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The Boy, the Man, and the Silence Between

A quiet journey through loss, love, and the words they never said

By Muhammad HakimiPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
Two souls. One path. A lifetime of meaning in shared silence.

They walked the same path every Sunday.

The boy, barely ten, full of energy and questions he rarely voiced aloud.

The old man, past eighty, moving slowly with a wooden cane, his voice used less and his mind filled more with memories than words.

Between them, silence.

Not uncomfortable silence, but the kind that feels safe—like the hush just before the sun sets, or the stillness after a deep breath.

They met by chance, or maybe fate, on a dusty trail between golden fields. The boy had been chasing a butterfly. The man had been chasing time. Since that day, they returned, week after week, walking side by side in the late afternoon light.

The boy never asked the man why he came. The man never asked the boy why he followed. They simply walked.

One Sunday, the boy carried a small rock in his hand. Smooth, oval, painted blue with little stars. He handed it to the man without a word. The man smiled, nodded, and slipped it into his pocket like it was treasure.

Another week, the man brought an old harmonica. He didn’t play it, just held it now and then, letting it catch the sun as he walked.

Eventually, words came—slowly, carefully, like stepping stones in a stream.

The boy told him his mother cried often when no one watched. The man nodded.

The man said he once had a son, who laughed like the wind through leaves. The boy listened.

They didn’t try to fix each other. They just walked.

The trail changed with the seasons. Blossoms in spring, dust in summer, leaves in fall, and a soft crunch in winter. But the routine remained untouched.

One day, the boy asked, “Do you ever get lonely?”

The man took a while before answering. “Sometimes. But not when you’re here.”

That was the only time the boy reached out and held the man’s hand.

Another time, they sat on a fallen tree. The man told a story—not of dragons or kings—but of his first love, a girl who used to braid wildflowers into his hair when he was younger than the boy. “She smelled like lavender,” he said, eyes distant.

The boy asked, “Did she love you back?”

The old man smiled. “For a while. That was enough.”

The boy didn’t fully understand. But he would, one day.

There were Sundays when the man spoke very little, staring far into the trees like searching for someone only he could see. The boy never interrupted. He just stayed.

And then, one Sunday, the man wasn’t there.

The bench was empty. The path still warm under the afternoon sun, but something felt colder.

The boy waited. Five minutes. Then ten. Then the shadows grew long.

He returned the next week. Still empty. A soft breeze moved the tall grass like a whisper.

A month passed before someone sat beside him—a woman with silver hair and kind, tired eyes. She held a cane across her lap.

“You’re the boy,” she said, voice almost like the wind.

He nodded.

“He left you something.”

From her purse, she pulled the harmonica. The same one. Attached was a folded note, aged and trembling.

The boy unfolded it slowly.

“Dear friend,

Sometimes, silence is all we have—but you filled mine with light.

Thank you for walking with me when I needed someone to.

Keep walking. One day, someone else will need your silence too.

— Your old friend.”

Tears didn’t fall right away. They came later, like soft rain after a long drought.

Years passed.

The boy became a young man. He still walked that same path, every Sunday. Same time. Same place.

One day, a little girl walked beside him. Curious. Quiet. Holding a small stone.

She didn’t say a word.

He smiled, nodded, and they walked together.

And the silence began again.

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About the Creator

Muhammad Hakimi

Writing stories of growth, challenge, and resilience.

Exploring personal journeys and universal truths to inspire, connect, and share the power of every voice.

Join me on a journey of stories that inspire, heal, and connect.

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  • Suraj kapoor8 months ago

    Nice job my brother

  • Ahmad 8 months ago

    Beautiful story

  • Mr good8 months ago

    Im inspired

  • Squid Game8 months ago

    Beautiful

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