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🕯 Title: “The Whispers from Room 306”

Some doors are closed for a reason.

By Adil Aslam SmiPublished 7 months ago • 3 min read

It was a rainy Friday evening when Adeel checked into the Ridgewood Inn, a crumbling old hotel on the outskirts of town. He was traveling for work and needed a cheap place to stay the night. The sign outside flickered with broken neon: “WELCOME TO RIDGEW__D.”

Inside, the lobby smelled of damp carpet and stale air. An old man at the desk barely looked up as Adeel walked in.

“One night,” Adeel said, handing over his ID.

The man’s eyes narrowed. “Room 306,” he mumbled, pushing a brass key across the counter. “Elevator’s out. Take the stairs.”

As Adeel turned to go, the man added, almost as a whisper, “Don’t open the closet.”

Adeel paused. “What?”

The man smiled faintly. “Nothing. Enjoy your stay.”

Thinking it was just a weird joke, Adeel climbed three flights of creaky wooden stairs. The hallway was dimly lit, lined with faded wallpaper and doors that hadn’t seen paint in decades. His room—306—was at the far end.

He stepped inside.

It was… fine. Old, but clean enough. A queen bed, a dusty mirror, an armchair near the window, and a large oak wardrobe in the corner.

The rain tapped gently at the window as night fell. Adeel lay on the bed scrolling through his phone. No signal. Of course.

He got up to plug in his charger, and as he passed the wardrobe, he noticed something strange. There was a piece of string tied around the handles, keeping it shut. Not a lock—just an old, fraying string.

He remembered the old man’s words: Don’t open the closet.

Now it felt less like a joke and more like a warning.

Curiosity prickled his skin.

He walked up to the wardrobe, stared at it for a moment… and untied the string.

Nothing happened.

He opened the door slowly.

It was empty—just shadows, old hangers, and the faint scent of dust and cedar.

He chuckled at himself. “Scared of an old wardrobe. Pathetic.”

But as he turned to walk away, he heard it.

A soft whisper.

Faint. Dry. Like someone breathing secrets into his ear.

He froze.

He turned back to the wardrobe.

Nothing.

He leaned closer.

Still nothing.

Shaking his head, he sat back on the bed. Probably just the wind or the building settling. Old places make sounds. No big deal.

Then the whisper came again.

Clearer this time. “He opened it…”

Adeel’s spine stiffened. He turned slowly.

The wardrobe door was open—just an inch more than before.

He was certain he had closed it.

He stood up.

Creeeaak.

The wardrobe opened a little wider. He took a step back.

Inside, it was darker than it should have been. Pitch black, like a void, sucking the light around it.

And then something moved.

Not fast. Not sharp. Just a slow shifting, like cloth sliding across the floor. Like someone—or something—was inside.

“Hello?” Adeel whispered.

Silence.

Then—

Thump.

A single footstep from inside the wardrobe.

Adeel slammed the door shut, wrapped the string around the handles, and backed away.

The whisper came again, now from right behind him:

“You let it out.”

He spun around—no one there.

The room was empty. Still.

But the air had changed. Heavy. Cold.

He grabbed his bag and bolted out the door, running down the hallway toward the stairs. Each step echoed behind him—more than just his own.

He reached the lobby, breathless.

The old man was still at the desk.

“I—I opened it,” Adeel gasped. “The wardrobe in 306. There’s something—something in there.”

The man didn’t react.

Instead, he slowly looked up and said, “You weren’t supposed to go in that room.”

“What? You gave me the key!”

“No,” the man said. “I gave you Room 307.”

He turned the ledger around.

Adeel looked.

It read: Adeel Khan – Room 307.

He felt sick.

“Then who’s in 306?” he whispered.

The man’s voice was flat. “No one. Not for forty years.”

Adeel turned to run, but the lobby door wouldn’t budge. He banged on it, screaming.

Behind him, footsteps came down the stairs—slow and wet, like someone dragging their feet through water.

He didn’t turn around.

He couldn’t.

But he felt it.

The cold breath on his neck.

The whisper that followed him from that day forward:

“You let me out.”


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☠️ Moral of the Story:

Some doors are locked for your safety—not theirs.

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Adil Aslam Smi

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  • Austin smith 7 months ago

    🥰🥰🥰

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