The Night the Ocean Breathed Back
When the tide pulled away, something far older than water returned

The storm had stopped hours ago, but the wind still howled through the tiny coastal town of Grayford.
From my attic window, I could see the ocean—a restless black mass under a silver moon. I’d grown up with that view. The tide always came in and out like clockwork, as if the sea and the town had an unspoken agreement: I take, I give, I take, I give.
But that night… it broke the agreement.
It started at 1:13 a.m. I know the time because I was lying in bed, unable to sleep, listening to the ticking of the old wall clock. The sound faded under a low groan—deep and resonant, like the earth itself was stretching after a long sleep. Then came the smell: not the usual salty breeze, but something metallic, ancient… like rust mixed with decay.
When I looked out the window, my breath caught. The water was… leaving. Not in gentle waves, but in one steady pull, like the ocean was inhaling. Within minutes, the shoreline stretched farther than I’d ever seen, exposing dark, glistening sand and deep cracks in the seabed.
At first, I thought it might be a tsunami warning sign. My father had told me that when the sea pulls away fast, you run for higher ground. But I couldn’t move. I was frozen there, staring, because there were shapes—tall, thin shapes—rising from the fissures in the exposed seabed.
They weren’t fish. They weren’t crabs. They weren’t anything I’d ever seen.
They walked.
By 1:20 a.m., the figures had multiplied. At least a dozen now stood where the ocean used to be. They moved slowly, swaying as though adjusting to gravity. Their skin—or what I thought was skin—was pale and slick, reflecting the moonlight in sickly shades of gray and green. Long, skeletal fingers trailed along the wet sand, leaving behind trails that steamed in the cold night air.
One of them stopped… and looked at me.
Even from that distance, I could tell its eyes weren’t right. They were too large, too black, swallowing the moonlight whole. My heart slammed against my ribs. I ducked away from the window, crawling to the far corner of the attic as if that would hide me from something born from the deep.
I stayed there for what felt like hours, but in reality, maybe it was ten minutes. The groan came again, this time higher, almost like… a voice calling. It echoed through the walls, vibrated in my bones.
Against every instinct screaming in my head, I looked again.
The shapes were closer.
They weren’t on the seabed anymore—they were in the streets. Their long limbs bent in ways that shouldn’t be possible, folding and unfolding like knives. The sound of their movements wasn’t like footsteps… it was wetter. A dragging, slapping sound, as though they carried the ocean with them.
One of them stopped beneath my house. It tilted its head up slowly, almost curiously, as if it could smell my fear. My breath caught. I didn’t dare blink.
It opened its mouth.
I wish I could tell you it screamed or hissed or roared. But it didn’t. Instead, a stream of seawater poured out, splashing onto the dirt below, carrying with it tiny silver fish that twitched in the moonlight.
Then… it smiled.
I don’t remember deciding to run. My legs just moved, carrying me down the attic steps, through the hallway, and into the kitchen. I grabbed the first thing I could—a carving knife—like that would help against something that came from a place older than man.
The front door rattled. Not from the wind.
I pressed my back to the wall, holding my breath. Slowly, the rattling stopped. The silence that followed was worse than the noise, heavy and suffocating. I dared to peek around the corner.
They were gone.
Or… I thought they were.
At 3:00 a.m., the groan came one last time. I went to the window in time to see the ocean returning, rushing in faster than it had ever gone out. It swallowed the beach, the streets, everything. For a moment, I thought the whole town would be taken.
But when it stopped, the waterline was exactly where it should be. Calm. Gentle waves. Almost peaceful.
There was no sign of the creatures.
No one in town spoke of that night. Not even me. But every so often, when the moon is full and the tide is high, I swear I can see black eyes watching from just beyond the surf.
And I wonder… the next time the ocean breathes back, will it stop at the shore?
Or will it take me with it?
About the Creator
Muhammad Kaleemullah
"Words are my canvas; emotions, my colors. In every line, I paint the unseen—stories that whisper to your soul and linger long after the last word fades."


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