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Who Are You?

Part 2

By Elizabeth RenteriaPublished 3 years ago 5 min read

As I think back to my dream I was entirely scared because I was indeed convinced that it was real I finally decided to brush it off. I look over at my phone and see a text from Adam it said “ good morning beautiful, I hope you have a good day when can we see each other again “. As I read that message I am still very shocked and not knowing if I should text back or tell him it’s better to part ways. But me wanting to get reassurance texted him that we can meet for lunch today. I stood up from bed and walked around my room and make a checklist from the “dream” I had I remember he broke my window but it was completely intact, I remember taking a bath and indeed I did do that because I didn’t drain the water . But did the whole proposal actually happen to or was that a dream as well. I get ready for my lunch with Adam and meet him at a coffee shop . The first question I ask him is did we go to dinner last night I can’t remember very much . He then said no we did not we were supposed to but I never responded back to him . I quickly look back at my phone and in fact I never responded .

I finally get a sense of relief thinking he’s not a actual psycho path. I then tell him the dream i had he gives me this look and then laughs it out saying you have a hefty imagination. We finally end our lunch and I go home to relax and watch my crime shows again . I get a notification on my social media account that I received a message from a Jasmine Pierce . I have no idea who Jasmine pierce is or what she could possibly want from me , I open the message and all it said was “Be careful , Be aware, Don’t let her out”. I was thinking ok this girl is just talking crazy it was probably a mistake a lot of my friends are receiving these spam messages lately . So I decided to delete it .

Within 45 minutes I get a text from Adam apologizing about his ex girlfriend messaging me , he explained that she wasn’t ready for there relationship to end and that she wanted him back . I said oh no it’s ok I honestly thought it was a spam account. He then laughed it off and asked if he can come over tonight and he’ll bring take out i agreed. He arrived at about 7:30 PM that night and I was in the middle of one of my crime shows . I told him I can change it if he wants but insisted he watches these all the time , that watching these makes the perfect killer. I nervously just laugh it off and pull out some silverware and plates so we can eat . We pop open a bottle of wine and sit on the couch to watch the show together , I’m watching a really good episode and I’m getting into it i start yelling nooo don’t go in there , and omg he’s going to get you run . He just looks at me and laughs, then says those woman had no chance .

I look over and say we’ll what makes you say that , then turns over to me and says we’ll first of all there clueless they invite these men they have only known for a couple of weeks into there house , they believe they can trust these men by being sweetalked , that is what makes a women vulnerable and a easy kill in there situations there clueless . He says for example you have me in your house right you only let me in after two dates imagine if I were to kill you right now . Who would know. At this point I’m getting pretty scared and laugh it off nervously . I then decide to end the night early and play the im super tired card. I walk him out and as I’m closing the door I hear remember me remember me . I put my back up against the door and my heart starts pounding I get dizzy and fall to the ground . I wake up a couple minutes later to my power being out . I look outside to see if anyone is having that issue as well and no one’s house is out of power but mine .

I look around for my phone to turn on my flashlight and go to check the fuse box the wires are cut . I get very scared and nervous and as I was about to dial 911 I hear footsteps upstairs . I’m thinking to myself no way in hell I’m going upstairs to check on that I’ve seen way to many scary shows and crime to know if I do I’m dead . So I hide in my downstairs bathroom and call 911 to hurry to my home theres someone in my house . I hear the movement go from upstairs to my stairs to eventually my kitchen . No one is talking whoever is in my home is just walking around . I quickly text Adam to please come to my house there’s a intruder as I send the message I hear a “DING” . I said that can’t be Adam in my home so I send another just to make sure and hear a “DING” right Infront of the bathroom door that I’m in. My heart is pounding so fast , he start jingling the knob but I hear the police sirens and he quickly runs away .

Officers call out and I say I’m here I’m here , they then proceed to ask me are you ok do you know who was here did you see anyone ? I said no but I may know who broke in , hearing those messages was all the proff I needed to know it was Adam . I told the officers about the so called dream i had and had them checkout the window they said it looks as if it was repaired , they officially made my case into a investigation and set a warrant out for Adam. I have not heard from Adam since that night and I hope it continues to stay like that .

1 week goes by and I’m in bed watching Night Of The Living Dead a classic zombie movie and on of my favorites . When all of a sudden I hear the glass break to the living room window , i pause the movie but I’m already scared from even watching it in the begging I quickly sit and listen then hear someone sprinting up the stairs to my room I jump out of bed to lock the door but before I could make it the intruder breaks in the door .. I fall back hard and hit my head and low and behold it’s Adam .. He says did you miss me baby ..

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Elizabeth Renteria

A young mother who loves to express herself by writting .

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