The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 9
It's Not Like the Others
The moldy stench of decay wafted from the gaping maw of the asylum's heart, a foreboding welcome as the team huddled at the threshold. A symphony of creaks and groans serenaded their arrival, the building itself seeming to recoil at the intrusion. Jack's jaw clenched, a steely resolve in his eyes that belied the adrenaline coursing through his veins.
"Stay sharp," he murmured, scarcely louder than the whispering wind that toyed with the tattered curtains in the broken windows above. His hand gripped the flashlight like a lifeline, thumb flicking the switch to cast a beam of light into the bowels of the forsaken corridor before them.
Sarah’s fingers twitched near her camera, ready to document whatever they were about to encounter. Mark's knuckles were white around his EMF meter, and Emma's breaths came in short bursts, clouding the air as she steadied her own camera. Luke stood silent, his skeptical gaze scanning the darkness, always searching for a rational explanation.
With a nod from Jack, they stepped over the debris-littered boundary, crossing into a realm where the past and present collided in spectral disarray. The narrow beam from Jack's flashlight sliced through the gloom, illuminating peeling paint and the remnants of what once were walls adorned with cheerful colors, now just mocking shadows of their former purpose.
As Jack led the team, each footfall seemed to echo endlessly down the corridor, a rhythmic heartbeat pulsing within the asylum's walls. Dust motes danced in the flashlight's glow, twirling specters in the otherwise oppressive darkness. The dim outline of rusted wheelchairs and overturned gurneys whispered tales of despair, long forgotten by the world outside but remembered here in this place of madness and melancholy.
"Keep it tight," Jack instructed, his voice a low command that cut through the silence as effectively as the light cut through shadows. The others fell in behind him, no words needed, each member knowing their role in this dance with the unknown.
The deeper they ventured, the more the asylum seemed to come alive, the very air charged with anticipation. But it was Jack's focused determination that kept them moving forward, the unspoken promise that he would lead them through whatever darkness lay ahead.
The growls started as distant whispers, a cacophony of despair that seemed to seep from the very walls of the decaying asylum. Jack's hand tightened around the flashlight, his pulse quickening in response to the eerie chorus. Each step forward was an exercise in willpower, the darkness ahead challenging their resolve.
"Did you hear that?" Emma whispered, her words barely audible over the unsettling sounds that grew louder with every moment.
"Stay focused," Jack murmured back, though he couldn't disguise the edge of concern in his voice. The shrieks escalated into a frenzied pitch, clawing at their nerves like fingernails on chalkboard.
"Something's here," Luke breathed, his eyes darting nervously.
Jack's gaze swept the corridor, his flashlight a beacon amidst the suffocating darkness. They were not alone—something else walked these halls, something unseen and full of malice.
Suddenly, Emma gasped, her finger jabbing towards the viewfinder of her camera. "There! Did you see it?"
The team halted, crowding around the small LCD screen as Emma rewound the footage. There it was—a dark figure fleeting across the doorway, its form too quick to discern but unmistakably there. It vanished as quickly as it had appeared, leaving behind only the cold certainty of their vulnerability.
"Keep recording, Emma," Jack commanded, his voice steady despite the chill that had settled in his bones. "Whatever it is, we need evidence."
"Got it," she replied, her grip on the camera unyielding despite the tremor that threatened to betray her fear.
The growls and shrieks played a sinister symphony, a soundtrack to their descent into the unknown. With each passing second, the team became acutely aware of the fact that they were trespassers in a realm where humanity no longer held dominion. Their presence had stirred the denizens of this forsaken place, and Jack knew they had to be ready for whatever dwelled within the shadows, watching, waiting.
Mark's hand was steady as he held the EMF meter out in front of him, but his brow creased with concern as the device began to chirp more aggressively. The needle danced erratically, as if possessed by the very spirits they sought to uncover.
"Guys, look at this," Mark whispered, though the sound seemed loud in the oppressive silence of the asylum.
The team clustered around him, their collective breaths forming ghostly wisps in the cold air. Jack's eyes narrowed, watching the meter’s wild fluctuations. It was a tangible sign of the supernatural energy they had all felt - an invisible storm of otherworldly activity that now seemed to be centered directly upon them.
"Powerful readings like that..." Emma started, her voice trailing off as she exchanged a glance with Jack, both aware of the implications.
"Means we're not just dealing with a residual haunting," Jack finished for her, his mind racing through possibilities. This was no mere echo of the past; it was something far more sentient, far more dangerous.
They huddled closer, a semblance of comfort in their proximity. Mark's grip on the EMF tightened, and Emma's camera never ceased its vigilant recording, the red light blinking steadily in the gloom.
Without warning, the corridor was rocked by the thunderous sound of a door slamming shut behind them. Instinctively, they spun around, flashlights slicing through the darkness to reveal the now-sealed exit. Dust motes danced in the beams of light, mocking their surprise with their gentle sway.
"Damn it," Jack cursed under his breath. His heart thudded against his ribs, a primal response to the sudden entrapment. They were mice in a maze, and the walls just closed in.
"Okay, everyone stay calm," he instructed, though the edge in his voice betrayed the surge of adrenaline that coursed through him.
Emma's hands shook slightly as she clutched her camera, her eyes darting to the door then back to Jack. "It knows we're here," she said, the realization stark in her tone. "It's playing with us."
Jack met her gaze, his own resolve hardening. "Then let's not disappoint it." He turned to the rest of the team, his flashlight cutting a path forward. "We push on. We've got a job to do."
Their footsteps echoed ominously as they moved away from the sealed exit, the knowledge that they were being toyed with by something unseen hanging heavy in the air. Whatever lay ahead in the depths of the asylum, they were now irrevocably committed to facing it head-on.
The growls clawed at the edges of their nerves, a guttural cacophony that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. Emma's grip tightened on her camera, her knuckles whitening as the shrieks pierced through the relative quiet, a discordant symphony with the power to freeze blood.
"Can anyone tell where it's coming from?" Mark's voice was tense, his eyes scanning the shadows that clung to the cracked walls like cobwebs.
Jack shook his head, trying to focus despite the disorienting echoes. "No. It's like the sound is bouncing off the walls." He strained his ears, but the asylum’s twisted acoustics played tricks on them, making the source impossible to pinpoint.
"Stay sharp," he murmured, leading with his flashlight. Its beam flickered, as though even the light was hesitant to reveal what lurked in the darkness.
Luke, trailing slightly behind, caught movement from the corner of his eye. He turned sharply, his breath catching in his throat. At the end of the corridor, an indistinct shape wavered in and out of existence. One moment it was there, stretching and twisting unnaturally, the next it was just a trick of the light... wasn't it?
"Guys..." Luke's voice was a hoarse whisper, barely audible over the growing din. "There's something down there."
At his warning, the team froze, every pair of eyes straining to see what Luke had glimpsed. The form reappeared, more defined this time, darker against the dark—a shadow within shadows. It was as if the very darkness had gathered itself into a semblance of a human figure, yet one that defied all laws of nature in its contortion.
"Get ready," Jack said, his tone leaving no room for argument. Each member of the team knew their roles. Emma steadied her camera, aiming it toward the figure, hoping to capture whatever evidence she could. Mark held his EMF meter before him like a shield, the erratic spikes still painting a picture of unseen terror.
Heartbeats hammered in unison, a frantic rhythm that matched the crescendo of growls and shrieks. The figure loomed larger, closer, no longer content to be a mere spectator in the grim theatre of the abandoned asylum.
"Whatever you are," Jack called into the darkness, his words laced with both challenge and fear, "we're not afraid of you!"
The lie tasted bitter on his tongue, but he swallowed it down, bracing himself and his team for the inevitable confrontation.
The air thickened, charged with a palpable sense of dread as the dark figure lunged from the shadows, its form blurring at the edges but its eyes—a scorching, malevolent glow—fixed unblinkingly on Jack. He felt the primal terror claw at his resolve, but he pushed back against it with the ferocity of a man who had too much to lose to succumb now.
"Steady!" he shouted, the word slicing through the cacophony of otherworldly screams. His hand instinctively went to the crucifix hanging around his neck, a talisman of faith in a place where hope seemed folly.
Emma's voice cut through the tension, "Salt rounds, now!"
Luke and Mark, their faces set in grim determination, loaded their modified firearms with practiced speed. The room was steeped in the stench of fear and decay, yet the team moved with a precision honed by countless haunted nights and spectral confrontations.
As the figure bore down on them, Jack could see its eyes more clearly—pits of infernal light that seemed to burn straight through to his soul. "Fire!" he commanded, and the sharp crack of gunfire echoed through the corridor as salt rounds burst toward the apparition.
Sarah's hands trembled, but her grip on the camera was unyielding. Through the viewfinder, she caught the dark figure recoiling from the impact of the rounds, its form distorting like a signal losing clarity. She steadied her breath, focused, and snapped a rapid succession of shots. The camera whirred as it struggled to capture the entity that defied all logic and physics.
"Did you get it?" Emma asked, reloading her weapon while keeping wary eyes on the swirling darkness.
"Trying," Sarah replied, her voice a mix of frustration and concentration. "It won't stay still."
On the small digital screen, the dark figure twisted and jerked with abrupt, jerky movements. At one moment, it was merely a blur; then, it sharpened into something grotesquely humanoid before dissolving once again into a whirl of shadows. Each time the image solidified, Sarah could see the unholy fury that seemed to radiate from the entity, a clear indication they were dealing with something far beyond their usual spectral encounters.
"Keep shooting," Jack urged, watching as the figure reassembled itself, seemingly unfazed by the assault. The realization hit him like a physical blow—they were facing an adversary of immense power, one not easily thwarted by their earthly measures.
"Jack," Luke called out, "this thing... it's not like the others."
"I know," Jack answered, meeting the gaze of each member of his team. In their eyes, he saw the reflection of his own fear, but beneath it, the unshakeable will to stand against the darkness.
"Stay focused. We'll get through this together," he said, the words more of a promise than a reassurance. They had to believe it, for doubt was a luxury they couldn't afford—not when the very air seemed alive with malevolence, and the dark entity before them hungered for more than just their fear.
Jack's voice was a low command, as steady and sure as the grip he had on his flashlight. "Back up, slowly," he instructed, eyes locked on the shimmering darkness that swirled malevolently before them.
The team obeyed without question, inching backward with an unspoken synchronicity borne of many shared encounters with the unknown. Jack kept his light trained on the entity, even as he felt the tug of Emma's hand on his sleeve, guiding him. He trusted her implicitly to lead them away from immediate danger, her steps careful but assured as she navigated through the labyrinthine asylum.
"Here." The word came from Mark, who stood by an ajar door—its chipped paint and rusting hinges testaments to years of neglect. Without hesitation, Jack ushered his team through the portal, casting a last wary glance at the space they vacated, half-expecting tendrils of shadow to snatch at their heels.
Once inside the room, Jack flicked the door shut with a soft click that seemed to echo like a gunshot in the silence. They were enveloped in darkness for a heartbeat before Jack's flashlight cut through the gloom, revealing the stark, peeling walls of what might have once been a doctor's office.
"Quickly, check the windows," Jack ordered, his voice barely above a whisper. Luke and Emma moved to comply, ensuring no unseen eyes—or worse, entities—could peer in or break through. Meanwhile, Sarah clutched her camera close, reviewing the footage of the dark figure, her brow furrowed in concentration and concern.
Breaths came hard and fast, chests rising and falling with the effort of containing their panic. Adrenaline still coursed through their veins like liquid fire, and the air hung heavy with the scent of ancient dust and the electric tang of fear.
"Okay," Jack started, his gaze sweeping over his companions, "we need a plan. That thing out there..." He shook his head, struggling to find words for the horror they had all glimpsed.
"Is not going down without a fight," Emma finished, her own resolve hardening. She met Jack's eyes squarely, her expression grim but fierce.
"Right. We'll use everything we've got—the EMF, the cameras, our knowledge of the lore," Jack continued, piecing together a strategy as he spoke. Mark nodded, retrieving the EMF meter from his belt and checking the readouts which, even now, fluctuated wildly.
"Luke, you and I will try to contain it. Emma, keep recording—it might react to the camera if it knows it’s being watched. Sarah, I want you to document everything; every detail could be crucial."
"Got it," came the chorus of replies, each voice tinged with the gravity of their situation.
Jack drew a deep breath, his chest expanding as he took in the determined faces of his team. They were more than colleagues; they were comrades-in-arms against the mysteries that sought to envelop the world in shadows.
"Let's do this," he said, the steel in his tone belying the tremor of trepidation that none of them could fully suppress. Together, they turned towards the door, bracing for the onslaught that awaited them beyond its feeble sanctuary.
The growls crescendoed into a cacophony that clawed at their ears, the walls vibrating with the fury of the trapped souls. Jack's eyes flickered to the flaking paint, watching it tremble like leaves in a storm. Emma clutched her camera, knuckles white, as Mark’s EMF meter crackled with the electric charge of the unseen.
"Whatever we're doing, we need to do it now," Luke whispered, his voice barely audible over the din.
"Agreed. On three," Jack said, his gaze locking onto each member of his team, imparting a silent strength. "One... two..."
"Three!" they shouted in unison, and with a forceful push, the door swung open, surrendering them back to the haunted corridor.
They emerged as one entity, a fortress of flesh and bone against the onslaught of darkness that awaited. The air was thick with malice, the temperature dropping so swiftly that their breaths became visible puffs of fight against the chill.
Jack took point, leading with the flashlight whose beam seemed to struggle against the oppressive dark. Behind him, Emma’s camera light pierced the shadows, searching for the figure that had taunted them before. Mark held the EMF meter out like a shield, its readings spiking in a frenetic dance. Sarah’s hand hovered near her pocket, where she kept her notes, ready to scrawl down any detail that would help them understand what they faced.
As they moved, the entity made itself known not just in sound but in movement; a rush of air here, a fleeting shadow there—each moment designed to disorient and terrify.
"Stay focused," Jack commanded, feeling the weight of leadership heavy on his shoulders but also the trust his team placed in him. They were experts, historians of the unexplained, and tonight, they would need every ounce of their collective knowledge.
"Whatever happens, keep recording," he reminded Emma, who nodded, her eyes fierce behind the viewfinder.
"Mark, stay on the EMF. Let us know if it peaks."
"Got it," Mark replied, though his voice was tight with the strain of anticipation.
"Sarah, you good?"
"Always," she responded, her pen poised like a sword ready for battle.
Luke, ever the stalwart, gave a simple nod, his entire being radiating readiness.
Side by side, they advanced, their footsteps synchronized, echoing in the hollow of the abandoned asylum. Each turn of the corridor revealed more of the forsaken and decaying structure, a testament to despair and loss. And yet, within this monument to human frailty, they found a wellspring of courage.
"Whatever you are, we are not afraid!" Jack's voice was a challenge thrown into the abyss, and the abyss roared back.
But they stood undaunted, their resolve solidifying with every step. This was their domain, their expertise—their fight. And as the shadows gathered, forming ranks against them, Jack and his team pushed forward, the heartbeat of their mission pulsing through their veins: to shed light upon the darkest corners of the world, no matter the cost.
About the Creator
Mara Edwards
I have published four or five new stories that are all challenge entries! Would love for you to read!


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