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MOMENTS THAT CHANGED EVERYTHING

Turning Points That Shaped Lives and Destinies

By Mirza Afzal BaigPublished 12 months ago 3 min read
The movements that changed everything

A stormy start

Akash provoked severe rain with Fury, which had heavy rain against Everdel's small coastal town windows. For years, people lived in peace; their lives were determined by tidal rhythm and air whispering. But that night was somewhat different. The storm was contrary to every previous, violent and incredible, as nature itself warned them of an adjacent change.

In a small house near the edge, sixteen-year-old Lily curls at the grandmother's old rocking chair and stares at the hefty temperature. She always loved the rain, but tonight she had an unwavering feeling of being feared in her heart. Fisher's father had gone out early that morning and didn't come back yet. He repeatedly checked his phone, but there was no message, there was no conversation—just a terrible silence between Thunder Roar.

Ghat event

In the morning the storm had passed; considering it, it was a brand of destruction. The trees were abolished, the boat was crushed along the edge, and a time squad was partially collapsed. The people of the city gathered and assessed the injury, but Lily's only concern was her father.

A fetic discovery began. The volunteers scraped their names on the beach; their voices were lost in restless waves. The hours went by, then one day. The way hope began to subside, shouted someone from the broken ghat. Lily ran to the voice; her heart quickly got in her chest. There, the father had a fishing right, wrapped in stone splashes—it was written and empty, except for the same item.

A gold belt, worn and rusty, shiny under sunlight. Lily picked her up; her hands trembled. It wasn't by her father, but she knew what it was. The mother of his mother had disappeared twelve years ago without any brand.

A mystery sting

A mystery sting

Lily's father never talked about her mother's disappearance. She was only four years old when this happened, but she grew up with unanswered questions. After a storm, in the place where his father was last seen, it was too much to find a coincidence—that was a coincidence.

It was decided; he visited the city's record office, expected to find something,

Anything that can explain the mother's disappearance. With the help of the city post's older keeper, Mr. Thompson, she revealed a newspaper article twelve years ago—the day her mother disappeared.

This expanded a similar storm: a missing woman and an incomplete investigation. The article mentioned an old fisherman, Daniel Hayes, who claimed to have seen something unusual that night—a figure moved towards Ghat and then disappeared as a storm. But his story was rejected as an old man stroll.

A secret under the waves

A secret under the waves

Lily knew she needed to talk to Daniel Hayes. He found him sitting outside his cabin, staring at the sea as if he were catching all the answers. Initially, he was reluctant, but when he showed him the closet, his eyes expanded recognition.

"That night," he started, the voice Rasbhari, "I saw your mother. She stood on the ghat, watching the water. I called her, but she didn't answer. So, as soon as the lightning shines, like as soon as the lightning shines.

Lily's breath was caught. "Where did he go?"

Daniel shook his head. "I don't know. But I'll take you an oath, the child; she didn't fall. She went voluntarily."

The real truth

Lily began to gasp. This was his mother.

To create an option

Lily had tears in his eyes. "Mam... what happened?"

The mother smiled and loved with love. "I had to go, Lily. I belong to the ocean. I was always coming back, but I would never leave you.

Lily caused heartache. "Dad... he went in search of you. He's missing.,

Her mother reached out to the touching cheek of Lily. "He is safe. The ocean does not hurt those who want love."

For example, while responding to his words, the waves took a small role, causing a boat to flow toward the coast. And there, unconscious but breathing, was his father.

Lily again in relief. "Come back with us."

His mother hesitated; water used to call him. "I can't be that. But I will always look at you."

With a last smile, she came back deep, which in the morning disappeared and broke on the horizon.

A new dawn

Lily's father woke up, confused but alive. When he told him what happened, he cried, not only for his wife. but for the years that were always beyond his reach.

From that day, the city talked about the storm that took a man and returned the girl who found her mother in the sea, and that moment changed everything.

And every night Lily stood from the edge, listened to the waves, felt the mother, watched, whispered, and waited on the tide to bring them back together.

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About the Creator

Mirza Afzal Baig

I'm Mirza Afzal Baig, and I'm here to sprinkle a bit of magic on your reading experience. As an avid explorer of words, I've embarked on a journey to share stories, insights, and perspectives that will captivate your imagination.

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