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Whispers Beneath the Moonlight

A Girl, a Deer, and the Night That Changed Everything

By Real TanhaPublished 8 months ago 4 min read
A Girl, a Deer, and the Night That Changed Everything

The moon was full and radiant, casting a silver glow across the quiet forest. Trees stood like ancient guardians, their shadows stretching long across the mossy floor. A gentle breeze stirred the leaves, and in the stillness of the night, every sound was sacred—the hoot of an owl, the soft trickle of a hidden stream, the rhythmic rustle of the grass beneath careful steps.

Among the trees walked a girl, no older than twelve. Her name was Liora. She had soft, raven-black hair that danced in the wind and eyes the color of forest earth. She wore a simple woolen dress and a necklace made from carved wood, shaped like a crescent moon. In her hands she carried a small lantern, its flame flickering gently, though she barely needed it—moonlight lit her path well enough.

Liora came to the forest every full moon. It was her secret place, where the world felt less heavy, and her thoughts could breathe. But this night was different. She could feel it. There was a weight in the air—not fear, but something deep and ancient. It was as if the trees themselves were watching.

She came to a clearing, a place she knew well. The moon shone directly overhead, blanketing the meadow in silver light. And there, standing in the center of the clearing, was a deer.

Not just any deer.

He was tall and regal, with antlers like twisted branches of ice. His fur shimmered like moonlight woven into silk, and his eyes glowed with a soft blue light, calm and full of knowing. Liora froze. She had seen him before—only once, almost a year ago to the night. And now, he was here again.

She took a careful step forward.

The deer didn’t run. Instead, he tilted his head gently, as if inviting her.

Liora lowered her lantern to the grass and approached slowly, her breath catching in her throat. “Hello,” she whispered, though she wasn’t sure if she meant to speak aloud.

The deer blinked slowly, and then, astonishingly, he stepped forward as well. The distance between them shrank until Liora stood just inches from his muzzle. Carefully, she reached out a hand.

Her fingers brushed his fur—it was warm and impossibly soft. For a heartbeat, the world stopped.

Then something remarkable happened.

The deer knelt down before her and, with a nudge of his nose, gestured toward his back.

“You want me to ride you?” she asked in disbelief.

The deer nodded.

Liora hesitated. Every story her grandmother told her about the moon spirits echoed in her ears. Animals that came from the moon. Forest guardians. Magical beings that visited only those who were pure of heart. She had thought them fairy tales.

And yet here she was.

With a deep breath, she climbed onto his back. The moment she did, the deer rose, and the world seemed to shift.

They galloped.

But not like a normal deer would. His hooves barely touched the ground. It was like flying. Trees whipped by, and moonbeams danced around them. Stars shimmered brighter. They crossed streams without splashing, and leaped over roots without a sound. Liora felt the forest embrace her—not just around her, but within her.

After a time, they stopped at a hill that looked over the valley. The moon seemed larger here, and the stars more numerous.

The deer turned his head and looked at her. And then, to Liora’s astonishment, he spoke—not with lips, but inside her mind.

“You are the last child of the line of the forest keepers,” the voice said, gentle and deep. “The bond between your family and the woods has nearly faded. But your heart remembers.”

Liora’s eyes widened. Her grandmother had often spoken of a time when her people cared for the forest, lived with the animals, and protected the balance of nature. But those times were long gone. Roads had cut through ancient groves. Machines now replaced song and silence.

“I didn’t know I was part of that,” she said aloud.

“You remembered the forest. You listened. That was enough.”

Liora looked down at the glowing valley. She could see the scars of machines—cleared land, smoke in the distance.

“Can I fix it?” she asked.

“You must begin. One soul at a time. The forest will help you, as it helped your ancestors. But you must never forget the moon.”

The deer lowered his head and from his antlers a small light floated down—a crystal shaped like a teardrop. It pulsed softly with moonlight.

“This will guide you when you lose your way.”

Liora took the crystal with both hands. As she did, the stars above seemed to shimmer in approval.

The deer turned back toward the forest, and she knew it was time to go. The ride back felt shorter, like the forest was carrying them itself.

They returned to the same clearing where it had begun. Liora climbed down and stood before the deer, who now looked tired but proud.

“Will I see you again?” she asked.

“Whenever the moon is full, and your heart is open.”

He turned, stepped into the shadows, and vanished.

Liora stood there for a while, the crystal warm in her hand, heart full of wonder and responsibility. She looked up at the moon, shining like a watchful eye in the heavens.

The night had changed her.

She was no longer just a girl in the forest.

She was the keeper of its whispering soul.

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The End

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