“Back to the Living”

By AK

I didn’t notice the dust until the sunlight hit it. Floating specks dancing through the air like little ghosts. It was quiet, and for the first time in weeks, that quiet wasn’t screaming at me.

I sat at the kitchen table, half a cup of cold tea in front of me. The kind of tea you make to feel normal, even if you forget to drink it. I didn’t remember boiling the water. Maybe I never did. Maybe the cup had been there since last night.

The radio played something low and slow. Jazz. Or maybe soul. The kind of music that hums in the bones. I used to hate it—always said it sounded like sadness with a saxophone. But today, it matched the stillness, and I let it play.

My phone buzzed twice. I didn’t check it. People had started calling again. First out of politeness, then out of worry, then out of habit. They were trying to pull me back into the world. I wasn’t sure if I was ready to come.

The truth is, I’d vanished long before anyone noticed. Long before the funeral, before the condolences, before the casseroles left on the porch in foil-covered dishes. Grief didn’t hit like a truck—it came in slow waves. Quiet ones. The kind you think you can stand in until your knees give out.

I looked at the chair across from me. Empty.

A month ago, it held someone. He used to sit there every morning with his ridiculous blue mug that said “World’s Okayest Husband.” He loved that mug. Thought it was funny. I hated it, but now it sat on the shelf like an artifact. Untouched.

That morning, something shifted. Not dramatically, not like in the movies where the widow throws open the curtains and starts running marathons. But something small. A flicker.

I got up, took a breath, and opened the window. Just one.

The breeze came in, warm and full of July. Outside, a bird chirped. Somewhere, a kid laughed. And just like that, life knocked gently on the door I’d closed.

I didn’t open it. Not all the way. But I stepped closer.

I rinsed the tea out. Boiled new water. Sat down again and sipped it while it was hot.

My phone buzzed again. I glanced at it.

"You don’t have to talk. Just come sit. We’ll watch stupid TV and eat popcorn."

– From: Jenna

She was my sister. Older by two years and annoyingly persistent. She’d texted me every day since he died. Never with pressure. Just presence.

This time, I typed back.

“Okay. I’ll come by at 4.”

The message sent. No fireworks, no music swells. Just a moment. But it was enough.

I walked to the bedroom. Picked out clothes that didn’t smell like sleep. Combed my hair. Looked at my face in the mirror—still mine, just… dimmer.

Before I left, I passed the shelf. The mug was still there. I reached out, touched it gently, then left it be.

Outside, the world was busy being itself. Cars moved. People walked. A dog barked.

And for the first time in a long time, I felt like maybe—just maybe—I could rejoin it.

Not all at once. But one step at a time.

Back to the living.

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Back to the Living

By AK

I didn’t notice the dust until the sunlight hit it. Floating specks dancing through the air like little ghosts. It was quiet, and for the first time in weeks, that quiet wasn’t screaming at me.

I sat at the kitchen table, half a cup of cold tea in front of me. The kind of tea you make to feel normal, even if you forget to drink it. I didn’t remember boiling the water. Maybe I never did. Maybe the cup had been there since last night. The mug had a crack on the side now. Tiny, like a wrinkle.

The radio played something low and slow. Jazz. Or maybe soul. The kind of music that hums in the bones. I used to hate it—always said it sounded like sadness with a saxophone. But today, it matched the stillness, and I let it play.

My phone buzzed twice. I didn’t check it.

People had started calling again. First out of politeness, then out of worry, then out of habit. They were trying to pull me back into the world. I wasn’t sure if I was ready to come.

The truth is, I’d vanished long before anyone noticed. Long before the funeral, before the condolences, before the casseroles left on the porch in foil-covered dishes. Grief didn’t hit like a truck—it came in slow waves. Quiet ones. The kind you think you can stand in until your knees give out.

I looked at the chair across from me. Empty.

A month ago, it held someone.

He used to sit there every morning with his ridiculous blue mug that said “World’s Okayest Husband.” He loved that mug. Thought it was funny. I hated it, but now it sat on the shelf like an artifact. Untouched. He'd always overfill it, tea dripping down the side, burning his fingers. He’d swear under his breath and then laugh like it was the funniest thing in the world. I’d roll my eyes and hand him a napkin.

Now there were no more spills. No more laughter.

Just quiet.

That morning, something shifted. Not dramatically, not like in the movies where the widow throws open the curtains and starts running marathons. But something small. A flicker.

I got up, took a breath, and opened the window. Just one.

The breeze came in, warm and full of July. Outside, a bird chirped. Somewhere, a kid laughed. And just like that, life knocked gently on the door I’d closed.

I didn’t open it. Not all the way. But I stepped closer.

I rinsed the tea out. Boiled new water. Sat down again and sipped it while it was hot.

My phone buzzed again. I glanced at it.

"You don’t have to talk. Just come sit. We’ll watch stupid TV and eat popcorn."

—From: Jenna

My sister. Older by two years and annoyingly persistent. She’d texted me every day since he died. Never with pressure. Just presence. That mattered more than I could admit.

This time, I typed back.

“Okay. I’ll come by at 4.”

The message sent. No fireworks, no music swells. Just a moment. But it was enough.

I walked to the bedroom. Picked out clothes that didn’t smell like sleep. Combed my hair. Looked at my face in the mirror—still mine, just… dimmer. Still me, but like a shadow version. I blinked at myself. My lips cracked when I smiled, like a muscle being reactivated.

Before I left, I passed the shelf. The mug was still there. I reached out, touched it gently. My fingers traced the letters. “Okayest.” It didn’t feel like a joke anymore. It felt like something holy.

I left it where it was.

Outside, the world was busy being itself. Cars moved. People walked. A dog barked. A man across the street trimmed his hedges like nothing had changed in the world.

And maybe, for him, nothing had.

For me, everything had.

But for the first time in a long time, I felt like maybe—just maybe—I could rejoin it. Not all at once. But one step at a time. Back to the living.

As I locked the door behind me, I looked at the sky. It was pale blue, stretched wide like a promise.