The Boy Who Borrowed Time
Every second he borrowed had a cost—and time always collects

Twelve-year-old Eli Farren first saw the clock when he wandered too far from home.
It wasn’t a clock like the ones that chimed in town squares. This one stood alone in a forgotten field—ancient, ten feet tall, all brass and bone and ticking mechanisms that clicked like whispers. A single plaque beneath its face read: TIME BORROWED MUST BE REPAID.
He didn’t understand what it meant. Not until the day his mother collapsed, pale and still, her breath fading like fog. The doctors said there was nothing to do. Time, they said, was running out.
Eli didn’t cry. He ran.
He returned to the field, the brass clock humming with quiet life. Desperate, he shouted into the sky, pleaded into the gears, pressed trembling hands against the warm, beating machine.
“I’ll give anything,” he whispered. “Just give me more time.”
The hands of the clock spun backward. A grinding sound filled the air. The base of the clock creaked open, revealing a golden pocket watch, its surface covered in shifting runes.
The moment Eli touched it, time froze.
Birds stilled mid-flight. Leaves halted mid-fall. The world was silent.
A voice echoed inside his head—cold, smooth, ancient.
Borrow wisely. Return what is owed. Or time will collect in blood.
He didn’t care. He ran back to the hospital.
His mother breathed again. Her pulse returned. Time resumed its normal course.
She never knew how close she’d come to death.
Eli had bought her three extra days.
And a debt.
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It began with seconds. Then minutes. Weeks. He borrowed time for his mother, his little sister, even his best friend Leo when he broke his arm falling from a tree.
Each time he held the watch, he could feel the seconds sliding away from somewhere else. He never knew where the time came from—but it always came.
But the more he borrowed, the more things began to change.
He’d return from school to find people gone, their homes empty as if they’d never existed. Days seemed to stutter—he’d wake up and it was yesterday again, or tomorrow.
He started seeing a figure in his dreams: cloaked in tattered gray, with a clock embedded where its face should be. It watched him. Waited.
Time was keeping score.
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On his sixteenth birthday, Eli stood in front of the mirror and saw gray at his temples.
A boy with a borrowed life.
His mother was alive, healthy. His sister thriving. But his own hands trembled when he touched the watch now. The runes had grown red. Angry.
He heard ticking even when it wasn't there.
The world around him had begun to unravel.
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That night, the figure stepped from his dream and into the real world.
It appeared in his room, tall and soundless, with gears in its chest and sand leaking from its sleeves. It reached for the pocket watch on his nightstand.
“I’m not done,” Eli said. “There’s still time left!”
There is no such thing as free time. Only time stolen from others.
Eli backed away. “Then take it from me. Take everything. Just let them live.”
You have borrowed decades. That debt cannot be paid by one life.
The figure moved forward.
Eli ran.
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He made it back to the field, the great clock still ticking, slower now. Rust clung to its edges. Time was sick here.
He held the pocket watch above his head.
“I give it back,” he cried. “All of it!”
The gears shuddered. The sky darkened. The figure stepped into the field behind him.
You cannot return what has been used.
Eli fell to his knees.
“Then take me. Stop this. Let time heal.”
The figure tilted its head. The gears in its chest reversed.
The pocket watch cracked. A blinding light surged through Eli’s body, and for a moment he saw everything—the years he had stolen, the lives he had altered, the futures that never happened.
And then it was gone.
---
Eli woke to birdsong.
The field was overgrown, the clock gone. No pocket watch. No figure.
He stood, unsteady, and walked back home.
His mother was still there. His sister, older now, hugged him tight. The world had changed—but not shattered.
He looked in the mirror.
No gray.
But in his eyes, a flicker of the clock remained.
---
He never borrowed time again.
But he knew, one day, Time would come to collect its final debt.
And this time, he’d be ready.
About the Creator
Masih Ullah
I’m Masih Ullah—a bold voice in storytelling. I write to inspire, challenge, and spark thought. No filters, no fluff—just real stories with purpose. Follow me for powerful words that provoke emotion and leave a lasting impact.


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