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When Brothers Become Enemies

A Nation’s Silent Collapse

By The Manatwal KhanPublished 7 months ago 4 min read

Once, we shared bread. We grew up speaking the same language, singing the same songs, and praying under the same sky. But something broke in our nation — slowly, then all at once. Now, people who once stood shoulder to shoulder are turning on each other with blades, bullets, and blind hatred. Yesterday, that truth became horrifyingly real. My friend was slaughtered — not by a foreign invader, not by a criminal — but by his own countrymen, in front of a military castle meant to protect us all.

His name was Amir. He wasn't a politician or a fighter. He was a teacher. A quiet soul who believed in the power of knowledge more than the force of fists. He taught kids from both sides of our community — hoping, somehow, education could build a bridge over a river of hate. Yesterday, that hope was crushed beneath boots and blades.

The military castle stands like a ghost of a past era — a stone symbol of strength and national pride. It was built to guard us from outside forces. But yesterday, it stood silent while Amir was beaten, tortured, and killed in broad daylight. No soldier moved. No alarm was raised. The killers — fellow citizens — walked away.

This is not just Amir's story. It is the story of our country: how we turned on ourselves. How we allowed political lies, tribalism, and fear to carve a deep divide in our hearts. It started with whispers — "they are different," "they don't belong," "they are the enemy." And we believed them.

We started drawing invisible lines between "us" and "them" — even though "they" spoke our tongue, lived in our villages, and shared our blood. Soon, violence followed. At first, it was distant: skirmishes in far-off provinces, protests turned riots. But then it crept into our neighborhoods. Into our lives. Into our friendships.

Amir believed he could rise above it. He once told me, “A nation dies not when its borders are invaded, but when its people forget each other’s humanity.” He refused to leave, even when threats came. He said if he ran, hate would win. Yesterday, hate did win — but only for a moment. His death is now a mirror, showing us what we’ve become.

And what have we become?

A country where soldiers guard stone walls but not innocent lives.

A place where children grow up learning fear instead of peace.

A people who have forgotten that our strength lies in unity, not division.

The tragedy of civil conflict is that it turns brother against brother. Not because of who we are, but because of what we’ve been taught to believe. Propaganda has become more powerful than truth. Lies repeated often enough have drowned out logic and compassion.

What happened to Amir wasn't just a murder. It was a message — a declaration that even peaceful voices are not safe. That even a teacher can be seen as a threat simply for refusing to choose a side in a war of hate. It was a sign that we are deep into a civil collapse, where national identity means nothing if it’s not tied to allegiance.

The military did nothing. Some say they were ordered to stand down. Others say they sympathized with the killers. But what’s worse is that most people around didn’t intervene. They watched. Some even filmed. That’s the terrifying part — not just that Amir died, but that he died alone in front of his own people.

We must say this clearly: this is not just the result of war. This is the result of silence. Of people like me — who saw the signs but thought, “It won’t reach us.” Of neighbors who chose safety over solidarity. Of leaders who preached division for votes, and of citizens who nodded along.

But silence is no longer an option.

Amir’s blood still stains the stones in front of the military castle. His empty classroom still has chalk on the board. His students are now afraid to return — not just because their teacher is gone, but because his death taught them a horrifying lesson: kindness can get you killed.

We owe it to Amir — and to every victim of this senseless internal war — to speak up. To remember that nations are not built by flags or forts, but by the love and trust between people. And we must rebuild that trust, piece by fragile piece.

The road ahead is hard. It will take courage to forgive, strength to confront the truth, and time to heal wounds too deep for words. But we must start.

Let Amir’s story not be another tragedy buried in silence. Let it be the last wake-up call we need.

Because if we don’t change now, there will be more Amirs. More silence. More stones soaked in blood.

And one day, we will look around and realize that we no longer have a nation — only ruins built by hate.

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The Manatwal Khan

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