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The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 1

Entering Blackwood

By Mara EdwardsPublished 2 years ago 14 min read
The Mystery of Blackwood: Chapter 1
Photo by Kieron Mannix on Unsplash

The heavy door groaned on its hinges as Jack Thorne stepped into the shadowy embrace of Blackwood Asylum. The silence of abandonment was palpable, broken only by the crisp tread of his team's footsteps that reverberated off the decaying walls. Flickers from their flashlights danced across peeling paint and discarded furniture, casting eerie shapes in the gloom.

"Alright, let's keep a tight formation until we reach the reception area," Jack instructed, his voice a steady beacon in the dark.

"Copy that, boss," came Emma's chirpy response, her youthful exuberance cutting through the heaviness of the air. Her flashlight swept over the graffiti-laden walls with an almost childlike curiosity, eager to uncover the secrets held within.

"Will do," added Mark, his tone a touch more hesitant. A seasoned investigator with a skeptical edge, he kept one hand firmly on the EMF meter clipped to his belt, the other gripping a camera ready to document any anomalies.

"Hope this place is sturdier than it looks," Sarah muttered, trailing slightly behind. She adjusted the strap of her audio equipment, eyes scanning for signs of structural weakness. Her practical nature often served as the grounding force of the group, her attention to detail unparalleled.

"Blackwood's stood the test of time, no reason it won't hold up tonight," Jack reassured her, though he shared her concerns about safety. He led them further down the corridor, each step deliberate, alert to every sound and movement.

"Feels like we're stepping back in time," Emma whispered, her beam illuminating a row of rusted lockers.

"Or into a horror movie," Mark quipped, but his joke fell flat, smothered by the thick atmosphere of the asylum.

"Let's just focus on the task at hand," Sarah suggested, voice steady. "This place might be a gold mine for EVPs."

They continued deeper into the bowels of Blackwood, their presence a stark contrast to the years of solitude the building had known. Each member of the team carried the weight of their expertise, their tools of the trade ready to peel back the veil between the worlds of the living and the dead. And as they moved with practiced precision, there was an unspoken understanding that within these forsaken halls, they were not just hunters of ghosts, but seekers of truth in the darkness.

Jack paused before an imposing, metal-banded door, his hand resting against the cold surface as if feeling for a pulse. The others gathered around him, their breaths a symphony of nervous anticipation.

"Remember the Hightower case?" Jack's voice sliced through the silence, each word deliberate, eyes locking with his team. "We faced something there that didn't want to be understood, let alone disturbed."

Mark nodded, his expression grim. "Yeah, we walked away with more questions than answers—and a hell of a lot more respect for what's out there."

"Or what might be in here," Sarah added, her steady tone belying the tight grip she had on her digital recorder.

"Blackwood Asylum," Jack continued, his gaze drifting into the shadows, "is not just a building; it's a monument to human suffering. The patients here were subjected to... barbaric treatments." He hesitated, the weight of history pressing down upon them.

"Like the ice pick lobotomies performed without anesthesia," Emma interjected, her curiosity always burning bright, even in the face of terror.

"Exactly. And the electroshock therapy that was more torture than treatment," Jack affirmed, his historian's mind painting a vivid picture of the past. "They say tormented souls are still trapped within these walls, reliving their pain over and again."

A chill seemed to spread through the group, as if the very air they breathed carried echoes of those long-ago screams. It wasn't just another ghost story—it was Blackwood's legacy.

"Let's keep our wits about us," Jack concluded. "The challenges we've faced have brought us here, ready for whatever we may find. But remember, we're dealing with forces that don't play by our rules. Stay sharp."

His words hung heavy in the stale air as he pushed open the door, leading his team deeper into the asylum's heart. They were hunters in a forest of madness, and tonight they sought the ghosts of Blackwood—ready to confront the remnants of its chilling history head-on.

The echo of their footsteps filled the abandoned reception area as Jack Thorne's team unfolded tables and flicked on flashlights. Shadows danced across the walls, playing with the remnants of what once was the first glimpse of hope—or doom—for the ill-fated patients of Blackwood Asylum.

"Alright, let's set up here," Jack instructed, his voice a steady beacon in the gloom. The team responded with practiced efficiency, unzipping bags and assembling tripods for their array of cameras. Infrared sensors were placed strategically; each piece of equipment was a familiar extension of themselves, a necessary armor against the unknown.

"Can you believe we're actually here?" Emma's voice broke through the methodical clinking of metal and rustling of bags. Her eyes gleamed with an insatiable hunger for knowledge, reflecting the faint glow of her headlamp as she carefully unpacked a notebook, its pages eager to be filled with observations.

"Believe it? I've been dreaming about this day since we started the team," she continued, her excitement palpable as she inspected a digital recorder. "Blackwood has always been the holy grail of paranormal sites."

Mark's hands paused over the thermal imaging camera he was setting up, a frown etching lines into his brow. "Dreaming or having nightmares?" he murmured. His skepticism was his shield, though tonight, it seemed to waver slightly in the face of Blackwood's oppressive atmosphere.

"Easy for you to be excited, Emma," Sarah chimed in, her voice betraying a hint of trepidation as she tested the range on her walkie-talkie. "You haven't been the one to wake up at 3 AM thinking you've seen a shadow standing over your bed after our last outing." She cast a wary glance around the room, as if expecting the past occupants to materialize from the peeling paint and broken tiles.

"Hey," Jack interjected, offering a reassuring nod to both Mark and Sarah, "We've all had our share of sleepless nights after a visit like this. But that's why we're here, right? To seek answers, not just to chase shadows." He secured a wide-angle camera to cover their base camp, ensuring nothing would go unnoticed.

"Besides," he added with a wry smile, "You're not alone in this—none of us are. We've got each other's backs."

As they finished their preparations, each member of the team felt the weight of the asylum's dark history pressing against them—a silent challenge to the truths they yearned to uncover. With a final check of their gear, they stood ready to face the night, the thrill of discovery and the whisper of fear mingling in the charged air.

Jack consulted the worn blueprint of Blackwood Asylum spread across an aged table, its edges curling like withered leaves. The dim light from their lanterns cast long shadows on the walls, as if the darkness itself was leaning in to listen.

"Alright," Jack began, his voice a steady command that cut through the anticipatory hum of the room, "We need eyes and ears in every corner. Emma, you're with me. We'll take the East Wing where the old electroshock therapy rooms are."

Emma's eyes sparkled with an eager intensity as she nodded, her earlier excitement now edged with the gravity of their task.

"Mark, Sarah, you guys will handle the West Wing – that's where the solitary confinement cells are. It's heavy stuff there, so stay sharp." Jack's gaze lingered on them for a moment longer, ensuring his words settled deep.

"Got it, boss," Mark replied, his voice firm, but his hand gripped the thermal camera a little tighter than usual. Sarah simply nodded, her stoic face masking the unease that seemed to radiate off her.

"Remember, record everything, and I mean everything,” Jack continued. "Disembodied voices, cold spots, spectral figures... we document first, analyze later. And keep your radios on. Always."

"Here we go again," Emma whispered, half to herself, as she checked the battery on her handheld camera.

"Let's get moving," Jack declared.

The team members donned their headlamps, the white beams slicing through the gloom as they gathered their equipment. With a final nod to each other, they split into their pairs, each duo heading toward their respective wings.

Jack and Emma's steps echoed in the tiled corridor, the sound bouncing off the stained walls and hanging in the air behind them. The weight of countless untold stories seemed to seep from the very bricks, and Emma felt a shiver run down her spine—not from fear, but from the thrill of piercing the veil of the unknown.

Behind them, Mark and Sarah made their way with measured strides. Mark’s hand instinctively went to the recorder in his pocket, ready to capture any whispers from beyond. Sarah clutched her digital thermometer, her breath shallow as they approached the looming doorway to the West Wing. The darkness there seemed thicker, an abyss waiting to swallow them whole.

Their footsteps grew fainter as they ventured deeper into their assigned sections, the silence of the asylum swelling around them. Each creak and groan of the dilapidated structure punctuated the stillness with a foreboding note, as though the building itself was alive and aware of the intruders in its midst.

The thrill of the hunt was palpable among them, tinged with an undercurrent of dread. As they disappeared from each other's view, the isolation of their tasks became real, and the night's investigation truly began.

Sarah’s fingers tightened around the slender frame of her audio recorder as she stood in the center of a decaying patient room. The peeling paint on the walls seemed to close in on her, and each shadow felt like it was hiding secrets that whispered just below the threshold of hearing. She raised the device, pressed the record button, and asked into the void, “Is there anyone here with us?”

The question hung in the air, vibrating slightly as if the silence itself was a membrane too taut. Sarah's eyes darted from corner to corner, her senses straining for any sign of the paranormal. It was then, amid the stillness, a static crackle emerged from her headphones followed by a voice so deep and resonant it seemed to be dredged up from the bowels of the earth itself.

"Get out," it commanded, a declaration wrapped in an echo that couldn't belong to the empty room.

A shiver shot through Sarah’s spine, sharp and cold as ice water, her professional composure momentarily slipping away. She replayed the recording, and again the voice reverberated, unmistakable and chilling. With a breath that trembled, Sarah keyed her walkie-talkie, "Guys, you need to hear this."

Meanwhile, Mark navigated the bleak corridor towards one of the notorious patient rooms, guided only by the dim beam of his flashlight. As he crossed the threshold, the temperature plummeted, a sudden chill enveloping him. It was as though he had walked into an invisible cloud of cold, its tendrils wrapping around him with an almost sentient intent.

"Damn," he muttered, watching his breath curl into a thick mist in the beam of the flashlight. He fumbled for the digital thermometer, his fingers numb and clumsy. The small screen blinked and settled on a number far below what any derelict building should have been, even one as forsaken as Blackwood Asylum.

"Jack, Emma, come in," Mark's voice was steady, but the underlying tension bled through the radio static. "We've got a significant temp drop in here. Feels like we're not alone."

Back at base camp, Jack grabbed his own gear with renewed purpose, the reports from his team igniting a familiar fire within him. This was why they were here, after all—to chase down these elusive threads of the unexplained and weave them into evidence. Emma looked up from her monitor, her eyes reflecting a spark of excitement. They exchanged a nod, aware that Blackwood Asylum was beginning to reveal its dark heart to them.

The flicker of computer screens and the soft hum of electrical equipment filled the old reception area, now transformed into a buzzing hub of paranormal activity. Jack Thorne stood amidst the organized chaos, his gaze shifting between the faces of his team as they reconvened, each bearing the weight of their eerie encounters within the decrepit walls of Blackwood Asylum.

"Alright, let's hear it," Jack said, the command in his voice drawing his team closer. "Sarah, you first."

Sarah's hands trembled ever so slightly as she handed over the audio recorder, the device still warm from her steadfast grip. The playback button clicked, and a hush fell over them. The disembodied voice that emanated from the tiny speaker was gravelly, almost guttural, repeating the ominous directive: "Get out."

Emma leaned in, her eyes alight with scholarly curiosity. "That's Class A, clear as day," she whispered, half to herself.

Mark cleared his throat, breaking the brief spell the EVP had cast. "And I recorded a temperature drop of more than twenty degrees in one of the patient rooms," he reported, tapping on the digital readout of his thermometer for emphasis. "No drafts, no windows, nothing natural about it."

Jack nodded, piecing together the puzzle with practiced care. His jaw set firmly, he felt the familiar surge of adrenaline, the thrill of the hunt. "This is good—very good," he acknowledged, looking around at his team. "We've got intelligent responses and environmental anomalies. It's more than enough to confirm we're not alone here."

"Are we thinking... residual hauntings? Or something more sentient?" Emma asked, pushing a loose strand of hair behind her ear, her mind already racing with theories.

"Could be either—or both," Jack mused. "Blackwood has a history of pain and madness. It's like a magnet for psychic energy."

"Or it's just really drafty," Mark chimed in, trying to dispel some of the heavy atmosphere with a joke. It fell flat.

"Whatever it is, it wants us to know it's here," Sarah added, wrapping her arms around herself as if to ward off the chill of her own words.

Jack looked around at his assembled team, seeing the resolve mingling with the trepidation in their expressions. He knew what they needed—a leader to cut through the fog of fear and uncertainty.

"We push deeper," he declared, his voice carrying an undercurrent of steel. "There's more to this place, more secrets waiting in the shadows. We've been invited in by whatever's here, and I intend to accept."

Emma's smile was small but fierce, a match for the glint in Jack's eye. Mark gave a resigned nod, checking the charge on his camera. Sarah took a deep breath, steadying herself against the unknown.

"Let's get our gear ready," Jack said. "We have an appointment with the past, and it's time we kept it."

With that, the team moved as one, each member mentally preparing for the descent into the asylum's belly. They checked batteries, reviewed protocols, and fortified themselves with the camaraderie that came from facing the darkness together. Jack watched them, pride swelling in his chest. This was his team, his moment. And Blackwood Asylum's secrets would soon be theirs.

Jack surveyed the map of Blackwood Asylum spread across a makeshift table, its labyrinthine corridors and rooms sprawling like the innards of some ancient beast. The pale glow from their equipment cast eerie shadows on the walls of the reception area, transforming it into a command center for the supernatural.

"Alright, we'll split up," Jack announced, his finger tracing along the faded lines of the blueprint. "Emma, you're with me. We'll take the east wing—the hotbed for sightings. Mark, Sarah—you guys head to the west wing. It's where they kept the most violent patients."

He met each of their gazes in turn. Emma’s eyes sparkled with an almost reckless curiosity, while Mark’s steady gaze betrayed a professional calm that had seen him through countless hauntings. Sarah's expression was harder to read, a mix of academic fascination and the solemnity of someone who knew too well the dangers of their trade.

"Keep your comms open," he continued. "Document everything, no matter how trivial it seems. And," Jack paused, allowing the weight of his next words to hang in the air, "be careful."

"Always am," Emma quipped with a grin, trying to cut through the tension. She began strapping a GoPro to her head, adjusting the angle with practiced ease.

"Let's hope this place is chattier than the last one," Mark said, half-joking as he meticulously checked the EMF meter, ensuring it was calibrated perfectly.

Sarah merely nodded, slipping a digital voice recorder into her vest pocket and securing an infrared camera to her tripod. Her movements were methodical, a silent testament to her experience and the gravity she placed on the task ahead.

The team worked together with the efficiency of a well-oiled machine, yet the buzz of nervous energy was undeniable. They attached lights to their bodies, casting stark beams that sliced through the surrounding darkness. Batteries were double-checked, sensors primed, and recorders set to capture any hint of the ethereal.

"Remember," Jack added, his voice now low and serious as he picked up his own night-vision camera, "this place has a history of playing with its guests. Stay sharp, stay skeptical, and if things get too intense, we regroup immediately."

"Got it, boss," Mark acknowledged, offering a quick salute that belied his jitters.

"Here goes nothing," Sarah murmured, almost to herself, but loud enough for the others to hear.

"Or everything," Jack countered, fixing his gaze on the foreboding hallway that awaited them. He felt the familiar thrill of the hunt surge within him, mixed with the primal fear of what they might find.

"Time to face the past," he said, leading the way as flashlights pierced the oppressive gloom, the beam bouncing off peeling paint and rusted fixtures—a procession of modern-day ghost hunters marching into the mouth of madness.

Jack adjusted the strap of his camera across his chest, casting a final reassuring glance at his team. Emma's eyes were wide with an unquenchable curiosity that had drawn her to this profession in the first place, her fingers drumming excitedly on her thigh. Mark's face was etched with lines of concentration, a silent promise to himself to be braver than his fears. Sarah held her audio recorder like a talisman, the recent chilling encounter still fresh in her mind.

"Stay in contact," Jack instructed firmly, his voice carrying through the hollow silence of the asylum's reception area. "Radio check every fifteen minutes. No heroics. We're here to document, not provoke."

"Copy that," they all murmured in unison, their voices a symphony of resolve and trepidation.

With a firm nod from Jack, the pairs turned away from the safety of their makeshift base camp. The air seemed to grow colder with each step they took toward their respective areas of investigation. The soft sound of their movements—the shuffling of boots against debris-strewn floors, the whisper of fabric brushing against walls—began to dissipate as distance grew between them.

Jack and Emma headed towards the east wing, once notorious for its experimental treatments. Their tools cast a clinical light onto the decaying grandeur of the asylum, revealing nothing but the echoes of a grim past. Meanwhile, Mark and Sarah ventured into the west wing, where rumors of ghostly apparitions had lingered for decades.

The darkness seemed to swallow them whole, leaving behind only the faintest echo of their departure. In the distance, doors creaked on rusted hinges, and somewhere in the bowels of the forsaken building, the immutable silence was broken by an inexplicable thud—a reminder that Blackwood Asylum still held its secrets close.

As the teams disappeared from each other's sight, the oppressive atmosphere pressed in, a tangible force that threatened to smother their resolve. Yet they moved forward, drawn by the allure of the unknown and the insatiable human desire to understand the shadows that lurked just beyond the reach of their flashlights.

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Mara Edwards

I have published four or five new stories that are all challenge entries! Would love for you to read!

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