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The Other Side of the Door

A Spooky Micro

By D.K. ShepardPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
The Other Side of the Door
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"There was only one rule: don’t open the door,” Corbin explained.

“And who made that rule?” Dr. Parsons asked.

“The shadow doctor.”

Dr. Parsons’s eyes narrowed. “You’re referring to the doctor who treated you at the asylum?”

“Yes,” Corbin said.

“You might be scared, but I think it’s time to break the rule. There could be something you’re suppressing through this dream that needs to be addressed.”

Corbin nodded, but he was trembling. He laid back and closed his eyes. Many minutes passed before sleep gradually overcame him.

He was in a familiar forest. The trees were shrouded in darkness, but the sky glowed a pale gray. He traversed the well worn trail to the shack as he always did. Wringing his hands, he stared at the doorknob. The one rule…

Every cell in his body seemed to protest as he extended his hand. He twisted the knob. His eyes were flooded with light as he stumbled forward. A man stood in the center of an empty room. Slowly, he turned to face Corbin.

Corbin gasped. The man’s face was a replica of his own.

“At last!” the doppelganger exclaimed. “I knew you would return, but I admit I underestimated your strength. We aren’t boys anymore, are we?”

“Who are you?” Corbin asked.

“I’m you, but stronger, smarter, better. The shadow doctor feared me as he should have, but I will find him.”

The doppelganger strode forward.

“Where are you going?” Corbin called out.

“I’ll be taking control now,” the doppelganger said. “I was content with nights until you stole them from me. Now it's your turn to wait.” He exited the shack and pulled the door closed behind him.

Corbin darted to it, but there was no knob on the inside. He was sealed in.

Author's Note: Created a prequel of sorts to this story for Kenny Penn's Frighten Me! Please? Challenge. If you're interested check out the link below.

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About the Creator

D.K. Shepard

Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now

Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.

dkshepard.com

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  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Wow, I'm really late reading this one, but I'm glad Igot here! This is the perfect opening for a psychological thriller! Great entry!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Diabolically clever, DK! Great challenge entry!

  • Oh wow, that was one heck of a twist! Doppelganger was a great take to this challenge!

  • Joe O’Connorabout a year ago

    Nice DK 👏🏾 I really like the idea of doors/doppelgangers, and the day/night- “ I was content with nights until you stole them from me.”- Corbin hasn’t been sleeping right? Hence therapy? This has a subtlety to it which stands out from a lot of the horror stories so far.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Oh very good.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Oh I like this one A LOT! It was so clever, I forgot it was for the challenge - the use of the door was so subtle. Brill.

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    This is a great one! The end was terrifying. Loved it!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Excellent work, and great entry for the challenge. Well done.

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    Now for the sequel, bring on the Shadow Doctor!

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought and very clever! No matter how deep we go we will always find the self.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Ooooooooh. This is deliciously dark and kinda disturbing! Well written, DK! Just enough details to make it sinister, without giving too much away. Brevity in action for sure!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Great! I loved this, D.K.! The dialogue in this was key. An excellent micro!

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