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When Love Bleeds in the Dark PART ten and the end

What Remains When Eternity Lets Go

By Ahmed aldeabellaPublished about 11 hours ago 3 min read

What Remains When Eternity Lets Go


Death did not arrive like a monster.

It did not come with claws or darkness or screaming winds.

Death came quietly—
like a door closing in a room no one had entered for centuries.

There was no pain.

Only release.


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I thought eternity would fight harder to keep me.

But it didn’t.

It let go as if it had never truly owned me in the first place.


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There was no body.

No breath.

No hunger.

No thirst clawing at the inside of my ribs.

No pull toward blood.

No voice whispering from the dark corners of my mind, reminding me of what I was supposed to be.

Just silence.

Not the peaceful kind.

The empty kind.


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And in that emptiness, only one thing remained.

Her.


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Her name did not sound like a word anymore.

It sounded like a memory the universe refused to delete.

I reached for it—not with hands, not with thought—but with something deeper than consciousness.

Love.


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Something answered.


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The first sensation was weight.

Gravity pressing me down into something cold and wet.

Mud.

Rain.

My lungs convulsed violently as air tore back into them, sharp and unforgiving, like it was offended by my absence.

I choked.

Coughed.

Screamed.


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My heart slammed against my ribs, clumsy and loud and wrong.

Too fast.

Too human.


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Hands grabbed my shoulders.

A voice broke apart above me.

“No—no—no—please—”

I opened my eyes.


---

She was there.

Kneeling in the rain, her dark hair plastered to her face, her eyes wide with terror that centuries had never taught her how to hide.

She looked… smaller.

Not weaker.

But humanly undone.


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I lifted a shaking hand and touched her cheek.

Warm.

She gasped like the sound alone could shatter her.

“You’re—” Her voice cracked. “You’re warm.”

“Bad sign?” I rasped.

She stared at me as if I were a ghost that had decided to be cruel and return.

“My heart,” she whispered, pressing her palm against my chest. “It’s—”

“Still terrible at rhythm,” I said faintly. “Some things don’t change.”


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She let out a sound that wasn’t laughter or sobbing, but something feral and ancient breaking free.

She collapsed over me, holding me like the world might try to steal me again if she loosened her grip.

“You were gone,” she whispered into my neck. “You were gone.”

“I know,” I murmured. “I tried not to be rude about it.”

She laughed then—actually laughed—and then cried harder than before.


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When the storm passed, we sat beneath the ruined sky, wrapped in silence that no longer felt hostile.

She studied me the way scholars study miracles.

The way predators study impossibilities.

“You’re human,” she said finally.

The word sounded unfamiliar in her mouth.

“I feel like it,” I admitted. “Which is alarming.”


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The bond was gone.

I didn’t feel her hunger tug at me.

I didn’t feel the echo of her thoughts brushing against mine.

The night did not lean toward us anymore.

The world felt… neutral.

Free.


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“It’s over,” she said softly.

Not relieved.

Not grieving.

Just stating a truth neither of us knew how to hold.

“He’s gone,” she continued. “The blood. The claim. The ritual erased everything.”

“And me?” I asked.

She hesitated.

Then smiled sadly.

“It gave you back.”


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We learned the cost slowly.

In quiet moments.

In broken conversations.

In the absence of everything we had learned to rely on.


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I aged.

Not all at once.

But enough to feel it.

My reflection changed subtly, like time was reclaiming its territory inch by inch.

She watched without flinching.

Without denial.


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“You could have chosen eternity,” she said one night as we sat near the fire, its glow reflecting in eyes that had seen the rise and fall of empires.

“I did,” I said. “Once.”

“And then?”

“And then I learned it wasn’t enough.”


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She turned toward me.

“You don’t resent me?” she asked. “For what you gave up?”

I reached for her hand.

“I resent the idea that forever means more than meaning,” I replied.

She closed her eyes.

For the first time, she looked tired.


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The coven fell apart without ceremony.

Power cannot survive without fear.

And fear cannot survive without a god.

Some fled.

Some adapted.

Some disappeared into myth the way monsters prefer to do when the world stops believing in them.

She didn’t stay.


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We chose a place where the sun touched the sea every evening like forgiveness.

A town small enough to forget us.

Quiet enough to let us exist.


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I grew older.

She didn’t.

And yet—she learned.

She learned to live in days instead of centuries.

To count time in moments instead of eras.

To sit beside me without measuring the distance to my death.


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“Does it hurt?” she asked once, tracing the silver at my temples.

“Only when I think about wasting it,” I said.

She smiled.

And stayed.


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On my final night, the air smelled like salt and rain.

She lay beside me, her head against my chest, listening to a heart that had never known how to behave.

“I broke you,” she whispered.

“No,” I said gently. “You freed me.”

She shook her head.

“I will watch you die.”

I lifted her chin so she had to meet my eyes.

“You’ll watch me finish,” I corrected.


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When the end came, it was quiet.

No darkness.

No fear.

Just her hand in mine.


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I closed my eyes knowing something eternal had finally learned the courage to let go.

And somewhere between blood and love, between night and dawn, eternity lost its grip—

And love remained.


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Because some stories don’t need forever.
They only need truth.


If love is measured not by time, but by choice… what would you choose?


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About the Creator

Ahmed aldeabella

A romance storyteller who believes words can awaken hearts and turn emotions into unforgettable moments. I write love stories filled with passion, longing, and the quiet beauty of human connection. Here, every story begins with a feeling.♥️

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