"What... what is this place?" he choked out.

"Haven Ridge," she answered, almost tenderly. "Exactly what you wished for."

Two more figures emerged from the shadows: the baker, the violinist — all smiling, all wrong.

"You were unhappy," Mrs. Alder continued. "You needed peace. Perfection. We gave it to you. A paradise without pain. Without change."

Ethan shook his head. "But it's not real!"

She tilted her head, as if considering. "Reality is full of sorrow, Ethan. Disappointment. Fear. Here, you are safe."

The others closed in, gently, like caregivers easing a frightened patient back to bed.

"You can stay," she whispered. "You should stay. Be happy, Ethan. Forever."

For a terrifying moment, he almost surrendered. The thought of returning to the chaos, the heartbreak, the endless striving — it was unbearable. Here, there was only sunlight and smiles. Here, he would never have to hurt again.

But deep inside him, a flicker of something stirred.

Not anger.

Not fear.

Hunger.

A hunger for more — for the rawness, the imperfection, the wild, terrifying beauty of real life.

"No," he said, voice shaking but firm. "I choose reality."

The figures hesitated. Mrs. Alder's smile flickered, just for a second. "You will regret this."

"Maybe," Ethan said. "But at least it’ll be real."

He turned and ran, pushing through the fence, into the mist, into the unknown.

The world beyond Haven Ridge was broken. Cities crumbled into ruin. Storms raged across barren landscapes. People fought and struggled and stumbled.

But they also sang.

They wept with real tears.

They laughed real laughs.

They lived.

Ethan found work rebuilding broken communities. It was exhausting, heartbreaking, messy work. He failed often. He cried sometimes. But each morning, when he looked at the sunrise — not a perfectly painted one, but raw and wild — he smiled.

He carried the memory of Haven Ridge with him always. A paradise built not to nourish, but to numb.

A paradise that demanded he forget pain, and in doing so, forget living itself.

In the end, Ethan realized:

True paradise was never about perfection.

It was about freedom.

Freedom to grow.

Freedom to fail.

Freedom to be gloriously, painfully, beautifully human.

And he would never trade that again.

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About the Creator

Mir Ahmad Khan

"Since fourteen, I’ve explored unseen worlds through poetry—where ink reveals truths or illusions, and meaning belongs to the reader."

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