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The Whispering shadows of the old mansion!

An untold story of Sarah.

By Lisa smithPublished 2 years ago 3 min read

The old mansion stood on the outskirts of a quiet, forgotten town, shrouded in tales of darkness and despair. It was said that the mansion was cursed, that it held secrets untold, and that those who ventured inside never returned the same.

One gloomy autumn evening, a group of curious friends decided to put their courage to the test. Among them was Sarah, a skeptic who scoffed at the notion of curses and ghosts. She believed the stories were mere fabrications spun by the townsfolk to keep trespassers away.

As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting eerie shadows, the friends gathered at the mansion's wrought-iron gate. It creaked open with a mournful groan, and they ventured inside with flashlights.

The mansion's interior was a decaying symphony of forgotten opulence. Dusty chandeliers hung from the ceiling, their crystals long dulled. Tattered portraits lined the walls, eyes of long-dead family members staring out. The air was thick with an unsettling stillness, broken only by the occasional drip from a leaky roof.

Their exploration took them deeper into the mansion's labyrinthine corridors. Sarah's skepticism remained unwavering, even as her friends' unease grew. That is, until they reached the door at the end of a particularly dimly lit hallway. It bore an inscription in an archaic script: "Do not open this door."

Sarah couldn't resist the urge to scoff again, and with a dramatic flair, she pushed the door open.

The room beyond was a chamber of darkness. The only light source came from their flashlights, which cast eerie, flickering shadows on the peeling wallpaper. In the center of the room stood a large, ornate mirror.

As Sarah approached the mirror, she couldn't help but notice her reflection was distorted, twisted in unnatural ways. Her friends' voices grew hushed as they watched in mounting horror. Sarah reached out to touch the mirror's surface, and as her fingertips made contact, a cold shiver raced down her spine.

Then, the mirror began to whisper. Soft, chilling voices emanated from its depths, their words unintelligible but filled with malevolence. Sarah tried to step away, but an unseen force held her in place. Her reflection in the mirror grinned maliciously, its eyes glowing with a sinister light.

The room's temperature plummeted, and the walls seemed to close in on them. Sarah's friends screamed, frantically trying to pull her away from the mirror, but it was as if she was being drawn into its depths. Her reflection reached out and grabbed her wrist with icy fingers, and she felt herself being pulled, inch by inch, into the mirror.

In a final, desperate act, Sarah's friends managed to break her free, but it came at a cost. Her reflection remained trapped within the mirror, still grinning that malevolent grin.

Terrified and shaken, they fled the mansion, leaving it behind with its cursed secrets and the untold horror of the whispering shadows.

Years later, the mansion still stands, its curse unbroken. Visitors hear the whispers from that forbidden room, and sometimes, on moonless nights, they catch glimpses of Sarah's reflection, forever trapped in a realm of darkness and despair, waiting to pull others into its chilling embrace.

The legend of the mansion endures a cautionary tale of the price one may pay for dismissing the supernatural, a reminder that some secrets are best left undisturbed in the shadowy corners of the past. The mansion stands as a sentinel of the unknown, a testament to the enduring power of fear and the haunting echoes of a dark history.

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About the Creator

Lisa smith

Lisa Smith, a 26-year-old London resident, is a captivating storyteller who crafts imaginative tales that traverse fiction and non-fiction. Her versatile writing brings characters and worlds to life, leaving a lasting impression.

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  • Lisa smith (Author)2 years ago

    Anyone who read this - do not forgot to add something here :)

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