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My Elevator Pitch

What would You let Me Say?

By Jay LeTron DobbinsPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 3 min read

What if I only had a few seconds to say to you, would you open your mind and let these words flow through?

What if I only had just a moment in time, what if the chance was little and I had to convince you to be mine?

What if we got on and knew that getting off a different floors was minimum chance for to score?

What if offered to carry your bags just to ease your mind, but what if I mentioned in a few second of how I would enjoy to allow you to unwind?

What if asked for your number in such a micro-minute? Then gave you a dream of satisfaction while I was up in it?

What if I told you a thousand stories in a short period of this elevator episode, then I start to convince you that had an ultimate love mode?

What if I saw you on that elevator looking at me and I told you a quick story about you and I?

What if you gave me time just to figure things out? What about the stopping between floors and talking things out?

What about seconds between buttons you enjoy the scent of my Tom Ford ways? Then tell how soft kisses when never cease for the rest of your days!

What about a meeting off this box, just you and I? Tell you 'bout the places we could fly!

What about a conversation that would last longer than three minutes and there's a lost of time? Just to tell about made up drinks with a twist of lime!

What about holding hands and never letting go? What about dinner and seeing these eyes and the concern that shows?

What if I told you that a wrote a song with lyrics that never runs dry? Gave you these words and wished that we'd take the friendly skies!

What if this elevator gave me many opportunities to make my way toward you? Would you give me a chance and be open up to what I could do?

What if I could say over a thousand words to you and give a glimpse of what my heart could do?

What if I gave this certain look? Then I could give all the things within and the effort to win you over and the time it took.

What if these seconds are the only time I have? Then I would say to you please don't get confused on this quick and simple, odd math!

What if it time was made to be for you and me? Would give me the consideration to explain our destiny?

What if I told you I'm willing to hold a lifetime of smiles and memories? Give you confirmation that things are safe with me.

What if I wrote you letters every other day? Wishing that our meeting would go way past this day!

What if this meeting froze the moving hands of time and held the dropping sand from the glass, and gave some more time to admire that azz?

What about extending this meeting far beyond these closing doors and constant chimes? Give me more than a second and a true definition that keep no track of time.

What about taking dinner so I can send this elevator back to the lobby floor? Give you many reasons to see me more.

What about telling you to look no further and just to flow with me? What if I told you that these words came from the sight of you being next to me?

What about you and I?

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About the Creator

Jay LeTron Dobbins

Casual writer! Love to express in print! Tell people how you feel and love life to the fullest with no regrets. Try to say something good about a person when they can hear it, and not when they are gone! Love like no tomorrow.

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