The Puppet's Strings
A man trapped in a web of psychological torment, where reality blurs and manipulation takes a deadly form.

The relentless ticking of the clock echoes like an unyielding drumbeat, breaking through the heavy silence. The room is engulfed in shadow, illuminated only by the eerie glow of a television casting static like distant cries. Jacob perches on the couch's edge, his hands trembling as if caught between fear and disbelief. He struggles to remember the exact moment it all started—a seemingly harmless message arrived weeks ago: "You see it too, don’t you?" At the time, he dismissed it as a silly prank. Now, a chilling certainty battles with his doubt, gnawing at his mind.
It’s her. Lena.
Their relationship exploded into pieces months ago, leaving him convinced their torment had ended. Yet, her presence haunts every forsaken corner of his mind like a malevolent ghost. It started with texts, but quickly intensified to eerie photographs—grainy, distorted images of him captured from beyond his window, as if hidden eyes were constantly watching him. Even changing his number brought no relief; the relentless messages always hunted him down, driven by an insatiable, ravenous hunger.
She knows his every mundane ritual with unsettling precision—every cold, half-sipped coffee he abandons on the table, the jacket he carelessly discards by the door. Her descriptions are chillingly exact, spoken with the sinister intimacy of a shadow breathing down his neck. No cameras capture her, no locks splinter to mark her entry, yet every message she leaves is suffused with the paralyzing dread of her omnipresence, a constant, invisible threat looming over him.
Jacob's desperate appeals for understanding were met with mocking smirks and skeptical glances. "She's not here, man. Maybe you need to get some help." The suggestion of needing help twisted his insides with unease. He wasn’t losing his mind—he was certain she was there, just beyond an invisible barrier, her existence confirmed by voicemails that shattered his silence. Her voice, sultry and compelling, whispered, "I miss you. Why won’t you answer me? Don’t you remember what you promised?" He couldn't possibly have made such a damning promise... or had he? His mind wavered between doubt and certainty, trapped in a web of uncertainty.
Then the nightmares erupted into a relentless torment—her emaciated face looming terrifyingly close, an inch from his own. Her eyes, abyssal and utterly devoid of light, and that horrifyingly widening smile threatening to swallow him whole. He jolts awake, choking, desperately clawing for air, while her sinister laughter wraps around his throat like a noose, squeezing the life from each vanishing breath.
Last night pushed his already fragile grasp on reality to the brink. He awoke with a start at the eerie sound of his front door unlocking, the chain clattering like a chilling omen. Footsteps, hesitant and heavy, shuffled across the hardwood floor, each step amplifying his growing fear. Torn between the urge to hide and the need to confront, he finally dared to investigate. Yet, he found everything untouched—everything except a lone, terrifying note on his nightstand: "You're mine." The message left him caught between disbelief and imminent dread, unsure of what to fear more—the unknown or what he might find.
Now, Jacob stands in uneasy anticipation as the darkness morphs into living nightmares around him. The shadows elongate and swirl, appearing to taunt him with their sinister shapes. His own reflection in the window seems to judge him harshly: hollow eyes and a twisted smile that he cannot control. When his phone buzzes with a new message, his heart is pierced by the words: "Look behind you." He wrestles with himself, torn between the fear that grips him and the urge to confront whatever might be lurking in the shadows. Yet, he remains frozen, unable to decide if he should face his fears or remain in the safety of ignorance.
The static from the television grows into a maddening, rhythmic roar, teetering on the edge of tearing his sanity apart. Yet, within that chaos, a disembodied whisper—faint and guttural—emerges: "You were never alone." The walls seem to swell, as if something sinister is stirring beneath, pushing through the plaster with a malignant force. A jagged fissure snakes its way up, oozing a thick, dark ichor that reeks of decay. Jacob is torn between the urge to flee and the morbid curiosity to discover what lies behind the walls, as the stench of rot churns his stomach.
From the abyss of the deepest shadows, serpentine tendrils of darkness surge forth—fingers unnaturally long, deathly pale, and hideously contorted, tipped with nails that are jagged shards of pure despair. They rake the floor with relentless fury, carving vicious grooves with a sound that echoes like splintering bone. Lena's voice, a sinister hiss drenched in malice, seeps through the walls: "You swore you'd never abandon me." Her laughter erupts, thick and ragged, like the gurgling of someone suffocating in a crimson sea of their own blood.
Jacob's phone buzzes with an unsettling intensity, the screen lighting up with a flood of messages, each echoing the haunting demand: "Come back to me." The words blur and glitch, seeping across the screen like wounds that refuse to heal. Then, the television crackles to life in a violent surge. The static yields to reveal Lena's distorted face—her eyes, lifeless and empty, seem to pierce through him; her lips curl into a grotesque grin that stretches too far. Her sharp, blood-smeared teeth glisten ominously. Jacob feels both a pull towards the familiar and a dread of the unknown. He doesn't know whether to run or to stay and confront whatever Lena has become.
The walls erupt violently, tearing apart in a grotesque display as they gush with raw, bleeding flesh, pulsating with an unsettling, sinister life. Thick, black veins, resembling venomous vines, writhe and twist over the disintegrating surface. Beneath the skin of the house, unimaginable forms writhe in a hellish dance—twisted limbs and glaring eyes moving in a macabre performance. The air is filled with the sickening sound of bones snapping, echoing through the growing nightmare, as the floorboards ooze with a torrent of crimson, and the atmosphere thickens into a suffocating stench of decaying meat.
Jacob’s scream is muted by the suffocating darkness around him. The cold, unwavering fingers close around his throat, both terrifying and oddly familiar, as if they are the last connection to something he can't let go of. As he's enveloped by the consuming shadows, his mind struggles between despair and a strange sense of belonging. The last sound he hears is Lena’s whisper—soft, mocking, yet somehow comforting: "You belong to me now."
Jacob’s scream is muted by the suffocating darkness around him. The cold, unwavering fingers close around his throat, both terrifying and oddly familiar, as if they are the last connection to something he can't let go of. As he's enveloped by the consuming shadows, his mind struggles between despair and a strange sense of belonging. The last sound he hears is Lena’s whisper—soft, mocking, yet somehow comforting: "You belong to me now."
Author's Note:
In crafting The Puppet's Strings, I wanted to delve into the psychological horror of obsession and the fine line between reality and madness. The protagonist, Jacob, is caught in a nightmare he can't wake from—a nightmare where the boundary between the living and the dead blurs, and the specter of his past is more terrifying than any physical presence. At its core, this story explores the suffocating weight of guilt and unresolved trauma, and how they can manifest in the form of a haunting, both literal and psychological.
Jacob's relationship with Lena represents the haunting power of unfinished business—an emotional debt that refuses to be paid. The story reflects the fear of being trapped in a cycle, unable to escape the ghosts of our past choices. The static, the photographs, the eerie messages—these elements are not just supernatural forces but a manifestation of the internal decay Jacob experiences as his reality unravels. The imagery of the house crumbling and bleeding is meant to mirror his deteriorating mind, unable to distinguish between fear and truth.
The tension between the fear of the unknown and the pull of something familiar, even in its most twisted form, is a central theme I wanted to explore. Jacob’s ultimate surrender to Lena’s presence is both terrifying and, strangely, inevitable. It speaks to the destructive nature of our attachments and the way they can consume us, even when we try to escape.
I hope this story immerses you in its unsettling atmosphere, and challenges you to consider how deep emotional scars can reach, twisting our perceptions of reality until we can no longer tell where we end and the nightmare begins. Thank you for reading, and may you never feel as though you belong to the darkness.
—Jason Benskin

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What a great read and actually aren't we all kind of like puppets to whomever in our lives as we learn and adapt to situations presented in so many ways.