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Beyond the Window

12 February 2015

By Sudais ZakwanPublished about 5 hours ago 3 min read

Two critically ill men shared a hospital room, united by pain, silence, and long hours of waiting. Both were so weak that even sitting up was a struggle. Only one of them, whose bed was placed beside the room’s single window, was allowed to sit upright for an hour each day. The other man remained flat on his back at all times, staring at the ceiling, dependent on sounds and words to connect him to life beyond the walls.

To pass the time, the men spoke often. They shared memories of families, careers, and moments from healthier days. Their conversations eased loneliness and gave meaning to their suffering. Each afternoon, when the man by the window was permitted to sit up, he would describe what he claimed to see outside. That one hour became the highlight of the other man’s day, the only time his dull existence seemed to come alive.

The man by the window spoke of a beautiful lake sparkling in the sunlight. He described swans and ducks gliding peacefully across the water and children laughing as they sailed small boats. He talked about flowers blooming in every color imaginable, spread across the ground like a rainbow, and tall green trees swaying gently in the breeze. According to him, the air outside was filled with joy, love, and freedom. As he spoke, the man on the other bed closed his eyes and imagined every detail. In his mind, pain faded, walls disappeared, and hope briefly returned.

As days passed, however, something inside the listener began to change. What had once been comfort slowly turned into longing, and longing into jealousy. A troubling thought took root in his mind: why should only one man enjoy these beautiful scenes? Didn’t he deserve the same chance? If his bed were by the window, he could see everything himself instead of relying on descriptions. These thoughts grew stronger, poisoning his heart. Gratitude vanished, replaced by resentment and restless anger. Sleep escaped him as he obsessed over the idea of taking the other man’s place.

One night, as he lay awake staring at the ceiling, the man by the window suddenly began coughing violently. The sound echoed through the room. His breathing became labored, and it was clear he was in serious distress. He struggled but lacked the strength to reach the emergency button. The other man heard everything. He knew help was only moments away if he acted. Yet jealousy chained him in silence. He watched as the coughing weakened, the breaths slowed, and life quietly slipped away. Soon, an unbearable stillness filled the room.

The next morning, a nurse entered and discovered that the man by the window had died during the night. His body was removed, and the room returned to its usual quiet. Shortly afterward, the surviving man asked the nurse to move his bed next to the window. His request was granted without question. As his bed was repositioned, a sense of triumph filled him. At last, he would see the world for himself.

With great effort and pain, he lifted his head and turned toward the window, eager to witness the beauty he had imagined for so long. But when he finally looked outside, his heart sank. There was no lake, no children, no flowers, no trees. Outside the window stood only a large, blank wall.

In that moment, the truth struck him with crushing force. The beauty he had envied was never outside. It had existed in the imagination, kindness, and generosity of another man who chose to bring light into a dark room.

Life is much the same. We often believe others are happier simply because of where they stand. In reality, happiness is shaped by perspective, not position. When we allow jealousy to blind us, we lose the chance to appreciate what we already have. Contentment comes from within, and peace belongs to those who choose gratitude over envy.

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About the Creator

Sudais Zakwan

Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions

Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.

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