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Unexpected Blossoms

Lost in the monotony of her daily commute.

By Treasure Clement Published about a year ago 3 min read
Unexpected Blossoms
Photo by Marie Bellando Mitjans on Unsplash

In the heart of a bustling city, where skyscrapers towered like sentinels of steel and glass, a romance blossomed in the most unexpected of places—amidst the concrete labyrinth of a subway station. This was where Mia, a weary commuter with dreams tucked away in the corners of her heart, and Ethan, a musician whose melodies echoed through the tunnels, found their paths intertwining like notes in a symphony.

It was a dreary Tuesday morning when Mia first noticed Ethan. She stood on the platform, lost in the monotony of her daily commute, when a hauntingly beautiful melody drifted through the air. Intrigued, she followed the sound to a corner where Ethan sat with his guitar, his fingers dancing over the strings with effortless grace. His music wove tales of love and longing, casting a spell that drew weary travelers and curious souls alike.

Mia found herself lingering on the platform longer than necessary, captivated by the soulful strains that echoed through the station. She watched as Ethan poured his heart into each chord, his eyes closed in a reverie that seemed to transcend the bustling crowd around them. There was a vulnerability in his music—a rawness that resonated with Mia's own hidden desires and aspirations.

Days turned into weeks, and Mia's mornings began with the promise of Ethan's melodies. She would arrive early, eager to hear the songs that had become the soundtrack of her commute. Sometimes, their eyes would meet across the platform—a fleeting connection that stirred a flutter of anticipation in Mia's heart. She longed to approach him, to unravel the mystery behind the music that spoke to her soul.

One evening, as rain painted the city streets with shimmering reflections, Mia found herself standing beside Ethan on a deserted platform. The last train had departed, leaving them alone in the hushed stillness of the station. Emboldened by the serenity of the moment, Mia gathered her courage and approached him.

"I've been meaning to tell you," Mia began, her voice soft yet resolute amidst the echoing silence, "your music…it's truly beautiful. It speaks to me in a way that words can't."

Ethan looked up, surprise flickering in his eyes before a warm smile spread across his face. "Thank you," he replied, his voice carrying a melody of its own. "I'm glad it resonates with you."

Their conversation flowed effortlessly, like a duet where each word harmonized with the next. Ethan shared stories of his journey as a musician, while Mia spoke of her passion for literature and the dreams she had set aside in pursuit of stability. Beneath the fluorescent lights of the subway station, they discovered a shared yearning for creativity and authenticity—a yearning that ignited a spark of connection between them.

In the days that followed, Mia and Ethan found themselves drawn to each other like magnets pulled by an invisible force. They met in the quiet corners of the station during lunch breaks and lingered after sunset, exchanging dreams, fears, and the quiet confessions of hearts opening to each other.

One crisp autumn evening, Ethan surprised Mia with a private concert beneath the arched ceiling of the station. His guitar whispered melodies of love and hope, weaving a tapestry of emotions that transcended the confines of their urban sanctuary. As Mia listened, she realized that their romance had blossomed in the most unexpected of places—a testament to the serendipity of fate and the beauty of finding love amidst the chaos of everyday life.

As winter embraced the city with its frost-kissed nights, Mia and Ethan continued to nurture their love, each day unfolding like a new chapter in a cherished story. They explored hidden cafes and wandered through parks aglow with holiday lights, their laughter mingling with the strains of Ethan's music that echoed through the city streets.

And so, beneath the relentless rhythm of trains and the transient hum of city life, Mia and Ethan discovered that love could bloom in the most unexpected of places—a subway station where melodies intertwined and hearts found solace in the harmonies of their shared journey.

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Treasure Clement

Treasure Clement is a story teller, freelancing writer, marketing consultant and an entrepreneur. She has a degree as Bachelor of Science in Media and Mass Communication.

She enjoys writing to communicate her emotions.

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Liked it.

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Excellent, amazing ethan and mia later got married?

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