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The Whispers from the Attic: A Night I Can’t Forget

The Unseen Terror That Haunted My Family.

By Haad KhanPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

It started on a quiet, uneventful evening, the kind where the air is still, and the only sound is the rustling of leaves outside. My family had just moved into a quaint, old house at the edge of town. It was the kind of place you’d find in a horror movie – creaky floors, a peeling roof, and, most unsettling of all, an attic that no one seemed to want to talk about.

I was eleven when we moved in, and I remember feeling a strange sense of unease the moment we stepped inside. The house had a history, or so I was told. But what struck me the most was the attic. It was always locked, but every now and then, I would hear the faintest of noises coming from behind the door – whispers.

I tried to convince myself it was just the wind or maybe the house settling. But deep down, I knew something wasn’t right.

One night, as the clock struck midnight, I woke to the sound of soft, hushed whispers drifting from the attic. It was so faint at first, I thought it was a dream. But then I heard it again, clearer this time. I tried to ignore it, pulling the covers over my head, but the whispers grew louder, almost as if they were calling me.

Unable to shake the feeling of dread that settled in my stomach, I quietly got out of bed and tiptoed towards the attic door. The wooden floorboards creaked beneath my feet, and my heart raced with every step. My hand hovered over the rusty doorknob. Should I open it? What if I wasn’t supposed to?

With trembling fingers, I twisted the knob. The door creaked open, revealing the darkness within. The air was cold, and the faint scent of something long forgotten filled the room. I could barely make out the outline of old furniture, boxes stacked in corners, and thick layers of dust. But what caught my attention was the source of the whispers.

In the farthest corner of the room, a small, dim light flickered. I stepped closer, my curiosity outweighing my fear. That’s when I saw it – an old, cracked mirror leaning against the wall. The whispers seemed to be coming from it, echoing from the glass.

I reached out, my reflection staring back at me. But then, something strange happened. The reflection shifted. The face in the mirror twisted, its eyes dark and hollow, its mouth silently forming words. The whispers grew louder, now like a chorus of voices. They were no longer just words but something darker, more menacing.

“Leave this place,” the voice hissed. “Leave before it’s too late.”

I stumbled back, my heart pounding in my chest. I turned to run, but the door slammed shut with a deafening bang. The whispers turned to shrieks, and the air grew unbearably cold. My breath came in shallow gasps as I scrambled to open the door, but it wouldn’t budge. Panic gripped me, and I felt the walls closing in. It was like the house itself was alive, suffocating me, trapping me in its grip.

Then, as I stood there, frozen in terror, the light from the mirror flickered once more, revealing a shadowy figure standing behind me. It was tall, its face obscured by a dark hood, but I could feel its presence. It wasn’t human. The whispers became clearer now, and the figure stepped closer, its cold fingers grazing my shoulder.

“Why are you here?” it whispered, its voice like ice. “You should never have come.”

I tried to scream, but my voice was swallowed by the darkness. My legs felt like they were made of lead, and every movement was a struggle. I reached for the door again, but the figure grabbed my arm, its grip icy and unrelenting.

“Leave now, before it’s too late,” the figure warned, its voice now echoing in my mind.

I didn’t know how, but I managed to break free from its grip. I ran, stumbling over old crates and forgotten furniture, the whispers chasing me, growing louder and more frantic with every step. The door finally gave way, and I bolted down the stairs, my heart racing.

I didn’t stop until I was outside, gasping for air, the chill of the night air biting at my skin. I could still hear the whispers, though, lingering in the back of my mind. I wanted to forget everything I had seen, to erase the images of the shadowy figure and the twisted reflection in the mirror. But I knew, deep down, that the whispers hadn’t stopped. They were still out there, waiting for the next person to wander into the attic. And one day, they would call again.

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