The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 15
The Stand-Off
Alice's hand grazed the crumbling wall of the corridor as she ventured deeper into the labyrinthine asylum. Each step was cautious, her boots scuffing against the debris-strewn floor, the sound reverberating off the decayed walls and amplifying her isolation. Dust particles danced in the thin shafts of light that penetrated the oppressive darkness, creating ghostly streaks in the air. She could taste the mustiness of disuse and despair that clung to the back of her throat, a pungent reminder of the building's tragic past.
Her breath formed little clouds in the chilly air, dissipating quickly, as if afraid to linger too long in this place. The beam from her flashlight cut a swathe through the darkness, revealing peeling paint and graffiti that spoke of former patients' torments. She tried to ignore the sense of being watched, focusing instead on the mission—to uncover the truth that lay buried within these walls.
But then, without warning, the atmosphere shifted. The air grew denser, almost suffocating, pressing in on Alice from all sides. A chill slithered down her spine, and she could feel the fine hairs on the nape of her neck stand at attention. Her pulse quickened, throbbing in her temples, and for a moment, the narrow beam of her flashlight seemed to tremble in her grip.
Instinctively, Alice halted mid-step, her senses on high alert. She felt it before she saw or heard anything—an inexplicable dread that clawed at her insides, a primal warning that something unnatural was close. Too close. She scanned the shadows, the light from her flashlight slicing through the darkness in search of the unseen menace.
"Hello?" she whispered, her voice barely carrying. No response came, save for the soft echo of her own words bouncing back at her, distorted and mocking. But the silence that followed was suffocating, laden with anticipation, as though the very walls were holding their breath.
Alice knew she should call out for the team, regroup and face whatever was coming together. But the heaviness in the air seemed to swallow her voice before it could leave her lips, leaving her feeling vulnerable and exposed. Every instinct screamed at her to run, yet she stood rooted to the spot, caught in the grip of an ominous presence that lurked just beyond sight, waiting, watching, biding its time.
A whisper of movement rustled the stagnant air, a shadow unfurling from the darkness with malevolent grace. Alice's breath hitched in her throat as she glimpsed the horror that materialized before her. It was a corruption of form, a grotesque silhouette pieced together from nightmares and madness. Its body twisted and writhed like an amalgamation of tormented souls, skin stretched taut over jutting bones, and its eyes—abyssal pits of despair—bore into her very being.
The creature's presence was an affront to nature, a blight upon reality that should not exist outside of fever dreams. The light from Alice's flashlight seemed to recoil from it, casting the monstrosity into a chiaroscuro of haunting terror. A guttural growl, resonating with the sorrow of the damned, vibrated through the corridor, setting her teeth on edge. Every muscle in her body screamed for her to flee, but she was paralyzed, caught in the hypnotic gaze of primordial evil incarnate.
Then, with a ferocity that split the silence like the crack of doom, the entity lunged. Claws, sharp as the shards of a shattered soul, sliced through the air where Alice had stood a heartbeat earlier. She stumbled backward, her flashlight tumbling from nerveless fingers and clattering to the floor. The beam flickered erratically, casting monstrous shadows as it spun away from her desperate grasp.
Time seemed to slow as she fought to regain her balance, her mind reeling from the visage of the abomination that hunted her. There was no room for thought, only the primal urge to survive against an adversary that was beyond the realm of human understanding. The creature's hiss filled the corridor, a sound of hunger and hatred that promised pain and oblivion. Alice's survival instincts surged, propelling her back into the relative safety of the shadows that now seemed far less threatening than the evil that sought to claim her life.
Alice’s breath came in ragged gasps, her eyes darting frantically for anything that might serve as a weapon. There! A rusted pipe lay discarded against the wall, remnants of its purpose long since corroded away by time and neglect. With trembling hands, she seized it, the cold metal an unwelcome weight in her grasp.
The creature advanced, malice dripping from every inch of its twisted form. Swinging wildly with the pipe, Alice hoped to ward off the looming specter. The hollow clang of metal against air rang out as the entity deftly sidestepped her panicked assault, almost mocking in its agility.
"Come on!" she growled through clenched teeth, trying to anchor her fear with anger. She swung again, putting the last vestiges of her hope behind the strike. But the evil before her was ancient and cunning; it had danced with desperation more times than the stars themselves could count.
With a movement too swift for human eyes, the being struck back. The force of its counter-attack sent the pipe clattering away, skittering across the floor until it collided with the wall, the sound of its escape painfully loud in the confined space.
Now weaponless, Alice felt the terror clawing at her chest, a living thing eager to break free. The entity towered over her, the sheer malevolence emanating from its form oppressive, suffocating. It lunged again, and this time there was no narrow escape.
Its claws raked across her shoulder, tearing through fabric and flesh with equal ease. A scream tore from Alice's throat, a primal sound that echoed the pain and fear coursing through her veins. Warm blood soaked into her clothes, the wetness a stark reminder of her mortality.
She stumbled backward, her footing uncertain on the slick floor. Another swipe of those dreadful talons, and she felt the sting of fresh wounds across her abdomen. She collapsed, her body unable to withstand the onslaught, pain flaring white-hot and blinding.
Curled defensively, Alice tried to protect herself, but she knew it was in vain. Each movement, each breath became a torture as the dark presence loomed closer, its intent clear and fatal. Her mind raced, thoughts fragmented, slipping away into the darkness that edged her vision. The evil was relentless, and in those moments, as strength abandoned her, Alice felt the crushing weight of its victory.
Jack's blood ran cold at the sound of Alice's scream, a chilling reminder that the asylum's walls held more than just the whispers of madness. It was the sort of sound that threaded its way into your bones, a harbinger of nightmares to come.
"Did you hear that?" Sarah whispered, her face drained of color. The flicker of their flashlights did little to stave off the encroaching darkness of the corridor.
"Something's got her," Luke said, his voice thick with dread. His usually steady hands shook as he adjusted the grip on his EMF meter, the readouts now forgotten in the wake of human terror.
The team exchanged grim looks, recognizing the severity of the situation. They had all heard the tales—whispers of an entity so vile, it was said to be born from the very essence of the asylum's tragic past. And they knew Alice was alone, vulnerable, facing that which they had all feared to confront.
"Come on!" Jack barked, his military background snapping to the forefront. He seized the initiative, the need to protect his teammate galvanizing him into action. Fear lingered, yes, but it was overshadowed by a fierce determination that seemed to carve through the haze of panic.
They moved as one, a unit bound by purpose, their footfalls a rhythmic drumming against the grimy floors. The echo of their haste bounced back at them, as though the building itself was alive and reacting to the invasion of its haunted silence.
"Keep your eyes open," Sarah cautioned, her voice steady despite the palpable fear in her eyes. She clutched her bag of salt and iron filings—a meager defense against something so ancient and malevolent, yet it was all they had.
"Left here!" Jack called out, recalling the map etched in his memory. A quick glance at the faded signs on the wall confirmed they were heading towards the East Wing—the last place they'd seen Alice.
"Jack, what if we're too late?" Mark's question was barely audible over the pounding of their footsteps, but it hung heavy in the air, a specter as haunting as any ghost.
"We're not giving up on her," Jack replied, his voice laced with a resolve that left no room for doubt. "Not now, not ever."
The distant echo of Alice's cries grew louder, more desperate. Each one was a blow to their resolve, a stark reminder that time was slipping through their fingers like grains of sand in an hourglass. But Jack pushed them harder, unwilling to let despair take root.
"Almost there!" he shouted, rounding another corner. The decrepit walls of the asylum seemed to press in on them, the shadows writhing as if animated by the terror of their companion.
"Stay sharp," he reminded them, knowing that whatever had attacked Alice could easily turn its malevolence upon them next. They would need every ounce of their combined skills and courage to face the primordial evil that lurked within these walls.
The corridor stretched out like a gaping maw, the scant light from their torches casting elongated shadows against the peeling paint of the asylum walls. Jack's breath came in sharp bursts, his heart hammering against his ribs as he led the team closer to where Alice's screams had originated.
They turned a corner and the sight that greeted them rooted them to the spot. Through the flickering darkness, they saw it—a writhing mass of darkness with too many eyes, its form shifting and undulating as if not bound by the laws of nature. The entity's claws were a blur, coming down again and again towards where Alice lay curled on the ground, her arms raised in a futile attempt to shield herself.
"God," Sarah whispered, her hand flying to her mouth. Her eyes, wide with terror, never left the brutal tableau before them.
"Mark, the EMF!" Jack barked, his voice a harsh whisper, trying to keep his own horror in check.
Fumbling with his backpack, Mark produced the device designed to measure fluctuations in the electromagnetic field—fluctuations often associated with paranormal activity. He switched it on, his hands shaking, and pointed it at the entity. The lights on the EMF reader leapt to life, spiking erratically.
"Nothing we've seen has ever been this strong," Sarah said, her voice shaky but resolute. She was the scholar, the one who pored over ancient texts and obscure rituals. If anyone knew what to do, it was her.
"Salt, iron, holy water?" Mark suggested, rifling through the contents of his pack. These were their standard defenses, the tools of their trade when dealing with malevolent spirits.
"Throw everything!" Jack commanded, his gaze fixed on Alice. Her screams had become whimpers, the sound tearing at his soul.
Sarah grabbed a handful of salt and flung it toward the entity, murmuring words of protection under her breath. A sizzling sound filled the air as the grains met the outer edges of the evil's form, but it barely slowed the creature's assault.
"Try the iron!" Jack yelled, desperation bleeding into his tone.
Mark tossed an iron rod towards the entity, hoping the metal known for its purifying properties would at least distract it. The rod passed through the dark form without resistance, clattering uselessly to the floor.
"Damn it! It's not working," Mark spat out, fear lacing his voice.
"Focus!" Sarah snapped, her brain racing for any scrap of lore that might give them an edge. "We need something it's not expecting."
Jack kept his eyes locked on Alice, witnessing each strike as though he himself felt the claws tearing into flesh. "Think, Sarah! There has to be something!"
"Light," she suddenly uttered, her eyes snapping up with renewed vigor. "It's always shrouded in darkness. Maybe it can't stand pure light."
"Strobes!" Mark exclaimed, realization dawning. He quickly set up the high-intensity strobe lights they had initially brought for disorientation during their investigation. He flicked the switch, and the corridor erupted into a chaotic ballet of blinding light, slicing through the darkness with each pulse.
The entity recoiled with a guttural howl that shook the very walls of the asylum. For a moment, it seemed confused, its form flickering under the barrage of light.
"Keep it going!" Jack shouted, seizing the moment of distraction. He darted forward, pulling Alice away from the creature's reach. Her body was limp, her breaths shallow, but she was alive. Alive and out of immediate danger.
"Jack..." Alice's voice was a weak rasp, her eyes fluttering open just enough to meet his.
"Stay with me, Alice," he urged, his voice tender. "Just stay with us."
Luke's muscles tensed, a silent curse on his lips for ever doubting the reality of the danger they faced. The strobes flickered, casting eerie shadows that danced along the walls like mocking specters. He had hesitated once, and it had cost Alice dearly. Not again. With each heartbeat drumming in his ears, he launched himself at the entity, his hands outstretched, aiming for what he hoped was its vulnerable core.
"Get away from her!" he roared, his voice lost amidst the din of otherworldly screeches and the erratic staccato of the strobe lights.
The entity turned, a swirling mass of darkness that seemed to suck the very light from the air. It faced Luke with an intensity that felt like a physical weight, paralyzing him mid-stride. In an instant, the creature struck, faster than any earthly predator. Luke felt the force of the blow before he registered the pain, a searing agony that ripped through his chest as he was flung backward into the crumbling wall.
"Luke!" Sarah's scream pierced the chaos.
He crumpled to the ground, his body wracked with spasms. Gasping, he tried to rise, to continue the fight, but his limbs refused to obey. His vision blurred, the edges tinged with encroaching darkness, not from the entity this time, but from his own faltering consciousness.
"Stay down," Mark's urgent whisper reached him, a hand pressing against his shoulder keeping him grounded. "Don't move, man. You'll only make it worse."
Through the haze of his pain, Luke watched helplessly as Alice lay vulnerable and wounded, the beast looming over her.
Then Sarah stepped forward, her face set in grim determination. She was always the one who could see beyond the immediate horror to the bigger picture. She grabbed a discarded metal rod from the debris-strewn floor, banging it against the pipes running along the corridor. The clanging reverberated, oddly musical, and strangely, it drew the creature's attention.
"Over here, you bastard!" Sarah shouted, her voice surprisingly steady. She banged the rod again, harder, more insistent.
The entity turned towards her, its form wavering as if Sarah's audacity alone challenged its existence.
"Mark, help Jack with Alice," she commanded without turning to see if they'd heard. Her gaze never left the malevolent form before her. "I can buy us some time."
"Sarah, don't be crazy!" Mark protested, but he was already moving toward Alice, his priorities clear.
"Trust me," Sarah said, her eyes narrowing as she calculated her next move. "I have a plan."
She continued the resonating symphony of metal against metal, each strike a beacon in the oppressive gloom. The entity hesitated, then surged towards her, drawn by the challenge.
"Go!" she yelled to the others as she bolted, leading the creature away from Alice, her footsteps echoing Luke's as she disappeared around a corner, the sound of her makeshift weapon fading into the distance.
Luke's breath hitched, a mix of admiration and terror for Sarah's bravery filling him as darkness finally claimed his consciousness.
Dust swirled in the dim light as Jack and Luke positioned themselves at opposite ends of the corridor, each clutching an array of gadgets that emitted intermittent beeps and whirs. Their synchronized movements were practiced, a dance they'd performed countless times in the face of the unknown. With a nod from Jack, Mark flipped a switch on his device, sending a surge of electromagnetic waves into the air. The atmosphere crackled with energy, the hairs on the back of Jack's neck standing on end.
"Stay focused," Jack murmured, more to himself than to Luke. They had one shot at this—to create enough of a disruption that would give them a window to reach Alice.
A high-pitched whine pierced the air, emanating from the device in Mark's hands, growing louder and more insistent. Jack watched the entity's form twitch and shudder, its attention torn between the lure of Sarah's retreating form and the cacophony now enveloping it.
"Keep it steady, Mark," Jack urged, his eyes never straying from the monstrous form before them. "Just a bit longer."
He could see the creature's resolve wavering, its head turning erratically, as if the sounds and frequencies were an itch it couldn't scratch. This was their moment.
"NOW!" Jack shouted, breaking into a sprint towards where Alice lay crumpled against the wall. The evil's gaze snapped toward him, but the dissonance held it at bay, confusion etched into the dark energy that swirled around it.
Jack reached Alice's side, dropping to his knees with a thud. Her breathing was shallow, punctuated by soft moans of pain. Blood seeped through the tears in her shirt where vicious claws had raked across her flesh. Sarah arrived seconds later, her breath ragged from the exertion of leading the creature on a wild chase.
"Help me with her wounds," Jack called out, his hands already pressing against the worst of the bleeding.
Sarah knelt beside him, her hands trembling as she attempted to staunch the flow of blood with pieces of her own ripped jacket. She met Jack's gaze, her eyes filled with both fear and a fierce determination that belied her shaking hands. Together, they worked to stabilize Alice, their combined efforts a testament to the bond forged in the fires of countless encounters with the unexplainable.
"Is she—" Sarah began, her voice catching in her throat.
"She's alive," Jack confirmed, his voice steady despite the adrenaline coursing through his veins. "But we need to move her, get her somewhere safe."
"Mark, Luke," Jack called out without looking up, trusting they were still holding the line. "We need to retreat, regroup."
"Understood," came Mark's steady reply, the devices winding down as he prepared to cover their exit.
"Watch over her," Jack said to Sarah, his hand squeezing her shoulder before he stood, ready to confront whatever darkness lay ahead. Together, they would face the unknown, their resolve unshaken even in the face of such primordial evil.
Jack stood, his gaze sweeping over the decrepit walls of the asylum corridor as the others gathered in a tight circle around Alice's prone form. The air was thick with the stench of mold and the tang of iron from blood spilled in the skirmish. Dust motes danced in the beam of Sarah's flashlight, the only light that pierced the oppressive darkness surrounding them.
"Okay, listen up," Jack said, his voice low but carrying the weight of command. "That thing out there, it's not like anything we've faced before."
Mark nodded, his expression grim as he checked the battery levels on their specialized equipment. "I've been monitoring its energy patterns. It's off the charts. Our normal containment protocols aren't going to cut it."
Sarah, ever the scholar, interlaced her fingers tightly, her knuckles white. "The lore I've read suggested something ancient, yes, but experiencing it firsthand..." She trailed off, her eyes haunted.
Sarah cradled Alice's head in her lap, her gaze fixed on Jack. "We can't just leave her here. That beast won't stop until it's destroyed everything in its path."
"Then we won't leave," Luke interjected, his voice hoarse from where he leaned against the wall. The guilt from his earlier hesitation to act etched deep lines into his face. "We stand and fight."
They all looked at each intact other, silently acknowledging the pact they shared. They weren't merely colleagues; they were comrades bound by the pursuit of the paranormal, protectors against the darkness that preyed upon the living.
"We need a plan, one that'll give us more than a few seconds' reprieve," Sarah stated, determination steeling her features.
"Agreed," Jack said, standing taller. "We use what we know. We lure it, trap it, and hit it with everything we have."
"Divide and conquer," Mark suggested, his analytical mind already racing through possibilities.
"Exactly," Jack confirmed. "But this time, we stay together. No one gets left behind. Not again."
"Jack's right," Sarah added, her voice steady despite the fear that lingered in her eyes. "This entity is drawn to life force, to emotion. We use that. We bait it, and we bind it."
Luke pushed off from the wall, his resolve hardening. "I'm done running."
"Then it's settled," Jack said, meeting each of their gazes in turn. "We regroup, we plan, and we end this—tonight."
"Tonight," they echoed, their voices merging into a single vow.
As they aided Alice to her feet, supporting her weakened body between them, the team's bond solidified. The haunting had brought them to the brink, but in its harrowing grip, they found unity. Together, they would turn the tide against the darkness, for Alice, for Emma, for themselves, and for the countless souls that had suffered within these forsaken halls.
About the Creator
Mara Edwards
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