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One Glance, One Silence... And a Lifetime Changed

A glance. A silence. A secret that stayed etched in my soul.

By Muhammad FaizanPublished 7 months ago 4 min read

One Glance, One Silence... And a Lifetime Changed

By{Muhammad Faizan}



Part 1: The Gallery of Firsts

Karachi’s Arts Council was unusually alive that afternoon. The walls of the old building had been painted with fresh hues, not just of color but of culture. A Turkish-Pakistani art exhibition was underway, showcasing talent from both countries. Artists, critics, and curious hearts filled the halls. Among them stood Noor, quiet and unnoticed, like a whisper in a room full of noise.

She wasn't there to showcase. She wasn't even there to network. Noor came only for the art. It was her way of breathing, of being. Her long black scarf draped softly around her shoulders, her eyes taking in each brushstroke, each story hidden within canvas.

Then it happened.

While observing a striking oil painting of Istanbul’s Hagia Sophia, Noor felt a gaze linger on her. She turned, and their eyes met.

Rayan, a fine arts student from Istanbul, was standing across the hall, sketchbook in hand, frozen mid-doodle. His hazel eyes held a depth Noor wasn’t ready for. But neither blinked. Neither smiled. The moment passed without a single word exchanged. Just a glance. Just silence.

And yet, something moved inside them both.

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Part 2: A Sketch of the Soul

The next day, Noor returned to the exhibition, unsure why her steps felt drawn rather than chosen. She wandered the halls again—until she saw him. Rayan. Same sketchbook. Same silence.

He approached this time.

“Merhaba,” he said softly. “I saw you yesterday.”

Noor nodded gently.

“I… like your energy,” he added, his accent delicate.

“Art doesn’t need words,” Noor replied quietly. “It just needs feelings.”

That made him smile.

They walked together along the displays. Noor spoke of Pakistani miniature painting; Rayan explained the symbolism behind Turkish calligraphy. They didn’t talk much, but when they did, it was only about what mattered.

At the end of the day, Rayan pulled a folded sketch from his bag.

It was a portrait—of her. Soft pencil lines, shaded gently. A mirror of her soul.

“I sketched it last night,” he said. “I hope that’s okay.”

Noor’s breath caught. It was more than okay.

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Part 3: Chai and Chalk Dust

What began with silence grew into ritual.

Every afternoon, they met on the gallery’s rooftop café. Noor always ordered chai; Rayan always had Turkish black coffee but secretly loved her chai more. They spoke in fragments—mixes of English, bits of Turkish, sprinkled Urdu—but they understood.

One day, Noor brought her notebook filled with poetry. Rayan listened, entranced, as she read verses written in ink and emotion.

“This is beautiful,” he said. “You speak like you paint.”

“And you draw like you feel,” she replied, smiling.

They’d sit for hours. He’d sketch; she’d write. The world faded around them.

But with each passing day, an invisible clock ticked louder.

Rayan had only come for 15 days.

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Part 4: The Unspoken Fear

On the 10th day, they sat under a tree outside the gallery. Noor, for the first time, seemed distant.

Rayan noticed.

“Are you alright?” he asked.

She didn’t look up. “You’re leaving soon.”

He was silent.

“I’m scared,” she finally said. “Of you leaving… and this just becoming a memory.”

He reached across and gently touched her hand.

“I don’t want to be a memory.”

“But you will be,” she whispered. “People don’t stay.”

“I want to,” he said.

Noor looked at him, eyes trembling. “Then promise me, even when you go, don’t forget what this silence meant.”

“I couldn’t forget even if I tried,” Rayan replied.

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Part 5: The Goodbye That Wasn’t

On the final evening, Rayan asked Noor to meet him by the sea—at Clifton Beach.

As the sun melted into the Arabian Sea, Rayan stood barefoot, wind in his hair, a small box in his hand.

“I brought this from Istanbul,” he said. “My mother gave it to me before she passed. She said, ‘One day, you’ll find someone who makes you feel more than words ever can. Give her this stone. She’ll understand.’”

He opened the box. Inside was a delicate silver ring with a tiny sapphire.

“It’s not an engagement ring,” he clarified. “It’s a promise ring. A promise that I will come back. If you’ll wait.”

Noor didn’t speak.

She took the ring. Held it gently. Her fingers trembled, but her heart felt calm.

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Part 6: The Silence in Between

After Rayan left, Noor didn’t try to stay in touch.

She didn’t chase. Didn’t text. Didn’t wait by the phone.

But she kept the sketch. The ring. The poetry.

She wrote new verses, drew her own sketches, drank her chai alone—but never with bitterness.

Sometimes, silence isn’t absence. It’s protection.

Rayan too didn’t send long emails or social media posts. But every gallery he visited, he left one sketch titled:

“Noor: The Woman Who Spoke Without Words.”

They lived apart. But never truly alone.

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Part 7: The Return

Exactly two years later, Noor heard a knock at her door.

A young Turkish woman stood outside with a large canvas and a sealed golden envelope.

“For you,” she smiled. “From someone who kept his promise.”

Noor opened the envelope.

Inside was an invitation:

"Rayan & Noor — An Exhibition of Eternal Love"

Location: Istanbul Art Museum

Featuring the collaborative story of silence, sketches, and chai.

Noor removed the canvas cover.

Her portrait, painted in vivid oils—this time, smiling, not just silent. Behind her was the Istanbul skyline merging into Karachi’s shores.

At the bottom, Rayan had signed:

“One glance. One silence... and a lifetime changed.”

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Epilogue: Some Love Stories Don’t Need Volume

They say the loudest love stories are built on declarations, grand gestures, and noisy passion.

But some love stories are soft. Built on eye contact, on shared tea, on quiet benches and unspoken promises.

Rayan and Noor’s story didn’t begin with “I love you.”

It began with silence.

And in that silence, they found a love the world could hear—even if they never had to say it out loud.

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Muhammad Faizan

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