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✨ The Tell-Tale Heart.

“Where Fear Whispers… and Hearts Still Beat”

By Saif UllahPublished 2 months ago 4 min read

I am not mad. You must believe me. The disease had sharpened my senses, not weakened them. I could hear the faintest rustle of a leaf, the tiniest whisper of a footstep, the beating of a heart. Yet it was precisely this heightened awareness that drove me to fixate on the old man with whom I lived. I loved him, and he had never wronged me. But there was one thing about him that I could not endure: his eye. That pale, vulture-like eye, with its milky film and cold, watchful stare—it filled me with a horror I could neither explain nor contain.

For seven long nights, I watched him as he slept. I opened the door carefully, inch by inch, and tiptoed into his room with a lantern whose light I kept almost entirely hidden. Only a narrow beam escaped, just enough to pierce the darkness and touch the eye if it were open. But each night, the eye remained closed, unthreatening, and I could not act. My rage was not directed at the man; it was the eye that made my blood run cold, that filled my thoughts day and night with an unbearable tension.

On the eighth night, everything changed. My pulse quickened with a mixture of fear and anticipation. I approached the old man’s door with the utmost caution, my hand steady, my senses alert. A slight creak of the floorboard threatened to betray me, but I froze, holding my breath. Slowly, I opened the lantern, allowing a single sliver of light to fall upon the bed. And there it was—the eye. Wide, pale, and staring directly at me, cold and accusing.

The sight of it stirred a storm within me. My mind raced, my heart pounded, but I was determined. The old man’s heartbeat began to echo in my ears—first soft, then louder, more insistent. It was a sound that seemed to come from every corner of the room, yet also from beneath the floorboards, as if the very house were alive and pulsing with his fear. I could stand it no longer.

With a cry that startled even me, I seized the old man and pressed him beneath the heavy bed. I held him there, listening to the thundering of his heart, until the sound ceased. The relief was overwhelming, but it lasted only a moment. I dismembered his body carefully, hiding each piece beneath the floorboards. I ensured that not a single drop of blood stained the floor or walls. Everything was perfect. I felt triumphant, confident, and, most importantly, safe.

Hours passed in silence. The house seemed empty, yet alive with a strange tension. Then came the knock at the door. Three policemen had arrived, responding to a neighbor’s report of a strange shriek. My pulse raced, but I maintained my composure. I welcomed them with warmth and calm, even cheer. I led them through the house, answering their questions and offering explanations with a practiced ease. I even seated them directly above the place where the old man’s body lay hidden, confident that they suspected nothing.

For a moment, I felt victorious. They laughed, they chatted, oblivious to the horror beneath their feet. But then I heard it. A faint thumping, almost imperceptible at first, yet unmistakable. The heartbeat. My heartbeat? No, it was something else—an insistent, pounding rhythm that seemed to echo from the very floorboards beneath us.

It grew louder. Each pulse struck me like a hammer. I tried to speak, to joke, to drown out the sound with words, but it persisted, relentless. My calm exterior began to crack. My hands shook, my breathing quickened, and the officers’ casual smiles began to feel like mockery. How could they not hear it? The noise grew, a deafening drum in my mind, the very proof of my guilt.

I could no longer contain myself. My voice rose, my words spilling out in a torrent of confession and panic:

“Yes! Yes! I did it! Tear up the floorboards! The old man’s heart! It is beating! I hear it!”

The policemen recoiled in shock, their expressions shifting from curiosity to horror. They listened as I described the crime, as the sound that had haunted me seemed to fill the room. My obsession, my guilt, my madness—everything poured forth in that instant. The heartbeat, the eye, the act itself—they had driven me to this confession, revealing the truth that no rational thought could hide.

Even now, I remember the sensation vividly—the chill of the lantern’s light on my face, the coldness of the floor beneath my hands, the pounding in my head that echoed the heartbeat of the old man’s hidden heart. I remember the thrill of meticulous planning, the terror of anticipation, and the overwhelming relief of release, only to be replaced by the inescapable torment of conscience.

The story of the Tell-Tale Heart is not just a tale of murder; it is a journey into the human mind, where obsession and fear intertwine, where guilt becomes a living, beating force, and where the line between sanity and madness blurs. It is a story that warns of the danger of fixation, the destructive power of fear, and the ultimate inevitability of truth.

In the end, the old man’s eye, the heartbeat, and the hidden body were all symbols of something far greater: the conscience that cannot be silenced, the guilt that cannot be buried, and the truth that cannot be escaped. And so I sit here, telling this story, aware that while I have confessed, the heartbeat, that relentless sound, continues to echo in my mind—a reminder that even in victory, there is no escape from the self.

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