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The Unfinished Wall

When Division Turns Into Opportunity for Peace

By M.FarooqPublished about 8 hours ago 3 min read

The wall had been half-built for years.

It sliced through the heart of Imran Street, a quiet lane where generations had lived, laughed, and argued together. Once, neighbors had shared meals, borrowed sugar, celebrated weddings, and mourned losses as one.

Then came the incident.

A rumor spread that one family had taken something belonging to another. It didn’t matter if it was true or false; the accusation itself was enough. Words hardened into anger, anger became resentment, and resentment grew into avoidance.

Someone suggested a wall.

“It will show boundaries,” they said.

“It will protect us,” they said.

The work began quickly. Bricks arrived. Cement was mixed. Hands worked in tension. Arguments were exchanged over the height, the width, the design. By the end of the first week, the wall was halfway built. Then the project stalled. Funds ran out. Interest faded. Pride refused to negotiate.

So the wall remained — half-finished, awkward, meaningless.

For years, life adapted around it.

Children leaped over it while chasing balls. Cats used it as a perch to watch the street. Shopkeepers passed baskets and groceries across it. People learned to ignore it — though its presence always reminded them of the fight that had split their lane in two.

THE ARRIVAL OF SHAZIA

Shazia moved into Imran Street a year later.

She was a widow in her late thirties, carrying the quiet strength that comes from surviving loss. She had returned to her family home to take care of her ailing mother.

The first time she saw the wall, she grimaced. The sun barely reached her courtyard anymore, and she remembered how the street used to feel alive. She wanted light, air, and something that smelled like home again.

One morning, she carried a small basket of flower pots and placed them along the top of the wall. Marigolds. Tulsi. A small jasmine plant she had brought from her old garden.

No one stopped her.

Some neighbors looked away. Some whispered. Some muttered complaints, but none interfered.

Shazia watered the plants every morning.

SMALL CONNECTIONS

The children were the first to notice.

“Why are you watering that ugly wall?” asked a young boy.

“It’s not ugly,” Shazia said gently. “It’s just tired. I’m helping it rest.”

Slowly, a neighbor came by. An older man lifted a heavy pot for her. A woman from the other side offered extra soil. Another neighbor grumbled about the bees, but secretly brought sugar water for them.

Each day, small conversations happened around the wall — first tense, then tentative, then familiar.

Shazia never forced anyone to speak. She never reminded them of old fights. She just worked alongside them, quietly patient.

THE STORM

One evening, heavy rain threatened the street. Wind tore at the pots, and water washed away some soil.

Shazia called out: “Everyone! Please, help!”

People came. Reluctantly at first, then with purpose. Hands reached across the wall — steady, cooperative. Bricks were steadied, plants secured, the wall survived another storm.

That night, for the first time in decades, neighbors on both sides shared umbrellas, offered towels, and spoke without mentioning old grudges.

THE TRANSFORMATION

Months passed.

The wall remained unfinished in structure but transformed in meaning. Marigolds and jasmine climbed along its surface. Children painted murals during school holidays. People began sitting by it in the evenings, chatting, laughing, and sharing small gifts — sweets, newspapers, cups of tea.

Arguments still happened — old resentments didn’t vanish overnight. But the wall, once a symbol of division, became a medium for connection.

One day, a local committee proposed tearing it down to replace it with a formal fence.

Shazia laughed softly. “Why replace it?” she said. “It already teaches us what we need.”

The street agreed.

The wall stayed.

Not as a barrier.

Not as protection.

But as a reminder: Peace isn’t always about tearing walls down. Sometimes it’s about tending them together.

FINAL REFLECTION

Years later, the children who played there would grow up knowing the wall not as a boundary, but as a meeting point. Couples would place new flowers along it. Elders would rest beside it and tell stories about how the wall “taught the street patience.”

And Shazia, now older, would sit beside it every evening, watching the sun filter through the jasmine. She never claimed credit for peace.

Because peace, she understood, doesn’t come from force. It comes from care, persistence, and small acts that invite others to join.

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About the Creator

M.Farooq

Through every word, seeks to build bridges — one story, one voice, one moment of peace at a time.

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