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The Other Child

Not Every Whisper is Familiar

By Cindy🎀Published about a year ago 1 min read
Runner-up in Spooky Micro Challenge

There was only one rule: don’t open the door.

Jake and Mary had just moved into their dream home—a grand, weathered house, 132 years old. Its creaking floors and dusty corners whispered stories of a time long past. Cindy, their three-year-old daughter, loved the place instantly, particularly her new room next to her parents’. They decorated it just for her, filling it with soft pinks and cozy toys.

For the first week, everything was perfect. But then, like clockwork, Cindy began appearing in their room at exactly 3 a.m. every night. Jake, too exhausted to argue, would scoop her up and let her sleep between him and Mary. But as the nights passed, he grew concerned. They had to get her sleeping in her own bed again.

One night, determined to break the habit, Jake decided to walk her back to her room. He listened to her soft footsteps padding toward him, but his eyes stayed closed. Just a quick grab, he thought. He lifted her small body and laid her between him and Mary, feeling her snuggle in. Relieved, he got up to use the bathroom.

As Jake stood up to go to the bathroom, the little girl cuddled beside him whispered, “Daddy, don’t open the door to my room.” Still groggy and half-asleep, Jake barely registered her words and brushed them off without a second thought.

As he passed Cindy’s room, Jake noticed the light was still on. He frowned. Peeking in, he froze. There, sitting up in bed, was Cindy, staring at him with wide, frightened eyes.

“Daddy,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “There’s a little girl in our house.”

Jake’s heart raced. Slowly, he turned back toward his bed. Something small still lay nestled between him and Mary. Something that wasn’t Cindy.

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About the Creator

Cindy🎀

Hey, I’m Cindy – a K-pop newbie turned addict with a keyboard and way too many opinions. When I’m not screaming about talented artists, I’m writing poetry or ranting about my life.

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Nice piece! Congratulations!! 🏆

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Ooh, I like this one a lot!

  • Sam Spinelliabout a year ago

    Great job on crafting a runner up :) well done Cindy!

  • Testabout a year ago

    wow, i think this should have reached higher, love your entry👌

  • Sam Spinelliabout a year ago

    Oh damn. How has this not gotten more traction? Underrated. Great story telling. Wish I’d seen it sooner

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Nicely done with the simple, but very impactful twist!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Amazing!

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