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Young People's Journey to the Abandoned House

Deep in the mysteries behind the open door, young men get lost in a world of darkness that knows no end

By kheireddine louglaibPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
Young People's Journey to the Abandoned House

On a dark night, with raindrops falling heavily on the windows of old houses, there was an abandoned house located on the edge of the village. Everyone considers this house to be colored with the color of horror and ancient legends, and the village tells scary stories about this abandoned building.

A group of adventurous young people decided to explore this old house to raise the challenge and prove their bravery in front of friends. They arrived home late at night when all they could hear was the sound of rain falling heavily on the ground.

As they entered the house, they felt a dark and heavy atmosphere surrounding them. Old, antique candles were randomly going out and burning, creating strange shadows on the walls of the narrow hallways. Upstairs, they heard strange noises, as if someone was moving cautiously in the dark.

Suddenly, the lights went out and the sound stopped, so they relied on their meager torches to light their way. At that moment, a dark figure appeared on the stairwell, slowly creeping towards them. They were terrified and panicked and were unable to move.

As the figure approached, his facial features appeared in the candlelight, his eyes glowing a deep red color, and his face appeared to be disfigured with scars and wounds. The young men screamed in fright, but the dark figure did not care and continued heading towards them.

Suddenly, the lights suddenly went on, and the dark figure disappeared. They found themselves in a completely dark room, but this time, they were alone. There was no trace of the suspicious figure.

They retrieved their cell phones to use as a light, and when they regained vision, they discovered themselves in a room filled with blood. The walls, floor, and even the ceiling were covered in blood, and they stood in the center of a circle on which was written in the ancient language, “Be careful what you seek, for it may find you and swallow you up in endless darkness.”

The shock of the vision took the young men, but they were unable to escape, so they found themselves trapped in this cursed house. The proud smile of courage turned into screams of terror, and they realized that they had entered another world that did not know the laws of nature, where darkness controlled everything and horror lurked around every corner.

As they walked around the blood-filled room, they felt an unnatural movement around them. Shadows were moving and gathering around them like evil spirits. They heard whispering voices creeping into their ears, calling their names in a terrifying way. “Why did you come here?” Those words echoed in their minds as voices foretelling possible evil.

Suddenly, the lights turned into complete darkness, and they heard terrifying screams filling the air. They expected to be victims of something they could not imagine. But while they were waiting to die, the lights suddenly came back on.

They now found themselves in a strange and unfamiliar place. The abandoned house in the village was not next to them, but rather they were in a dark, misty forest. There was no clear path, and the trees hung like huge shadows surrounding them.

At first, they tried to return to the village, but the further they walked, the more mysterious and dark it became. The whispering voices began to come back again, calling their names and growing in intensity. Someone felt a cold touch on his shoulder, and when he turned around, he found no one.

The forest begins to change around them, revealing images from a dark and ominous past. They saw ghosts of people who entered the abandoned house and disappeared into this dark world. They live in a vicious cycle of time, where horror and darkness recur.

They begin to realize that the abandoned house is not just an abandoned structure, but a portal to a dark world dominated by supernatural forces. They were not heroes discovering demons, but rather they were prey in a game bigger than themselves, without end in this cursed dimension.

As they disappeared into the darkness, the last lights went out, and the mystery turned into fading whispers in the night wind, carrying with them the secrets of the dark world, and the history of those who experienced the horror of the abandoned house, so their story became part of the frightening legends told in that village.

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About the Creator

kheireddine louglaib

I am an article writer and author of books on several sites in different fields

My website link: https://blogclub.com

Email link: [email protected]

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