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The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 20

The Final Ritual

By Mara EdwardsPublished about a year ago 15 min read
The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 20
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The decaying walls of the asylum seemed to pulse with a life of their own, the air thick with a symphony of tortured whispers and guttural moans that clawed at the edges of sanity. Shadows danced and flickered in the periphery, never fully revealing their sources, as if the light itself was afraid to touch the darkness that swelled within this forsaken place.

Jack's breath came out in visible puffs, his heart thundering against his ribcage like a frantic prisoner seeking escape. He could feel the malevolent presence enveloping them—a primordial evil that seethed with hatred for all things living. It was as though the very soul of the asylum had been poisoned, its history of pain and madness given form in the sinister growls and inhuman shrieks that echoed through the abandoned halls.

"Stay sharp," Jack barked, his voice cutting through the cacophony with unwavering authority. "We knew it wouldn’t be easy."

His eyes swept over the team, each member visibly tensed for battle against an enemy that defied physical form. They stood in a tight circle, backs together, flashlights casting eerie beams into the relentless gloom. Jack saw fear etched on faces but beneath it, a steely resolve that matched his own.

"This is what we trained for," he reminded them, his gaze locking onto each pair of eyes in turn. "Remember the families that reported the hauntings, the children that couldn't sleep because of the nightmares? We're here to end this."

He reached into his pocket, fingers brushing the familiar cold metal of the amulet he had found; it could end this. It was more than a token; it was a symbol of their purpose, a tangible reminder of the ritual that lay ahead. His hand closed around it, drawing strength from its presence.

"Dr. Blackwood's journal gave us the knowledge we need. We've got the tools; we've got the will. We cleanse this place tonight, or we don't leave at all." Jack's jaw tightened. "For Emma, for all of us—let's finish this."

A surge of energy seemed to ripple through the group, the shared determination binding them closer than any physical chain. With a collective nod, they turned inward once again, facing the heart of horror that awaited them.

"Let's move, team. Stay close, follow my lead," Jack commanded, stepping forward with a confidence that belied the dread that gnawed at his insides. He knew the path would be fraught with peril, but he also knew there was no turning back. The fate of countless souls, both living and dead, now rested upon their shoulders.

Jack's fingers moved deftly over the worn pages of Dr. Blackwood's journal, his eyes scanning the cryptic instructions that promised a semblance of salvation. Around him, the team worked with feverish urgency, setting up the boundary of salt and iron shavings in a perfect circle that cut through the dust and decay of the asylum's forsaken hall.

"North to south, then east to west," he muttered, voice firm over the cacophony of otherworldly snarls that sought to drown out hope. "Place the candles at the cardinal points."

With precision, four members each took a candle, their hands steady as they positioned them, the flames sputtering to life like defiant stars against the encroaching darkness. Maria began to chant the ancient incantations, her voice a clear bell in the murky gloom, while Mark sprinkled a mixture of consecrated herbs along the perimeter, the scent of sage and rosemary rising up.

"Focus! Remember, our energy fuels the ritual. Believe in it," Jack urged, feeling the tingle of arcane power beginning to coalesce around them.

The air crackled, charged with the force of their collective wills, as they joined hands, closing the circle. The words of the ritual melded together, a litany that ebbed and flowed like a tide against the shore of darkness that pressed in on them. Every uttered syllable was a beacon, every candle flicker a lighthouse in the storm.

But as the incantations grew stronger, so too did the resistance. The walls themselves seemed to pulse with a sinister life, the growls intensifying into a deafening roar. Shadows twisted, elongating into grotesque shapes that clawed at the edges of the light. The iron shavings sparked as if alive, repelling the dark entities that slammed against the barrier with the fury of a tempest.

"Keep going!" Jack shouted, his voice nearly lost amid the chaos. Sweat beaded on his forehead, the strain evident as he focused every ounce of his being on maintaining the ritual's integrity.

One by one, the team members' faces contorted with the effort, their voices strained but unyielding as they recited the words that had been passed down through generations of hunters and guardians of the light. Beads of blood appeared where their clasped hands gripped too tightly, a testament to the physical toll the battle was taking.

The very foundation of the asylum trembled, sending cracks spider-webbing across the ceiling, plaster raining down like the ash of a pyre. Yet still they persevered, the ritual their only anchor in the maelstrom.

"Concentrate!" Jack's command was a lifeline they all clung to, his strength bolstering theirs when it threatened to wane. He could feel the evil writhing, its essence beginning to fray as the words of power continued to weave their spell.

"By the light that burns within, we cast you out!" The final words erupted from them as one, a crescendo of human resilience and defiance that tore through the oppressive gloom.

The barrier flared, a blinding halo that expanded with explosive force, sweeping the malevolence before it. The cries of the spirits became distant, an echo of despair as the light purged the shadows, leaving behind a silence that throbbed with the echoes of battle.

They remained motionless for a long beat, catching their breath, daring to believe that the ritual's completion signaled the turning of the tide. It was done; the cleansing had begun. Now, they just had to see it through to the bitter end.

Sarah took a step forward, her silhouette etched sharply against the flickering light of the barrier. The room fell into a hush, every breath held as if by an unseen command. Jack's eyes locked onto hers, a silent plea for her to reconsider passing unspoken between them.

"I'll do it," she said, her voice steady despite the tremors that had claimed her hands. "I'll be the vessel."

A collective gasp fractured the silence, the team exchanging wordless looks of disbelief and dread. Luke's hand sought hers, squeezing once, twice, then letting go as if relinquishing a part of himself. Rachel's eyes brimmed with tears, spilling over unchecked to streak her dirt-smudged cheeks.

"Sarah, no!" Jack's protest was strangled, born of a leader who'd sworn to protect his own yet found himself on the precipice of an unbearable choice. But Sarah's resolve was a fortress, her gaze unwavering.

"It's our only chance," she insisted, and though her words were addressed to all, they were meant for Jack, a final assertion of trust and courage.

The darkness surged forward as if sensing its opportunity, a living thing with malice dripping from its smoky tendrils. Sarah stood at its center, her arms outstretched, the chant from Dr. Blackwood's journal falling from her lips in a rhythmic incantation. The air grew dense, charged with sinister energy that clawed at her flesh, seeking entry.

Pain erupted through her body, a thousand needles piercing her skin simultaneously. She stifled a scream, her knees buckling under the onslaught, but she did not fall. Gritting her teeth, Sarah anchored herself in the present, in the faces of her friends who now wore masks of horror and sorrow for the sacrifice unfolding before them.

"Stay strong, Sarah," Jack murmured, barely audible above the chaos. His hand hovered near her shoulder, yearning to offer comfort but knowing it would tether her to this realm too firmly. He could only watch, his heart shattering piece by piece with her every pained breath.

The evil writhed within her, a tempest seeking dominion over the light it so despised. But Sarah was a beacon, her spirit a lighthouse amidst the storm. With each wave of agony that crashed against her, she pushed back with equal force, her bravery a silent shout in the cacophony of darkness.

She could feel it, the vile essence seeping into her, filling the spaces between her bones, wrapping around her soul. Yet still, she stood resolute, accepting the malevolence into herself to spare the others, to spare the souls lost within the asylum's walls. Sarah became both vessel and warrior, her pain the battleground on which the final war for redemption would be waged.

The circle closed in around Sarah, a fortress of flesh and bone braced against the creeping darkness. Maria's lips moved in silent incantation, fingers splayed as if to weave a protective net with her fervent whispers. Beside her, Mark brandished his talisman, the relic pulsing like a heart torn from the chest of the sacred earth itself. Their faces were etched with grim determination, each crease a testament to their unwavering resolve.

"Let this be our finest hour," Jack intoned, his voice a steel thread amidst the discordant symphony of the damned. The team echoed his sentiment with nods, hands finding each other, strength borrowed and shared through clasped fingers and clenched jaws.

Sarah stood at the eye of the storm, her body a conduit for an agony that seemed older than time. Sweat glistened on her brow like morning dew on a spider's web, each drop catching the flickering candlelight as it fell. She trembled, not with fear, but with the titanic effort of containing the evil that clawed at her insides, desperate to escape its imminent purge.

Around them, the very air began to shimmer, reality bending and warping as the veil between worlds grew thin. Shadows lengthened, twisted into grotesque caricatures of the suffering souls they had once been. And then, as if responding to some unheard celestial call, one by one, the spirits began to dissipate. The howls and screams softened, fading like the last echoes of a nightmare upon waking.

The asylum's inhabitants, bound for decades to their place of torment, found themselves released. Their expressions, once contorted by eternal anguish, now smoothed into peace as they drifted upwards, their forms growing lighter, less tethered to the realm of the living. A spectral ballet danced across the crumbling walls, shades of gray turning to a luminous glow that bathed the room in a gentle radiance.

"Go in peace," whispered Maria, her voice breaking the reverent silence.

The bittersweet release of the lost souls painted the scene with an ephemeral beauty, their departure a silent promise of rest. It was a moment suspended between the beats of the heart, where grief mingled with hope, and sacrifice bore the fruit of salvation.

As Sarah continued to draw the malevolence into herself, she became the fulcrum upon which the fate of the living and the dead balanced. With every labored breath, the weight of centuries lifted, setting free the prisoners of despair.

The team, united in purpose and fortified by love for their friend, watched the transformation with awe. Tears blurred their vision, not just for the tragedy of Sarah's plight, but for the quiet majesty of spirits finding their way home. In this haunted place, where horror had reigned, they bore witness to a rare and fragile grace—the final exodus of souls seeking the light.

Jack's fingers were knotted in the fabric of Sarah's shirt, his knuckles white as he held onto her, a lifeline in the midst of chaos. Her body arched, a silent scream on her lips as she became the vessel for an ancient darkness that no longer had a place in their world. The air crackled with energy, a palpable force that sent ripples through the derelict asylum.

"Almost there, Sarah. Hold on!" Jack urged, his voice a steady anchor against the storm of evil that raged around them. His eyes never left her face, willing her to endure, to triumph over the malevolent entity that sought to consume her.

And then, as if a switch had been flipped, the tumultuous energy ceased. The shadows that had clawed at the walls receded like the tide going out, leaving behind nothing but the echo of their malice. A profound stillness enveloped the room, heavy with the weight of what had just passed.

They had done it. The evil was banished.

A collective sigh reverberated through the team, a sound interwoven with relief and disbelief. They slumped where they stood, their bodies drained from the battle they had fought. Their gazes met, each pair of eyes reflecting the same thought: It was over.

"Sarah?" Maria's tentative voice cut through the silence. They all turned towards their friend, whose chest rose and fell in shallow breaths.

"Stay with us," pleaded Mark, his usually stoic face crumpled in distress. He reached out to brush a lock of hair from Sarah's sweat-drenched forehead, his touch a whisper of comfort.

But deep down, they all knew. Sarah had given everything to shield them, to shield the world from the darkness that had once festered in the heart of the asylum. She would never be the same again.

Jack knelt beside her, the leader, the rock of their team, now reduced to a man grappling with impending loss. "You did it, Sarah. You saved us all," he murmured, a tide of gratitude welling up within him, mingling with the grief that threatened to drown him

Tears streamed down their faces unabashedly as they gathered around Sarah, a tight circle of unity in sorrow. Each touch, each whispered word, was a testament to the bond they shared, to the sacrifice that lay before them, cradled in their arms.

"Thank you," whispered Maria, her voice laced with a pain that mirrored in each of their hearts. "We'll never forget."

The reality of their situation settled over them like a shroud. They had walked into the asylum a complete team, united by purpose and friendship. Now, they would leave with a gaping hole in their ranks, a void that could never be filled.

"Come on, let’s get you out of here," Jack choked out, his throat tight with emotion as he lifted her.

Outside, the world awaited their return, oblivious to the bravery that had transpired within these crumbling walls. But for those who had witnessed it, who had lived it, the memory of the heroism and selflessness would forever be etched in their souls, a beacon of hope in the darkest of nights.

Jack cleared his throat, stepping forward to face the remnants of his team. The silence was profound, a stark contrast to the cacophony that had filled the asylum just hours before. The air felt lighter, yet each breath they took was heavy with loss.

"Everyone," Jack's voice was steady despite the grief that clung to him like the dust in the air. "We've been through... more than any team should ever have to endure." He paused, looking at each of them in turn, their eyes red-rimmed but resolute. "Your courage today—every day—we owe it to the girls to keep fighting."

There was a collective nod among them, an unspoken agreement that this was far from over. They were battered, both in body and spirit, but there was a fire in Jack's words that kindled something within them all. It was a promise, a vow to carry on the legacy of the friend they had lost.

"They believed in what we do. In protecting the living from what lies beyond. We honor her by continuing that mission," Jack continued, his gaze fierce with determination. "We stand against the darkness together, as one."

Maria wiped away a lingering tear and managed a small smile that spoke volumes more than words could. One by one, they began to move, gathering their scattered equipment with hands that trembled not from fear, but from exhaustion and the weight of what they had experienced.

The once intimidating halls of the asylum now seemed nothing more than corridors of brick and mortar, devoid of the malevolence that had once permeated its walls. As they collected the remnants of Dr. Blackwood's journal, the candles, and the myriad of other tools that had aided them in their ritual, there was a palpable sense of closure.

Looking around at the time-worn rooms, it was almost possible to forget the nightmarish ordeal they had faced. But the echo of Emma's laughter, the memory of Alice’s unwavering bravery, refused to be overshadowed by the relief of survival.

"Let's go home," Mark said finally, slinging his bag over his shoulder, feeling its weight as a tangible reminder of their mission's cost.

They moved through the asylum's exit, each step deliberate, leaving behind the shadows and the spirits now at peace. The outside air was a shock to their systems after the oppressive atmosphere they'd become accustomed to, but it was a welcome one. It tasted of freedom, of life continuing on, relentless and unforgiving.

As the last of the equipment was loaded into their van, a profound weariness settled over them, one that went deeper than mere physical fatigue. It was the kind of tiredness that seeped into the bones, that only rest and time could heal—if it could be healed at all.

"Take the time you need," Jack said, locking eyes with each member of his team. "We'll regroup when we're ready. For now, we mourn, we honor, and we heal."

They nodded, understanding that the road ahead would be long and fraught with memories of what had been sacrificed. Yet, amidst the sorrow, there was a thread of solidarity that bound them closer than ever before—a silent oath to bear the torch that Emma and Alice had left in their care.

***

Jack paused at the threshold, his hand resting against the frame of the asylum's heavy doors. The rest of the team huddled close behind him, their silhouettes stark against the early morning light that painted the decrepit façade in hues of gray and lavender. Together, they turned, taking in the sight of the old structure one last time.

The building loomed like a tired giant, its broken windows and peeling paint a testament to years of neglect—and now, finally, a silence that was both hollow and holy. Where once the air had been thick with the cries of spirits and the chill of unseen presences, there was now only the whisper of the wind through the tattered remnants of curtains.

"Looks almost peaceful," murmured Rachel, her voice tinged with disbelief and grief.

"Deceptive peace," muttered Luke, his eyes dark with memories of the night's terror.

Jack felt the weight of their gazes upon him and knew that it was up to him to shepherd this moment. "They did it," he said softly, not just to affirm the sacrifices, but to remind them all that it had not been in vain. They had faced the darkness together, and they would carry on in her name.

A collective breath seemed to pass among them, a shared release of tension. There was relief in knowing the horror was contained, sadness for the price paid, and an underlying current of fear for what might still lurk in shadows elsewhere.

Then, as if on cue, Jack's phone vibrated against his hip, shattering the reflective quiet. He fished it out, the screen casting a pale glow on his face. "It's Rebecca," he announced before answering.

"Jack? We've got a situation," came Sarah's urgent voice over the line.

"Tell me," Jack responded, his tone already shifting from mourning to mission.

"It's another haunting, worse than we've seen before. They need us, Jack."

He took a deep breath, feeling the familiar surge of adrenaline. "We'll be there." As he spoke, his eyes met those of his team members, silently asking if they were ready to walk back into the fray so soon.

"Give us the details, we're heading back now," Jack continued, his decision made for him by the resolve he saw reflected in the faces around him.

"Okay, sending everything to your email. Be careful," Rebecca cautioned before ending the call.

Jack pocketed his phone and looked back at the asylum, its presence less menacing now, more a relic of battles fought and won. Emma and Alice's bravery had carved a path forward, and though her absence was a void none could fill, her spirit would guide them.

"Let's go," he said, determination steeling his voice. "There are more out there who need us."

Without further words, the team piled into the van, the engine coming to life with a rumble that cut through the stillness of the morning. As they drove away, Jack knew that each victory was just a prelude to the next challenge, but for every shadow that crept into the world, they would be the light pushing it back, Emma and Alice's memory fueling their every move.

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Mara Edwards

I have published four or five new stories that are all challenge entries! Would love for you to read!

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