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The Whispering Mirror

Every town has its ghost stories. Whispered warnings told around campfires, abandoned houses no one dares to enter, and eerie places where shadows seem to move on their own. These tales linger in the corners of our minds because, deep down, we wonder if there might be some truth to them.

By Reiner KnappPublished 7 months ago 4 min read
The Whispering Mirror
Photo by Fares Hamouche on Unsplash

Some stories are harmless fun — dares among teenagers or spooky legends meant to scare kids on Halloween. But others feel different, heavier, as though the darkness within them still clings to the places they describe.

In the quiet town of Greystone, there’s one such story. A story about a forgotten house, a cursed mirror, and a restless spirit. For years, the locals have passed down the chilling tale of Marrowbone Manor, a place where reflections don’t always belong to the living.

If you’re brave enough, keep reading. But be warned — after hearing this story, you might think twice before looking into a mirror when the clock strikes midnight.

The Whispering Mirror

In the small, unremarkable town of Greystone, there stood a crumbling old house known to the locals as Marrowbone Manor. It had long since been abandoned, with its sagging roof, ivy-choked walls, and windows like empty, watching eyes. Nobody lived there anymore — not since the terrible night over fifty years ago when the last owner, Margaret Wrenley, was found dead, staring into a grand mirror on the second floor. Her face, they said, was twisted in unspeakable horror.

The house, of course, became the center of countless ghost stories. Children dared each other to run up to its porch on Halloween. Teenagers whispered about a cursed mirror that trapped souls, leaving them to claw at the glass for eternity. The legend was clear: if you stood before the mirror at midnight, you would see a woman’s reflection behind you — and if you turned around, she’d take your place.

But no one believed those stories anymore.

No one, except Ellie.

Ellie had always been fascinated by ghost stories. She spent her nights reading about haunted places and watching documentaries about things that went bump in the night. So, when she overheard a group of kids retelling the legend of Marrowbone Manor one evening at the diner, she made up her mind to see it for herself. It was just a story, after all. Nothing would happen.

On a stormy night in late October, Ellie grabbed her flashlight and phone and made her way to the edge of town, where the manor loomed like a broken memory against the lightning-lit sky. The wind howled through the trees, and the house creaked as though it were breathing.

Ellie pushed open a broken window and slipped inside. The air was thick with dust and rot. Faded wallpaper peeled from the walls, and old portraits with blank, accusing eyes lined the hallway. Every step she took made the floorboards groan beneath her weight.

She made her way to the grand staircase, heart pounding in her chest, and ascended carefully, one step at a time. The flickering light from her phone barely illuminated the path ahead, but at the top of the stairs, she saw it: the mirror.

It was enormous, its tarnished silver frame carved with twisting vines and screaming faces. The glass itself was so clouded with dust and age that it hardly reflected anything at all. But Ellie approached it, wiping a circle clean with the sleeve of her jacket.

She checked her phone. 11:58 PM.

"Okay," she whispered to herself, forcing a nervous smile. "Let’s get this over with."

Lightning flashed, and for a moment, she thought she saw something move in the reflection behind her. She whirled around. Nothing. Just the endless, dark hallway.

She laughed shakily. “Creepy old house,” she muttered.

11:59 PM.

The air grew colder. A draft brushed past her neck, though no windows were open. The house seemed to sigh around her, as though aware of her presence.

Midnight.

The old grandfather clock somewhere in the house began to chime. Ellie felt a tight knot of fear coil in her stomach. She stared into the mirror, expecting nothing.

But then, the glass began to fog, as though someone on the other side were breathing against it.

A pale face appeared next to hers — hollow eyes, cracked lips, and long, dark hair hanging in wet strands. The woman’s expression was empty at first, then slowly twisted into a terrible grin.

Ellie’s breath caught in her throat. Her flashlight flickered. She spun around again, but no one was there.

When she turned back, her reflection was gone.

Only the woman remained in the mirror, staring out with soulless eyes.

Tap. Tap. Tap.

Fingertips pressed against the glass from the inside. Ellie screamed and stumbled backward, but the hallway behind her seemed endless now, stretching far beyond what it had been before.

The last thing anyone heard from Ellie was a terrified voicemail left on her friend’s phone:

"It’s real… she’s in the mirror… she’s coming for me…"

When searchers arrived the next morning, the house was empty. No sign of Ellie was ever found — except for a single, fresh handprint smeared on the dusty mirror.

And now, they say, if you dare to stand before the mirror at midnight, you won’t see your own reflection.

You’ll see two figures trapped inside: the ghostly woman… and Ellie, forever pressing their hands against the glass, waiting for someone else to take their place.

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About the Creator

Reiner Knapp

I am a husband who love his family with two children. Travelling is my hobby, I used to be a backpacker. Crypto is my passion, and I like networking and affiliate marketing. https://lllpg.com/mx13x4h1

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