The Sunday That Never Ended
Some Shadows Refuse to Let Go
There was only one rule: don’t step outside after midnight.
A relic of a warning, dusty and ancient, it was whispered like a bedtime story no one could forget. The legend had clung to the town, blanketing its people in both comfort and fear, woven into Halloween like stitches through fabric. They’d been spared another Halloween, just like every year before. That eerie rule? Outgrown, they thought, safe to ignore.
But there’s a price for safety, and some shadows are slow to collect.
The first Sunday of November broke with an unusual stillness, the soft clink of jack-o'-lanterns forgotten on porches and candy wrappers drifting across silent streets like remnants of something darker. Halloween’s echo pulsed faintly, as if the day itself was lingering, stretching into the early hours of Sunday morning. And for reasons no one could understand, the rule felt alive in the air—a low hum threading unease through everyone who’d dared to walk in the street. The adults dismissed it, but children knew. Kids always know when something’s not over.
At a lone house near the old church, Jamie, a fearless fifteen-year-old, watched from her bedroom window as a figure materialized in the moonlight. Her courage was unshakeable—or had been, until tonight. The figure’s outline was impossibly tall, shadowy, dripping with something that seemed to drain light around it. She squinted, throat tightening, trying to make sense of what she was seeing. It just stood there. Waiting.
Around town, others saw it too. From behind thin curtains, cracked blinds, they watched the figure drift in and out of view—now by the park, then near the market, lingering longer at every stop. By 11:30, unease blossomed into something darker. People gathered in small huddles, voices low, faces tight with fear. An elderly man, Mr. Hollis, with eyes sharp from decades of remembering, muttered to a small, anxious crowd, “Remember the rule. Keep your doors shut. We all know what it wants.” His voice wavered, only slightly.
But fear does strange things, and curiosity does stranger. Jamie couldn’t shake the pull, that magnetic pull to open her door and walk out, to ask this figure, this shadow, what it wanted. She felt her fingers twitch against the doorframe, nearly against her will. The figure was closer now, almost at her driveway, motionless and patient, as if waiting for her to decide.
Around the town square, a few of the boldest souls ventured out, pulled by that same invisible force, hoping to confront whatever had haunted them. Mr. Hollis hobbled forward, leading them, clutching a flashlight as though it were a sword. Others held lanterns, their faces ghostly in the half-light, their breaths visible in the cold. As they circled the figure, an unsettling recognition crept into their hearts: it was not quite human, not quite shadow. It had eyes, but they seemed carved from the darkness, hollow pits that promised answers nobody wanted.
Jamie broke the silence, her voice trembling but defiant. “What do you want?”
The figure tilted its head, and a slow, sickening smile stretched across what might have been its face. In a voice that sounded like stones scraping, it answered, “One of you must join me.” The words hung heavy, a noose tightening around every throat. A deal was in the air, ancient and unavoidable.
“No,” Mr. Hollis snapped, gripping his flashlight tighter. “You’re not taking anyone tonight.”
The figure’s smile widened, stretching grotesquely, and it whispered, “The choice must be freely made.” It extended a hand, dark and gnarled, beckoning. The crowd tensed, glancing around, each one of them hoping someone else would offer themselves. Seconds ticked by, seconds that felt like hours, the silence becoming unbearable.
Jamie’s mother stepped forward, her face pale but resolved, and squeezed her daughter’s hand with a quiet, desperate strength. “Take me instead,” she whispered, her voice almost swallowed by the air. Jamie’s eyes widened, and she clutched her mother’s hand tightly, shaking her head. “No, please.”
A heavy stillness fell, thick and suffocating. The figure’s smile faded, its eyes narrowing. “A deal is a deal,” it hissed, its voice a strangled snarl. “For Halloween’s end, a sacrifice must be made.”
But Mr. Hollis had a plan—a risky one. “Form a circle of light around it,” he barked, and in a scramble, the townspeople raised their flashlights and lanterns, forming a barrier. The figure snarled, its form flickering as beams of light struck it from every side. The shadows clung to it, fighting the light, twisting and writhing like living things.
Jamie tightened her grip on her mother’s hand, watching as the figure seemed to shrink, its form flickering, becoming translucent under the intensity of the light. “You think light can save you?” it sneered, but its voice wavered. “I am older than light. I am shadow itself.”
“Maybe,” Mr. Hollis said grimly, stepping closer, “but every shadow needs something to cling to.”
With a roar that sounded like all the nightmares ever whispered in the dead of night, the figure began to crumble, shadows peeling away, piece by piece, dissolving into the air. It struggled, reaching for Jamie one last time, but the light only grew stronger. One last shriek, and it dissipated entirely, like smoke in the wind.
As dawn broke over the town, a hush settled over everyone. They looked at each other, sharing a relief too raw for words. Jamie hugged her mother, eyes brimming with tears, and whispered, “It’s over, right?”
Mr. Hollis, wiping his brow, looked around, his face weary. “For now,” he said softly.
But as they turned to leave, a shadow flickered just at the edge of their vision, faint but unmistakable. Some shadows, they would remember, never really leave.
About the Creator
Pride Bohjam
I enjoy crafting dark, twisted tales that explore the supernatural and psychological. I hope my stories offer the eerie, unpredictable thrills you're looking for. Thank you for taking the time to give them a read!


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