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"The Quiet Emptiness"

-The Quiet Emptiness-

By Rajoan IslamPublished 10 months ago 4 min read

"The Quiet Emptiness"

It was unlike anything the crew of the space station Horizon had ever seen.

Horizon, a tiny, cutting-edge research facility circling a far-off exoplanet, was intended to serve as humanity's entryway to the secrets of deep space. Only eight people made up the crew, which included communications officers, scientists, and engineers. Nothing unusual happened during the first few months; normal repairs and data collecting took place without any problems.

Until the signal arrived, that is.

An anomaly at first, the feeble communication was promptly written off as interference from surrounding cosmic radiation. The message then became stronger as it was repeated. At first it was a blurry, unclear murmur, but gradually it got more apparent. It was a voice. The phrases were strange and jumbled, like if they were from some lost, faraway world.

"Aid me... I'm... stuck."

It was initially noticed by the station's chief scientist, Dr. Lila Frost. She initially believed it might be a distress call from a different station that was far out in space. However, no other stations in this galaxy sector were listed in the records. She still had the uneasy feeling that something was wrong. The voice had a disconcerting tone. It did not sound human, yet it did sound human. It resembled a perversion of the familiar, something attempting to imitate mankind.

Strange events started to occur as the days went by. At strange intervals, the station's communications equipment began to fail, making it difficult to communicate with Earth. The team experienced nightmares as their regular sleep cycles were disturbed. There was a coolness in the air that no heating system could account for, and when they woke up, they had the weird feeling that they were being watched.

The workers started acting weirdly, one by one. When engineer Marcus Hayes would talk about seeing shadowy beings moving in the corners of his vision, Dr. Frost was the first to detect it. He would vouch for the fact that he could hear faint footsteps—not his own—resonating throughout the station. His demeanor worsened and his reports grew inconsistent. Insisting that something was approaching and that something was waiting for them in the dark, he began to isolate himself in the lower decks.

Then Marcus disappeared one night.

There was a desperate search, but he was not there. There was no sign of him, and the airlocks on the station were locked. The lower decks were disturbingly quiet, and his accommodations were deserted. The crew became increasingly agitated as the days went by, and the voices on the communication system became more urgent and demanding.

"Get closer... locate us.

Lila and her group made the decision to look into the signal's origin. They followed it to the abandoned auxiliary research lab, the station's deepest part. With a creak, the door opened to expose a long-locked room. Strange machinery buzzed inside, and they could not identify the symbols on the walls. As though the station itself were alive, the walls appeared to pulsate.

A bizarre pod, encircled by wires and cables, stood in the middle of the room. It appeared to have been inhabited by something, but what? As she drew nearer, Lila's breath came in short gasps. The pod had scorch marks on it, and something was moving inside of it.

The lights suddenly flickered, and the station echoed with a harsh, guttural snarl. The voice on the communication system changed, and the pod started to shake violently. It had changed from a whisper to a distorted, crazed scream.

"You ought not to have arrived... It is too late.

Lila went for the control panel, but the pod broke open before she could get to it. After a thick, black liquid, a jumble of twisted limbs and hollow eyes that could only be described as a beast emerged. Its body writhed and changed shape, its tendrils extending as if in quest of something, and it hissed. It was the thing that had been observing them the entire time and sending the signal.

The station had changed, but the team hurried to get out. They were confused by the twists and turns of the hallways. Behind them, the lights went out, leaving only the unsettling hum of the extraterrestrial. They noticed whispers, shadows, and objects that should not have been there around every corner.

The last person standing was Lila. Staring out into the great, empty emptiness of space, she found herself at the observation deck. No longer in orbit, the station was now drifting, drawn into the shadowy center of an incomprehensible creature.

"Help me, please."

The voice was clear now, but it was still there. It was not a call for help. It served as a warning.

Knowing that whatever had captured the crew was still out there, watching and waiting, Lila closed her eyes.

She then sensed it—the icy grip of a tendril on her shoulder—in the stillness of the emptiness.

Something that was older than time and would never be forgotten had taken root in the shadowy womb of the Horizon station. It continued to listen.

-I hope the spooky story was enjoyable! If you require any changes or another story, please let me know. Thank You.-

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Rajoan Islam

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  • Hasib Hossen10 months ago

    Wow

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