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Summer of sad girls

Sad girls

By Patrice JohnsonPublished 5 years ago • 18 min read
Summer of sad girls
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Written By

Patrice Johnson

SUMMER OF SAD GIRLS

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FADE IN:

INT. LAYING ON TRAMPOLINE - SUNRISE

Lola body starts to go up and down from the movement of others jumping on the trampoline. She breathes heavily and closes her eyes.

LOLA

(smiles)

Sun starts to go down and timelapse of people jumping off the trampoline. As Lola body sits there.

EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE - NIGHT

Lola grabs a bunch of pebbles and toss them at once.

LOLA

Hey, bitch wake up!

she grabs more rocks. SAM

Fuck Lo I told you I'm grounded. Plus We have school tomorrow go home.

LOLA

Come out! just this once it'll be

fun I promise.

Lola takes out some spray paint and ziplock bag of marijuana .

1.

LOLA

Come out or I'm coming to get you

whore!

(laughs)

SAM

Fine! Just let me throw on

something, but be quiet fuck!

Shot of sams window. You see shadows of her throwing her clothes and hear sounds of her rushing outside.

Sam sticks her leg out the window. The camera is zoomed in on her.

Sam starts sliding down the house. Her flowy dress pushes up and reveals her white underwear.

Lola takes a picture.

SAM

Shit lola you better not post that

anywhere or you're dead!

LOLA

Don't worry no one wants to see

your virgin ass anyway.

Lola and sam starts to run off. Both smiling and laughing EXT.OUTSIDE ON SIDE WALK - MIDNIGHT

Lola and Sam sitting eating snacks.

SAM

How was last night?

LOLA Eh, he was fun.

SAN

No details?

Lola leans back and smiles.

CAMERA DOES A HITCHCOCK ZOOM FROM THE VIEW OF TWO TO LOLA'S EYES.

2.

scene from last night happens.

pcycadelic colors and scenes start to happen.

showing Lola getting in the car with older guy. They're driving on a straight dark rode.Lola opens her mouth and throws a lsd tab in her mouth and closes her eyes.she looks out to the road and from that rode another pcycadelic shot happens.

CAMERA GOES FROM BEHIND THE CAR THROUGH THE CAR TO THE FRONT OF THE CAR.

The ground begins to turn into a rainbow and Lola turns her head and looks at the guy and they kiss. Then the shot goes in on there kiss and back to reality.

LOLA

Yea it was pretty cool.

SAM

Are you going to call him again?

LOLA

I don't know if i feel like it

Lola stands up and starts to walk away.

SAM

Where are we going now LO? I have

to go home soon.

LOLA

To a bar. My friends are there so

you should come. Lola looks at Sam

Well if

bye see

LO. Lola walks away.

SCENE ENDING.

LOLA

you want. Other then that you tomorrow.

SAM

3.

INT.SITTING ON GRASS READING- SUNNY

Sam has her shades on turns page. Sun gets blocked from a body.She looks up and sees Lola.

Starts to

Oh, i see haha well

sit down right next

LOLA

what is it?

SAM lolita

LOLA

ohh yeah i've heard

to her.snuggle under her chin

LOLA

What are you doing?

SAM

umm, reading obviously

LOLA

(pops her gum she's chewing)

about that book. it's old why not read

something like in our time

SAM

because i love this book

LOLA

Just imagine if i was lola in that

book.

scene changes to Lola point of view in the book. Lola reshoots the shot of lolita does in the movie with her reading and the sprinklers going over her etc. then looks over at the camera like she's looking at a man.

SAM

Lo. Hello, Lola ya there?

4.

LOLA

Oh sorry haha

Rolls around on the grass. Laughing.

LOLA

Oh how life would be so fun.

Lola hops up

LOLA

wilp. Anyway. Want to go drink

slushies at the train tracks? Kevin and Sean will be there it'll be fun.

SAM

Yeah sounds good let's head out

LOLA

Maybe change?

SAM Into what

LOLA

Something cute?

SAM

Ugh what ever fine.

Walks to Sam's room to get her dressed. Door opens.

SAMS MOM

Sam where are you going?

SAM

we're going to get something to

eat.

it's a school night.

SAMS MOM

5.

SAM

ill be back before curfew

sam's mom looks at Lola.

Lola smiles

Her mom closes the door in a irritated face.

Sam looks at Lola. Lola shrugs

LOLA ready?

SAM

yeah let's head out.

WALKING DOWN THE TRAIN TRACKS-

and smile

EVENING

Long shot of the girls point of view of them watching the

boys tag the train tracks

Lola runs over and hops on Kevin back. LOLA

What are you doing You bad boy. (Says in flirty way.)

KEVIN

Turns around and walks her over and sit her on his car.

KEVIN

It's nice to see you too

Grips the back of her hair and makes her kiss him.

EXTREME CLOSE UP: KEVIN BITING LOLA LIP. WHEN THEY FINSIH KISSING AND PULL AWAY YOU SEE SAM IN THE SHOT LOOKING

SEAN Sup Sam.

6.

They both

They're interesting huh?

SAM yeah I guess so.

head away to sit down on

SEAN what's up?

the train tracks.

SAM What?

SEAN

(looks over at Lola and

Kevin)

SAM

Nothing. starts looking at her

phone.

Sean stares at Sam while she plays on her phone. Lola looks over,

LOLA

Sam did you know Sean plays in a

band.

SAM Yeah. looks at

LOLA

oh just wanted

SEAN

hahah that was

her weird

to remind you. weird.

KEVIN

(whispers in lola ear)

i thought you said she'd be down?

LOLA

Give it some time sheesh.

Sean looks over at Kevin. Sean mouth (sorry man). Sean looks away annoyed.

7.

SAM

hey Lo i have to go soon.

LOLA it's only 10 pm

SAM

you know 11 is my curfew.

LOLA

ugh

KEVIN

sean why dont you drive her home.

you have to leave anyway right?

SEAN

oh yea i can give you a lift if you

want?

SAM

I guess, if you don't mind.

SEAN

If i minded i wouldn't have

offered.

(laughs awkwardly)

Sam looks at him confused and moves over to hug Lola goodbye. Sean walks over to Kevin and dab him up before he precede to walk to his car

LOLA

Text me when you get home

SAM yeah i will.

LOLA Be nice.

Lola smiles and pushes her towards the direction. Sam looks frustrated and walks off.

8.

EXT. SEAN CAR FRONT SEAT.

SHOT FOLLOWS FROM THE BACK OF SAM AND KEVIN TO WRAP TO A TWO PERSON POINT A VIEW OF THE TWO IN THE FRONT SEAT OF THE CAR.

Sean turns on the engine and looks over and smile.

SEAN Ready?

SAM mhm

car drives off . So, how's

SEAN

senior year going?

SAM

I'm sure the same way it went for

you last year.

(smiles sarcastically)

SEAN

Why are you so rude all the time.

jesus

Maybe

Sean looks over

Trust

person at

SAM

you're sensitive.

and

laughs.

SEAN

I'm not a sensitive all.

me,

SAM

Okay then, stop complaining.

SEAN

No ones complaining, just clearly

shows why no one fucks with your uptight ass.

Sean laughs and turn back to the road.Sam looks hurt turns the music.

9.

Sean pulls up to the sams corner . Sam gets her things and open the door.

SAM

Maybe you're just not my type.

SEAN

Yeah clearly, the way you obsessed

with Lola we all know I'm not your type. carpet muncher.

Sean laughs.

SAM

Excuse me!

SEAN

Come on Sam, it's obvious, and it's

whatever! just close my door. i have real things to get into kiddo.

Sean drives off fast blasting music.

SAM

fucking dick

SAMS ROOM 10:30

Sam walks up and start to undress into a comfy band tee and some boxers. She walks over to her desk grabs her laptop and sit on her bed. Puts headphones on and leans back and relax. eyes close.

SAMS MOM

So... Lola didn't come in?

Sam opens her eyes and look at her mom

SAM

Yeah she had other things she was

doing.

SAMS MOM

i'm sure she does.i just can't wait

for this year to be over and you have new friends.

10.

Sam looks out.

SAM Mom

SAMS MOM

I mean friends that'll be on your

type of level of interest etc.

SAM

Mom! is there anything you need?

SAM MOM

You know i don't like you hanging

out with her! I'm your mother and i have your best interest for you!

SAM

i know, but Lolas my best friend

and this is my life and I'm going to speak to whoever i want.

SAM MOM

Will see what the future lies for

her.

over in disappointment. sam mom continues to walk

Sam gets up and shut and locks her door. she sits back on her bed and go on ig.Her phone rings and its Lola facetiming her.

LOLA

HEYYYYY, BITCCCCCH

Sam smiles and grabs her head phones.

SAM

where are you ?

LOLA

I'm at kevin house. He's down

stairs getting us some henny and shit. get this party really started.he's kinda cute i think I'm started to like his wild ass ahah.

11.

SAM

ohhh really now? finally thinking

about slowing down dirty lo haha!

LOLA

I mean not slowing down but he

better still take me to prom and

shit!

lola rolling around on the bed and touching the sheets etc.

SAM

what you pop?

LOLA

is it that obvious haha

SAM

No, i just know you.

LOLA

smiles. How was sean??? OMG!!! i

forgot! did you suck dick bitch!?

SAM

Oh my god lola noooo!! are you

serious!! he was such a douche. He literally called me a carpet muncher

LOLA a what

SAM

a carpet muncher! for your pussy

bitch!!

LOLA

HAHAH omg are you serious@!!! what

a ass!

SAM

yeah stop trying to play

matchmaker. you know you don't know my type!

12.

LOLA

I'm sure sam you don't even know

your type.

Kevin walks in his underwear with a chef apron on.

KEVIN

babe! I was calling you!

LOLA

What! i'm talking to Sam

KEVIN

ohhhh Sammy , well shit did you

want your eggs scramble or what?

LOLA

smiles. How ever you like them.

KEVIN

i didn't need to come up here if

you were just going to say that. so how do you want them ?

LOLA

Omg,Kevin !!! What everrr I don't

care.

KEVIN

whatever

Kevin walks off down there stairs

LOLA

so anyway , Daddy's letting me have

a party at the house tomorrow? SO i'll pick you up in the morning so we can get clothes and everything.

SAM

okay! I have to get some rest

before my mom come back in and complain.

13.

LOLA

Okay, i'll be at your house around

10 or 11.

SAM

You're not going home tonight?

LOLA

No i decided to stay. Dads home and

i don't feel like getting scolded.

SAM

well whatever just don't get the

cops called on you again!!

LOLA

only reason that men would be

looking for me is if he's drunk. hahah but anyway bye love!!!

Sam smiles and hand up and gets tucked in bed.

10 AM SAM HOUSE NEXT DAY

CAMERA FOLLOWS FROM FOOT STEPS. FOLLOWING SLOWLY SHOWING THE BACK OF LOLA, WALK UP THE STAIRS TO HER ROOM HOLDING SHOES, KEYS IN ONE HAND.

Lola walks in sam room and see her underwear next to her bed. she grabs them and hop in the bed.begins to wake sam up.

Sam wakes

cover and

LOLA

SAAAAAAMMMMM!!!!

up in shock and freak out a little. she grabs the covers her body.

SAM

Oh my fucking god lola can you be

less creepy!!!

LOLA

What i told you 10 its 10:20

14.

SAM

even get in?

LOLA door.

SAM

LOLA

no, i caught your mom on the way

out. she wasn't very nice. hahah but what's new.

SAM

well i wish you would've told me.

so we could've avoided that.

LOLA

Sam, i called you a bunch your

phone must be dead.

sam has a flash thought of her logging on to porn hub last

night

CAMERA 1 PERSON SHOT OF SAM FACE AND LIGHT FROM THE CAMERA SHOWS THE LIGHT ON HER FACE. THEN CAMERA DOES A QUICK SHIF TO SHOW HER UNDIES BEEN THROWN ON THE FLOOR.

shot goes back to sam looking for her phone.Lola looks over trying to figure out what she's doing. Then she smiles. throws lola her phone from by her pillow.

LOLA

smiles. Do you need this?

SAM laughs. yeah.'

sam smiles, and goes to plug her phone in.

LOLA

Need these too?

sam grabs them quick. and throws them on.

lola gets up and start to look in her bag and starts to

pull out clothes,

How'd you the doggy what

15.

LOLA

Here. throw that on i'll be down

stairs in the car.

SAM okay

LOLA

don't have me waiting forever

bitch. i'll do your makeup at my house.

lola walks out into the car.

Sam sits on her bed and catches her breath.

LOLA HOUSE 11:30

Lola pulls up to a big mansion a couple cars sitting in the front.

SAM Your dad's here?

LOLA

Yeah they're shooting right now.

don't touch anything.

sam looks over. Lola smiles and get out the car.

CAMERA FOLLOWS TO A LONG SHOT OF THE GIRLS GETTING TO THE DOOR.

INSIDE LOLA HOUSE.

LOLA DAD

sweetie is that you??

LOLA

Yeah daddy i'm home!

LOLA DAD

give me one second okay i'll be

right out!!

here's moaning come from the other room. indicating people having sex.

16.

CAMERA SHOT IS FROM THE DOOR LIGHTING AND ONLY SEEING

SHADOW VERSION OF WHATS HAPPENING

Sam is looking over. Lola looks at her and starts to push her upstairs.

LOLA

It's okay daddy will be up stairs

getting ready.

LOLA DAD

okay i'll come up to speak later

continue to walk up the stairs. moaning continue in the background as it fades away when they get inside lola's room. Lola looks around and grabs her speaker and turn on music to drown out the downstairs sound. Lola looks over to sam and smiles. sam looks up and smiles back.

Lola sets

LOLA

Okay let's get started.

SAM

don't go crazy with it.

LOLA trust me.

up a makeup area and starts to do sams makeup.

SAM

so who's mostly gonna be here

tonight?

LOLA

pretty much the usual i know some

of my dads friends may stay as well.So that'll be fun.

SAM

gross you're always trying to hump

on a older guys you whore.

17.

LOLA

older guys are interesting. you

should try one day.

SAM

i'll pass. i like my men my same

decade.

LOLA

Oh so you do know what type of men

you like. i was starting to believe sean. she smiles

SAM fuck off

LOLA

I'm kidding don't get so

frustrated. its not like ts an issue if you are you know.

SAM i know lola.

LOLA

I mean have you ever thought about

that?

SAM

haha why do you say it like that.

imitates lola say like that.

LOLA

you know what i mean. gosh.

SAM

i mean, maybe... What girl doesn't

huh.

LOLA yeah, exactly haha.

Lola looks at sam and start to analyze the way she looks. starts to caress her face. sam blushes and look up at lola.

18.

SAM

what lola?

LOLA

nothing i'm just looking at you.

SAM

yeah i can tell. she laughs

LOLA you're beautiful sam.

SAM

blushes lola that's you. freaking

bombshell.

LOLA I'm serious.

SAM me too.

Lola gets

peck her once in the . and mouth. sam looks up super nervous. lola drops sam chin and grabs her phone.

closer to sam and smiles. she grabs her face and

LOLA

Oh shit kevin's been calling this

whole time.

sam still in shock of what happen sam looks over to lola in confusion.

LOLA

They're almost here so hurry. we

have to finish.

sam walks over and sits down to continue to get her make up done. lola looks more stern and stand off now.

LOLA

so like seans coming.

19.

SAM

eww lola why

LOLA

you know kevin goes nowhere without

sean. i mean honestly he's slept in bed with us before.

Lola laughs a little, sam smiles a bit. door opens up the dad enter.

LOLA DAD

hey baby, I'm sorry i couldn't say

hi. it was a lot of directing that needed to be handled in there. laughs.

LOLA

it's okay, were getting ready

though so ill see you later.

dad walks over and grab lola from behind, making sam feel uncomfortable. lola dad looks at sam. lola looks irriated

LOLA DAD

so you're the infamou sammie sam

huh?

SAM

i guess. looks awkward

LOLA DAD

you really resimbalcance ya mom. i

use to mingle with her back in the day. how is she?

SAM she's fine sir.

LOLA

dad can you get out we really have

to get ready gosh. pushes him out the room.

20.

starts to

LOLA

fuck hes so annoying all the time!

get frustrated and storms off to get ready.

LOLA

your make up is finish. just put

gloss on. Dont mess that up!

SAM okay lo.

LOLAS HOUSE PARTY 6PM.

Cars begin to pull in packing on the streets and linking up with friends. camera follows through the party to where it gets to lola and kevin.

KEVIN

i can't believe your dad let you go

all out like this

LOLA

well I'm daddies little princess.

he never says no and you never will either.bites his lip and laughs.

camera then moves from them through the crowd over to sean and other guys drinking talking trash.

SEAN

yeah she's hot but she doesn't fuck

with sausages,

Sam looks up and storms off pissed. all the guys look and start laughing with him.

SAM

fuck you sean

SEAN

naw, you already tried and failed.

camera then pulls out to a full shot of the whole party and everything happening around each other.shows time-lapse of party happening through the day

sam walks over to Lola who's sitting on kevins lap

21.

.

couple people start frustrated way.

to laugh. sam looks at lola very

SAM

I can't believe the amount of

liquor I've drank today. laughs

LOLA

yeah, I'm proud of you actually.

did those edibles ever hit.

SAM

do they ever. literally still

barley functioning because of them.

KEVIN

so sammie heard you're trying to

take my girl from me?

SAM

look over and laughs. excuse me?

KEVIN

lola told me about you guys

kissing.

LOLA what?

SAM

What the fuck lola!

LOLA

i thought it was funny jesus calm

down sam.laughs and hits kevin. snitch!

KEVIN

i know sam calm down I'm not mad i

thought it was pretty hot.

22.

SAM

omg shut up you dumb jock stick

KEVIN

huh? laughs babe your friend isn't

down for a threesome?

LOLA

shut up kevin seriously,

KEVIN

wow what ever. she has a dildo up

her ass i swear.

LOLA

kevin shut up or get the fuck out!

no one wants your dick, i barley

want it fuck!

lola storms off and grab sam. they go to the trampoline which is from the first shot. peop[le are jumping around them smoking have animal mask on etc,

LOLA i'm sorry

SAM

i swear i hate you.

LOLA

no you dont

SAM

seriously lola you have the biggest

mouth i swear. if my mom would figure out about this shit id be crucified.

LOLA fuck your mom.

SAM shut up

23.

LOLA

no seriously fuck your mom, fuck my

pervert of a sick dad and just fuck everything. you know I'm really getting tired of this place sam. same shit same thing every day.

SAM

well college and shits coming

LOLA

yeah for you. i wasn't excepted in

anything.

SAM

well its hard to be accepted when

you didn't apply.

LOLA

true... i guess I'm just

disappointed because you'll be gone after this and ill be stuck here. for god know how long. dealing with dumb shit everyday all day.

SAM

hey no you won't lo !

LOLA

trust me i know that's what it is.

that's why i like older guys; at least they take me places I've never been. give me ideas on the future what ever. everything else out here just is in this stupid little town full of the same bs.daily routine.

SAM

don't worry lola will figure

something out. you know ill always be here for you and maybe we can find a way for you just to come with me. i mean i do need a roommate

24.

LOLA

that sounds. amazing, only if could

really happen...

SAM but it could.

LOLA

ugh speaking of same bs here comes

docuhe bag number 1.hey douchebag

KEVIN

come on babe i'm sorry. you know i

was joking

LOLA

say sorry to my friend

SAM

its okay lola

KEVIN

sorry sam for making jokes about

you guys. you know its all love.smiles

LOLA

laughs. where's douche bag number 2

KEVIN

he's hooking up with ashley. so i

was thinking maybe we can go lay down updaters and make up i don't know.

shows Acid tabs to lola.

LOLA

ouuuue i;m game. grabs two and tell

sam to open her mouth

SAM

i don't know lola,ive nor done that

25.

LOLA

trust me babe i got you!

SAM

fine. opens her mouth and takes the

tab.

LOLA

okay ill be upstairs if you need

me. winks and walks away with kevin

KEVIN

babe what about my tab

LOLA

figure it out

sam lays on the trampoline and start talking to the other people at the party. time-lapse shows everyone in and out on that trampoline smoking drinking making out etc. sam sits in the middle layer out while phcaldelics start to happen for her. she starts taking it all in and the time- lapse end with her eyes close.

OUTSIDE LOLAS HOUSE 6 AM

Sam lays with other passed out people on the trampaline. lola dad walks out and laughs at the site of all the people. he notice sam foot and grabs her toe. Sam wake up in shock and looks down in confusion of whats going on.

LOLA DAD

The morning bird gets the worm.

SAM what?

LOLA DAD

laughs. where's my daughter.

SAM

she thinks contemplate saying where

she is knowing she's with kevin. ii think she's dropping ashley off.

26.

LOLA DAD

oh well. you should get in the

house. I'm sure she wouldn't want you sleeping out here with these strangers.

SAM

smiles. you're probably right.

sam dad laughs and walks off and sam gets up and walk through all the other people there. she goes into the house and peaks in the room to see lola and kevin sleeping. she leaves out and goes to the downstairs bathroom. she gets undress and hopes in the shower. moments later sams dad walks in.

SAM Lo?

LOLA DAD

walks up and wipes the sream on the

shower glass.

SAM

EXCUSE ME!

LOLA DAD

Ohh sorry sammie i thought you were

my lola.

SAM

no! i told you she isn't here!

LOLA DAD

i can see that now. hahah sorry

baby.

SAM

its fine cam you just get out

please.

sam dad walks over to the door and grab the knob and locks the the door from the inside.sam looks over nervous

27.

in. lola dad goes and have blood on who's in a corner stomach and face.

to the door and opens it.fixing his pants his hands and boxers. lola looks at sam

runs over

to sam.

LOLA DAD

you sure you don't need some help

getting your back or anything . lola says i give the best baths.

lolas dad

opens it up and grab sam. same screams and struggle to get off of him. he pins her down and attempts take advantage of her. Lola hears screaming from upstairs and runs down stairs to see the door locked.

LOLA

Sam! sam are you in there!

Sam continues to scream and struggle as lola tries to get

walks over to the shower and opens the door. she

curled up shaking with blood on

lola pushes her brother out the

herlegs

way and

LOLA DAD

hey lola you better handle that. i

don'want to see her here again!

LOLA

crying holding sam; omg sam omg

SAM

get me out of here. crying and

shaking,

lola gets sam up and start to walk her to the car nervous.they get inside the car and lola drives off.

3 MONTHS LATER SAM HOUSE 10 AM

sam gets up and finishing putting a couple things in her box. she see a photo of her and lola and she puts on top of her suitcase. same mom walks in

SAM MOM

sweetie did you make sure you

packed you hair care and everything

right?

28.

SAM yes mom

SAM MOM

okay will the cars ready.

see the photo of sam and lola in her bag.she walks over

look at it and

none that

what

throw it straight to the garbage.

SAM MOM

of that sam. i mean none of

SAM

ever mom ill meet you outside.

sam grabs all her things and packs into the car for her departure to college, while in the car she drives down her streets where her and lola us etc hang and do things she passes the train tracks where she see lola kevin's nd sean and sone other girl. lola looks over and see sam and looks away in shame. sam looks and then looks front a tear just drops from her face then the camera goes black.

The end

29.

fact or fiction

About the Creator

Patrice Johnson

HI, my name is Patrice Johnson. I’m a 25 year old screen play writer, I’ve spent 3 years at Berkeley city college to get my aa in movie production. I’m filmiliar with working with adobe premiere , after effects, final cut prob, photo shop.

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