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The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 2

The Investigation Continues

By Mara EdwardsPublished 2 years ago 11 min read
The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 2
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The musty air grew denser as the team delved deeper into the labyrinthine corridors of the old asylum, their footsteps a soft patter against the silence that seemed almost palpable. Shadows clung to the corners where the dim light of their flashlights failed to reach, and every so often, a draft would snake its way through the gaps in the boarded-up windows, carrying with it the stale scent of abandonment.

Sarah's breaths came out in measured puffs, visible in the chill that enveloped them like a shroud. Her fingers, despite being tucked into the warmth of her gloves, trembled as she fumbled with the compact audio recorder, a beacon of modernity in this forgotten relic of suffering. The anticipation of what they might capture tonight wrestled with the fear nipping at her resolve.

"Almost got it," Sarah muttered to herself, her voice barely above a whisper, as if afraid to disturb the slumber of ghosts rumored to roam these halls. With practiced ease born from many a night spent chasing whispers in the dark, she clicked the device on, ensuring the microphone was angled just right to catch any stray sound—a plea from the past, a cry for help long ignored, anything that could prove they weren't alone.

"Ready when you are," she called out softly to the rest of her team, her eyes never leaving the small screen of the recorder as it blinked into life, ready to etch the unseen into waves of sound. The red light flickered on, a steady pulse amidst the cold desolation, capturing more than just the audible; it captured hope, fear, and the insatiable human desire to touch the beyond.

The sterile, once-white walls of the asylum were now a canvas for decay, streaked with grime and the scars of abandonment. The flickering lights, sporadic in their duty, cast an otherworldly glow over the scene, giving life to shadows that danced mockingly along the spiderwebbed fractures in the plaster. Every so often, one would sputter and die before gasping back to life, as if in protest to the darkness that sought to claim the forsaken corridors.

Sarah’s breath caught in her throat, not just from the cold that seemed to seep into her bones but also from the weight of history that hung heavily in the air. She could almost hear the echoes of despair that had soaked into these walls, the suffering that clung to the peeling paint like a residue of souls. Each step they took was a further descent into the heart of the asylum's grim past, the very air thick with the oppressive sense of dread that comes from places long steeped in misery.

Her gloved finger hesitated for only a moment before pressing firmly down on the record button, the soft click almost sacrilegious in the silence. She held her breath, half-expecting the act to awaken something ancient and malevolent. But there was only the red light, unwavering now, that reassuringly signaled the beginning of their quest into the unknown. It was a silent sentinel, bearing witness to their intrusion, a modern-day talisman against the encroaching gloom.

With the recorder diligently capturing every nuance of the asylum's eerie symphony—the distant drip of water, the sigh of wind through broken windows—Sarah felt a shiver of excitement run through her. This small device was her lifeline, a tether to reality when all else around her whispered of madness and secrets long buried beneath layers of dust and time.

The creaking of floorboards sang a discordant chorus beneath their cautious steps, each groan a testament to the years of neglect that had befallen the old asylum. The sound splintered the suffocating silence, a reminder of the unseen weight of countless stories that lingered in the stale air. Sarah's fingers tightened around the audio recorder, as if her grip alone could anchor her to the present amidst the growing sense of dislocation.

Whispers, feather-light and indistinct, seemed to slither along the cracked walls, rising and falling with the shadows that danced just out of reach of their flashlights. It was a macabre pantomime of light against darkness, playing tricks on their eyes—or perhaps revealing hidden truths. Sarah knew it was just the wind, the rational part of her brain insisted on it, but something primal within her stirred, attuned to the possibility of voices from beyond the veil.

It was then that the audio recorder crackled fiercely, breaking through the orchestra of ambient noise with a startling burst of static. Sarah's pulse quickened, a surge of adrenaline rendering her momentarily breathless as the hairs on the back of her neck stood at attention. Her thumb hovered over the device, contemplating the urge to stop the recording, to protect herself from whatever was trying to communicate through the veil of white noise.

But curiosity was a powerful force, stronger than fear, stronger even than self-preservation. She held her breath, straining her ears as the static morphed, contorting itself into the semblance of a hushed tone, a whisper that was almost human, almost familiar. Something was there, woven into the tapestry of sounds—a message, an utterance, a plea?

"Is it... Are you hearing this?" she whispered to the shadowed figures of her team, who paused and clustered around her, their own breaths held in collective anticipation. The recorder's red light blinked steadily, a heartbeat in the dark, as they all leaned closer to the speaker, seeking the voice among the static, waiting for the ethereal whispers to reveal their secrets.

The crackle intensified, shattering the silence like brittle glass underfoot. Sarah's eyes widened as the whisper swelled into a clear, resonant command that froze her blood.

"Get out."

The voice, deep and commanding, echoed not through the halls, but in their minds, an intimate intrusion that left an icy trail of dread down their spines. It was as if the very soul of the asylum had found its voice in those two words—a voice that was unwelcoming, unyielding. Sarah felt her resolve waver, a primal part of her screaming to heed the ominous warning.

"Did you all hear that?" she gasped, her voice barely rising above a tremulous whisper.

Her team, once composed of fervent skeptics and eager ghost hunters, now stood as statues, their faces drained of color. They exchanged wide-eyed looks, the kind that spoke volumes of the fear that suddenly gripped them. The bravado that had bolstered their spirits upon entering the forsaken asylum crumbled under the weight of that spectral command.

"Sarah, that... that can't be real," one of them stuttered, but none could deny the chilling effect it had; the air seemed to grow colder with each passing second.

At that moment, Mark peeled away from the huddled group, propelled by a mix of curiosity and a desperate need to rationalize what they'd just heard. He stepped into a nearby patient room, his breath visible in the frigid air, expelling clouds of disbelief with every exhale.

The room was a stark reminder of the agony once housed within these walls. Paint peeled away in long, sorrowful strips, while rusted bed springs lay exposed like the bones of a long-dead carcass. In the corner, the remnants of leather restraints dangled from a decrepit bed frame, their cracked surfaces bearing mute testimony to countless struggles endured and forgotten.

Mark's gaze lingered on those restraints, imagining the restless souls who might still yearn for release. The atmosphere oppressed him, heavy with the echoes of despair. Every fiber of his being urged him to step back into the safety of numbers, yet he stood rooted to the spot, transfixed by the history of torment etched into every inch of the decaying space.

"Guys..." he called out, his voice faltering, "you need to see this."

Mark's exhale formed a ghostly plume, dancing briefly before dissipating into the oppressive gloom of the room. He rubbed his arms vigorously, trying to generate warmth against the sudden, unnerving drop in temperature that sank its teeth into his flesh. The chill seemed unnatural, as though the very air was leeching the life from him. With each shallow breath, a shiver cascaded down his spine—a primal warning that he was not alone.

"Come here," his voice barely rose above a whisper, yet it cut through the silence with urgency.

At his summons, the team clustered at the doorway, their collective breaths creating a fog that swirled in the dim light. Sarah, her fingers still trembling, clutched the audio recorder like a lifeline. They pressed in closer, forming a tight circle around the small device as she hit play.

The crackle of static filled the air first, a prelude to the disembodied voice they had all heard moments ago. Anticipation tightened the muscles in Mark's jaw as he waited for the inevitable.

"Get out."

The words, clearer now through the recording, seemed to reverberate off the walls, penetrating deeper than sound alone. Faces paled as eyes darted about, seeking an unseen threat. Tom's hand went reflexively to his camera, perhaps hoping to capture evidence of what his mind struggled to accept. Jenna, usually the skeptic, wrapped her arms around herself, a barrier against the creeping dread that slithered into every corner of the room.

"Did we... did we really just hear that?" whispered Alex, his bravado from earlier nowhere to be seen in his wide-eyed expression.

"Can't be," Jenna muttered, more to herself than to anyone else, "It's got to be some sort of interference, right?"

"Interference doesn't tell you to get out," Tom replied, his usual humor failing to mask the strain in his voice.

Sarah remained silent, her gaze locked on the blinking red light of the recorder—a beacon in the shadowy uncertainty that enveloped them. The skepticism that once fortified her was crumbling, eroded by the undeniable reality of the voice commanding their departure.

"Let's listen again," she said finally, her voice steady despite the chaos of emotions that flashed across her face. "We need to be sure.

As the EVP played once more, the message unchanging, a tangible unease settled over the group like a shroud. They exchanged looks, a wordless conversation passing between them. It was clear that whatever skepticism they might have harbored was now a distant memory, overshadowed by the fear of the unknown and the very real sense of being unwelcome in this forsaken place.

Jack cleared his throat, breaking the silence that had fallen over the group like a heavy fog. "We can't stop now," he said, determination replacing the shock in his voice. "There's something here, and we've got to find out what it is."

The rest of the team, despite their unease, nodded in agreement. The fear they felt was real, but it was matched by an insatiable hunger for answers—a drive that had led them into the heart of the asylum in the first place.

"Right," Sarah affirmed, her fingers tightening around the audio recorder. "We came for proof. Let's get it." Her voice, a blend of trepidation and resolve, seemed to steady the others.

With a collective breath, they stepped forward, moving deeper into the bowels of the once-thriving institution. As they progressed, the already faint light from their flashlights struggled against an oppressive darkness that sought to smother every beam. It was as if the shadows themselves were alive, stretching and twisting along the walls in grotesque dances.

The air grew colder with each step, and a sensation began to creep over them—an unsettling awareness that they were not alone. It whispered through the cracks in the plaster, rustled the tattered curtains hanging limply in broken windows, and seeped into their very bones.

Sarah could feel the weight of unseen eyes upon her, watching from the darkened recesses of abandoned rooms and long-forgotten hallways. It was as though the asylum itself had taken notice of the intruders, its lingering occupants stirring from their eternal unrest.

"Does anyone else feel that?" Jenna asked, her voice barely above a whisper, as if afraid to disturb the spectral observers.

"Feels like we're being watched," Tom murmured, his flashlight sweeping over peeling paint and shattered glass, seeking the source of their discomfort.

"Keep close," Mark advised, his usual bravado subdued by the palpable presence that seemed to follow their every move.

They pressed on, united by the silent agreement that turning back was no longer an option—not when the truth might be waiting just around the next shadow-cloaked corner. Each step took them further from the world they knew, drawing them into the embrace of a history marred by tragedy and despair.

And all the while, the feeling of unseen eyes bore into them, relentless and unblinking, as the asylum held its breath, waiting to reveal its secrets.

"Okay, let's split up," Jack announced, his command slicing through the silence that had settled over the group like a shroud. "Sarah and I will take the west wing; Jenna, you and Tom head upstairs. Mark, you and Liz check out the basement. Keep your radios on."

The team nodded, their faces set in grim determination. Sarah glanced at Jack, her partner for this leg of the journey, and saw the same eagerness to uncover the asylum's hidden tales mirrored in her own heart. Despite the dread that clung to her like the cobwebs festooning the dimly lit hallways, there was an insatiable need to know, to understand what whispered from the shadows.

"Twenty-minute check-ins," Jack continued, his eyes scanning each pair. "If anything happens—if you find anything—don't hesitate to call it in."

"Got it," Tom replied, the beam of his flashlight steady in his hand as he moved toward the staircase with Jenna trailing behind him. The two formed a solid unit, their shared skepticism now replaced by a cautious alliance in the face of the unknown.

As Liz and Mark turned toward the maw of the basement door, Liz's normally unshakable composure wavered ever so slightly. She took a deep breath, steeling herself against the chill that seeped from the gaping entrance. Mark gave her shoulder a reassuring squeeze before they descended into the bowels of the forgotten institution, the promise of untold secrets drawing them onward.

Sarah clicked on her audio recorder once more, ensuring it was ready to capture any hint of the ethereal voices that seemed to murmur just beyond the realm of the living. Jack, ever the leader, moved with purpose, his jaw set as he led the way into the west wing. Each pair carried with them not only their tools of investigation but also the weight of a history too long ignored, eager to be heard.

The echoes of their footsteps became a chorus of anticipation, reverberating off crumbling walls and through decrepit doorways. One by one, the pairs vanished into their respective sections, the distance between them growing with each step until the darkness swallowed them whole.

And then, there was silence—a pregnant pause as the asylum seemed to inhale deeply, readying itself for whatever discoveries lay in wait. In the stillness, the team advanced, their individual paths unknown yet inexorably intertwined as they prepared to confront the lurking specters of the past.

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Mara Edwards

I have published four or five new stories that are all challenge entries! Would love for you to read!

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