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The Room They Never Opened

A couple moves into an old house with one locked room. Every night, they hear soft crying from behind it. They finally open the door to find… themselves, staring back, trapped inside — begging them not to make the same mistakes.

By Waqid Ali Published 6 months ago 2 min read
The Room They Never Opened

The Room They Never Opened

Mira and Daniel had dreamed of owning a house like this — tucked in the countryside, framed by whispering trees, with a porch that seemed to invite peace. It was old, yes, but charming. Their realtor called it a “fresh start.”

On the first night, as they unpacked, they found the locked door on the second floor. Painted black, with a rusted brass handle. Daniel tugged it gently. Nothing. They assumed it led to an attic or a storage space. “We’ll ask the locksmith tomorrow,” Mira said with a shrug.

That night, they heard it.

A soft, muffled crying.

At first, Mira thought it was a neighbor. But no — it was coming from behind the door.

They froze, staring at each other in the hallway.

“You heard that too?” Daniel whispered.

Mira nodded, her heart hammering.

But when Daniel pressed his ear to the door, the crying stopped.

The locksmith came the next day, but when he inspected the door, he frowned.

“There’s no lock. This isn’t even a real door.”

“What do you mean?” Daniel asked.

He showed them — the handle was ornamental, the wood nailed into the frame itself. It wasn’t meant to open.

That night, the crying returned. Louder.

Days passed, and the sound grew… desperate. Sometimes, it whispered their names. Sometimes, it begged. “Please… don’t…”

Mira tried to ignore it. They both did. But ignoring pain never made it vanish.

One evening, after another argument over nothing — Daniel raising his voice, Mira storming off — they sat on opposite ends of the couch in silence. The house pressed on them like a suffocating fog.

And the crying came again. Soft. Heartbroken.

“I can’t take it anymore,” Mira whispered. “What if… we’re supposed to open it?”

Daniel’s jaw clenched. He nodded.

Together, hands trembling, they walked upstairs. The crying didn’t stop as they approached — it grew louder, voices overlapping, like echoes from a nightmare.

Daniel raised a hammer, ready to break it open. But before he struck —

The door swung open on its own.

Inside was darkness. And then — movement.

Two figures stepped forward.

Them.

Mira and Daniel.

But older. Worn. Hollow eyes filled with sorrow. Mira’s reflection reached out, voice breaking, “Please… don’t make the same mistakes we did.”

Daniel’s reflection nodded. “Don’t let pride destroy you. Don’t turn love into a battlefield. Don’t end like us… trapped in this house… repeating the same pain.”

The real Mira’s knees buckled. Daniel caught her. Tears welled up in both their eyes.

“What… is this?” Mira whispered.

Their older selves looked at them with such deep grief it felt like drowning.

“Your future… if you don’t change.”

And then — the door slammed shut.

The crying stopped.

They stood there, holding each other, understanding more in that moment than they ever had in years together.

The next morning, they didn’t speak of the door. They didn’t need to. They called a marriage counselor. They apologized for things left unsaid. They promised — not just to love — but to listen.

The door never opened again.

But sometimes, late at night, when they forgot the lesson… a faint sob echoed through the walls.

A soft, tragic reminder of the future waiting behind the room they never opened… again.

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About the Creator

Waqid Ali

"My name is waqid ali, i write to touch hearts, awaken dreams, and give voice to silent emotions. Each story is a piece of my soul, shared to heal, inspire, and connect in this loud, lonely world."

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